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[新考法·表格提示]随着科技的发展，未来的职业也将改变。作为新时代的追梦人，你如何定义属于自己的理想职业？请你结合表格中的信息，以“My dream job”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿介绍自己将来的理想职业。
要求：1. 短文须包含表格中的关键信息，请适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数 80 左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My dream job
Hello, everyone! I'm happy that I can share my dream job with all of you here.
That's all. Thank you.
[新考法·表格提示]随着科技的发展，未来的职业也将改变。作为新时代的追梦人，你如何定义属于自己的理想职业？请你结合表格中的信息，以“My dream job”为题，写一篇英文演讲稿介绍自己将来的理想职业。
要求：1. 短文须包含表格中的关键信息，请适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数 80 左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My dream job
Hello, everyone! I'm happy that I can share my dream job with all of you here.
I want to be a software engineer. I'm really interested in programming. When I see how software can make people's lives more convenient, I'm deeply attracted. Also, the ever - changing field of software development always has something new to explore, which greatly excites me.
To achieve this dream, I work hard at school, especially in maths and computer science. In the future, I'll try my best to get into a famous university to learn more professional knowledge. I believe my efforts will pay off.
To achieve this dream, I work hard at school, especially in maths and computer science. In the future, I'll try my best to get into a famous university to learn more professional knowledge. I believe my efforts will pay off.
That's all. Thank you.
答案
【实战演练】
My dream job
Hello, everyone! I'm happy that I can share my dream job with all of you here.
I want to be a software engineer. I'm really interested in programming. When I see how software can make people's lives more convenient, I'm deeply attracted. Also, the ever - changing field of software development always has something new to explore, which greatly excites me.
To achieve this dream, I work hard at school, especially in maths and computer science. In the future, I'll try my best to get into a famous university to learn more professional knowledge. I believe my efforts will pay off.
That's all. Thank you.
My dream job
Hello, everyone! I'm happy that I can share my dream job with all of you here.
I want to be a software engineer. I'm really interested in programming. When I see how software can make people's lives more convenient, I'm deeply attracted. Also, the ever - changing field of software development always has something new to explore, which greatly excites me.
To achieve this dream, I work hard at school, especially in maths and computer science. In the future, I'll try my best to get into a famous university to learn more professional knowledge. I believe my efforts will pay off.
That's all. Thank you.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“My dream job”为题写英文演讲稿，需结合表格中What（理想职业）、Why（至少两点原因）、How（至少两点实现方法）的关键信息，词数80左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 确定具体的理想职业；2. 对应表格Why部分，写出两点合理原因；3. 对应表格How部分，写出两点实现方法；4. 组织语言，确保语句连贯，符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 确定理想职业：选择软件工程师，对应表格What部分；
2. 写原因：围绕对编程的兴趣，结合软件让生活便利、软件开发领域有新内容可探索两点，对应表格Why部分；
3. 写实现方法：说明在校努力学习数学和计算机，未来要考入知名大学学习专业知识，对应表格How部分；
4. 整合内容，调整语句，使行文连贯，控制词数在80左右，完成写作。
【答案】
My dream job
Hello, everyone! I'm happy that I can share my dream job with all of you here.
I want to be a software engineer. I'm really interested in programming. When I see how software can make people's lives more convenient, I'm deeply attracted. Also, the ever-changing field of software development always has something new to explore, which greatly excites me.
To achieve this dream, I work hard at school, especially in maths and computer science. In the future, I'll try my best to get into a famous university to learn more professional knowledge. I believe my efforts will pay off.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，覆盖表格中What、Why、How的关键信息，原因和实现方法各两点，内容具体，行文连贯，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的演讲稿范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：以“My dream job”为题写英文演讲稿，需结合表格中What（理想职业）、Why（至少两点原因）、How（至少两点实现方法）的关键信息，词数80左右，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 确定具体的理想职业；2. 对应表格Why部分，写出两点合理原因；3. 对应表格How部分，写出两点实现方法；4. 组织语言，确保语句连贯，符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 确定理想职业：选择软件工程师，对应表格What部分；
2. 写原因：围绕对编程的兴趣，结合软件让生活便利、软件开发领域有新内容可探索两点，对应表格Why部分；
3. 写实现方法：说明在校努力学习数学和计算机，未来要考入知名大学学习专业知识，对应表格How部分；
4. 整合内容，调整语句，使行文连贯，控制词数在80左右，完成写作。
【答案】
My dream job
Hello, everyone! I'm happy that I can share my dream job with all of you here.
I want to be a software engineer. I'm really interested in programming. When I see how software can make people's lives more convenient, I'm deeply attracted. Also, the ever-changing field of software development always has something new to explore, which greatly excites me.
To achieve this dream, I work hard at school, especially in maths and computer science. In the future, I'll try my best to get into a famous university to learn more professional knowledge. I believe my efforts will pay off.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语词汇运用、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，覆盖表格中What、Why、How的关键信息，原因和实现方法各两点，内容具体，行文连贯，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的演讲稿范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
