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榜样不只是名人，也可以是我们身边的人。假设你是李华，你校的英语社团举办了一场以“The person I admire the most”为题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下写作要点写一份词数100左右的演讲稿。
写作要点：
1. Who is the person you admire the most?
2. Why do you admire him/her?
3. What can you learn from him/her?
The person I admire the most
榜样不只是名人，也可以是我们身边的人。假设你是李华，你校的英语社团举办了一场以“The person I admire the most”为题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下写作要点写一份词数100左右的演讲稿。
写作要点：
1. Who is the person you admire the most?
2. Why do you admire him/her?
3. What can you learn from him/her?
The person I admire the most
Each of us has the person that inspires us in our heart. For me, the person I admire the most is my English teacher. She has a deep influence on me and changes my life.
My English teacher is short but has a warm heart. Whenever we have questions, no matter how simple, she explains them clearly with patience. For example, when I had trouble learning grammar, she led me to understand it step by step. Moreover, she is good at teaching. In her class, she makes English learning lively and interesting. She uses many teaching methods, like showing English movies. This way, we not only learn the language but also get a deeper understanding of different cultures.
In a word, I truly admire my English teacher. Her patience and spirit inspire me to be a better person, and I hope to be like her in the future.
答案
The person I admire the most
Each of us has the person that inspires us in our heart. For me, the person I admire the most is my English teacher. She has a deep influence on me and changes my life.
My English teacher is short but has a warm heart. Whenever we have questions, no matter how simple, she explains them clearly with patience. For example, when I had trouble learning grammar, she led me to understand it step by step. Moreover, she is good at teaching. In her class, she makes English learning lively and interesting. She uses many teaching methods, like showing English movies. This way, we not only learn the language but also get a deeper understanding of different cultures.
In a word, I truly admire my English teacher. Her patience and spirit inspire me to be a better person, and I hope to be like her in the future.
Each of us has the person that inspires us in our heart. For me, the person I admire the most is my English teacher. She has a deep influence on me and changes my life.
My English teacher is short but has a warm heart. Whenever we have questions, no matter how simple, she explains them clearly with patience. For example, when I had trouble learning grammar, she led me to understand it step by step. Moreover, she is good at teaching. In her class, she makes English learning lively and interesting. She uses many teaching methods, like showing English movies. This way, we not only learn the language but also get a deeper understanding of different cultures.
In a word, I truly admire my English teacher. Her patience and spirit inspire me to be a better person, and I hope to be like her in the future.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是英语社团演讲比赛的演讲稿，主题为“The person I admire the most”，要求选取身边的人作为榜样（不能是名人），需覆盖三个写作要点：1. 明确最敬佩的人是谁；2. 说明敬佩的原因；3. 阐述从他/她身上学到的内容。解题思路：首先确定写作对象为身边的英语老师，符合“身边榜样”的要求；其次开头用引入句点明敬佩的人，主体部分分两点说明敬佩的原因（耐心辅导学生、教学方法生动有趣），并加入具体事例（辅导语法、用英语电影教学）让内容更真实；最后总结学到的品质，表达对榜样的向往，确保结构完整、要点齐全，符合演讲的语气和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“Each of us has the person that inspires us in our heart.”引入，点明最敬佩的人是英语老师，呼应主题；
2. 主体：分两点阐述敬佩原因：①英语老师有耐心，会清晰解答问题，举例辅导语法的经历；②教学方法生动，用英语电影让英语学习有趣，还能了解不同文化；
3. 结尾：总结敬佩的原因，点明从老师身上学到耐心等品质，表达未来想成为这样的人的愿望，完成所有写作要点，符合演讲稿的表达风格。
【答案】
The person I admire the most
Each of us has the person that inspires us in our heart. For me, the person I admire the most is my English teacher. She has a deep influence on me and changes my life.
My English teacher is short but has a warm heart. Whenever we have questions, no matter how simple, she explains them clearly with patience. For example, when I had trouble learning grammar, she led me to understand it step by step. Moreover, she is good at teaching. In her class, she makes English learning lively and interesting. She uses many teaching methods, like showing English movies. This way, we not only learn the language but also get a deeper understanding of different cultures.
In a word, I truly admire my English teacher. Her patience and spirit inspire me to be a better person, and I hope to be like her in the future.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（演讲稿）、人物介绍写作、要点整合写作
【点评】
这篇演讲稿紧扣题目要求，选取身边的英语老师作为榜样，符合“榜样不只是名人”的设定，结构清晰，完整覆盖了三个写作要点，有具体事例支撑，语言流畅自然，适合演讲场景，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本次写作任务是英语社团演讲比赛的演讲稿，主题为“The person I admire the most”，要求选取身边的人作为榜样（不能是名人），需覆盖三个写作要点：1. 明确最敬佩的人是谁；2. 说明敬佩的原因；3. 阐述从他/她身上学到的内容。解题思路：首先确定写作对象为身边的英语老师，符合“身边榜样”的要求；其次开头用引入句点明敬佩的人，主体部分分两点说明敬佩的原因（耐心辅导学生、教学方法生动有趣），并加入具体事例（辅导语法、用英语电影教学）让内容更真实；最后总结学到的品质，表达对榜样的向往，确保结构完整、要点齐全，符合演讲的语气和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“Each of us has the person that inspires us in our heart.”引入，点明最敬佩的人是英语老师，呼应主题；
2. 主体：分两点阐述敬佩原因：①英语老师有耐心，会清晰解答问题，举例辅导语法的经历；②教学方法生动，用英语电影让英语学习有趣，还能了解不同文化；
3. 结尾：总结敬佩的原因，点明从老师身上学到耐心等品质，表达未来想成为这样的人的愿望，完成所有写作要点，符合演讲稿的表达风格。
【答案】
The person I admire the most
Each of us has the person that inspires us in our heart. For me, the person I admire the most is my English teacher. She has a deep influence on me and changes my life.
My English teacher is short but has a warm heart. Whenever we have questions, no matter how simple, she explains them clearly with patience. For example, when I had trouble learning grammar, she led me to understand it step by step. Moreover, she is good at teaching. In her class, she makes English learning lively and interesting. She uses many teaching methods, like showing English movies. This way, we not only learn the language but also get a deeper understanding of different cultures.
In a word, I truly admire my English teacher. Her patience and spirit inspire me to be a better person, and I hope to be like her in the future.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（演讲稿）、人物介绍写作、要点整合写作
【点评】
这篇演讲稿紧扣题目要求，选取身边的英语老师作为榜样，符合“榜样不只是名人”的设定，结构清晰，完整覆盖了三个写作要点，有具体事例支撑，语言流畅自然，适合演讲场景，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
