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学校正开展"我运动我健康"主题周活动，旨在鼓励同学们踊跃参加体育锻炼，增强健康意识。为此，校报面向全校同学开展"我最喜爱的体育运动"征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文向校报投稿，并在文中号召大家积极参加体育运动。内容包括：
1.最喜欢乒乓球运动；
2.强身健体，对眼睛有益；
3.减少压力，放松心情；
4.面对困难，决不放弃。
注意：
1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.根据提示要点进行写作，并适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
参考词汇：stress压力,benefit益处
My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named
"Sports and Health Week". I've got great
benefits from sports. So I'd like to share
my favourite sport here.
学校正开展"我运动我健康"主题周活动，旨在鼓励同学们踊跃参加体育锻炼，增强健康意识。为此，校报面向全校同学开展"我最喜爱的体育运动"征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文向校报投稿，并在文中号召大家积极参加体育运动。内容包括：
1.最喜欢乒乓球运动；
2.强身健体，对眼睛有益；
3.减少压力，放松心情；
4.面对困难，决不放弃。
注意：
1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.根据提示要点进行写作，并适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
参考词汇：stress压力,benefit益处
My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named
"Sports and Health Week". I've got great
benefits from sports. So I'd like to share
my favourite sport here.
答案
【高分范文】
My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named "Sports
and Health Week". I've got great benefits from
sports. So I'd like to share my favourite sport here.
My favourite sport is ping-pong. It's fun to play
with my friends together. Playing ping-pong makes
me strong and healthy. And it is good for my eyes. It
also helps me reduce my daily stress and relax myself.
What's more, I'm brave enough through playing this
game, so I never give up when I face difficulties.
Sports give us so many benefits. I hope all of us
can take an active part in sports. Let's enjoy the real
fun of sports.
My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named "Sports
and Health Week". I've got great benefits from
sports. So I'd like to share my favourite sport here.
My favourite sport is ping-pong. It's fun to play
with my friends together. Playing ping-pong makes
me strong and healthy. And it is good for my eyes. It
also helps me reduce my daily stress and relax myself.
What's more, I'm brave enough through playing this
game, so I never give up when I face difficulties.
Sports give us so many benefits. I hope all of us
can take an active part in sports. Let's enjoy the real
fun of sports.
解析
【分析】首先承接已给开头，明确点明最喜欢的运动是乒乓球；接着依次对应题目要求的四个要点展开：说明乒乓球能强身健体且对眼睛有益，能帮助减压放松，还能让人面对困难不放弃；最后发出号召，呼应主题，完成征文写作，注意词数控制在80左右，适当添加细节（如和朋友一起玩）让内容更生动，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，直接说明最喜欢的运动是乒乓球；2. 阐述乒乓球的益处：强身健体、对眼睛有好处；3. 说明乒乓球能帮助减轻压力、放松心情；4. 点明在打乒乓球的过程中学会面对困难不放弃；5. 发出号召，鼓励大家积极参加体育运动，呼应征文主题。写作时使用参考词汇，语言流畅，覆盖所有要点，适当发挥细节，符合词数要求。
【答案】My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named "Sports and Health Week". I've got great benefits from sports. So I'd like to share my favourite sport here.
My favourite sport is ping-pong. It's fun to play with my friends together. Playing ping-pong makes me strong and healthy. And it is good for my eyes. It also helps me reduce my daily stress and relax myself. What's more, I'm brave enough through playing this game, so I never give up when I face difficulties. Sports give us so many benefits. I hope all of us can take an active part in sports. Let's enjoy the real fun of sports.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语要点表达、运动类词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，衔接自然流畅，语言简洁生动，符合词数要求，添加了合理细节让内容更丰富，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，直接说明最喜欢的运动是乒乓球；2. 阐述乒乓球的益处：强身健体、对眼睛有好处；3. 说明乒乓球能帮助减轻压力、放松心情；4. 点明在打乒乓球的过程中学会面对困难不放弃；5. 发出号召，鼓励大家积极参加体育运动，呼应征文主题。写作时使用参考词汇，语言流畅，覆盖所有要点，适当发挥细节，符合词数要求。
【答案】My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named "Sports and Health Week". I've got great benefits from sports. So I'd like to share my favourite sport here.
My favourite sport is ping-pong. It's fun to play with my friends together. Playing ping-pong makes me strong and healthy. And it is good for my eyes. It also helps me reduce my daily stress and relax myself. What's more, I'm brave enough through playing this game, so I never give up when I face difficulties. Sports give us so many benefits. I hope all of us can take an active part in sports. Let's enjoy the real fun of sports.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语要点表达、运动类词汇运用
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，衔接自然流畅，语言简洁生动，符合词数要求，添加了合理细节让内容更丰富，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习模仿。
【难度系数】0.5
