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六、书面表达。
假设你是李华，电影《哪吒2》导演“饺子”（杨宇）的故事让你深受鼓舞。请以“Never give up”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
参考词汇：teach himself animation(自学动画)，persistence(n. 坚持)
注意:1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Never give up
Yang Yu, known as “Jiaozi”, is the creator of Ne Zha 2. His story touches my heart deeply.
假设你是李华，电影《哪吒2》导演“饺子”（杨宇）的故事让你深受鼓舞。请以“Never give up”为题写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
参考词汇：teach himself animation(自学动画)，persistence(n. 坚持)
注意:1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Never give up
Yang Yu, known as “Jiaozi”, is the creator of Ne Zha 2. His story touches my heart deeply.
答案
One possible version:
Never give up
Yang Yu, known as "Jiaozi", is the creator of Ne Zha 2. His story touches my heart deeply. Yang taught himself animation and spent five years creating the amazing film. His persistence finally led to success through countless challenges.
Yang's experience teaches me two valuable lessons. First, we should stick to our dreams even when facing difficulties. Second, innovation is key to breaking through difficulties. His creative storytelling ways made Ne Zha 2 stand out.
Last year, I had difficulty in English writing. Inspired by Yang, I kept practising daily instead of giving up. Through continued efforts, I improved my writing greatly. Yang's story shows that success belongs to those who never give up.
Never give up
Yang Yu, known as "Jiaozi", is the creator of Ne Zha 2. His story touches my heart deeply. Yang taught himself animation and spent five years creating the amazing film. His persistence finally led to success through countless challenges.
Yang's experience teaches me two valuable lessons. First, we should stick to our dreams even when facing difficulties. Second, innovation is key to breaking through difficulties. His creative storytelling ways made Ne Zha 2 stand out.
Last year, I had difficulty in English writing. Inspired by Yang, I kept practising daily instead of giving up. Through continued efforts, I improved my writing greatly. Yang's story shows that success belongs to those who never give up.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“Never give up”为题，结合饺子（杨宇）的故事完成短文。解题思路：首先承接已给开头，介绍饺子自学动画、坚持五年创作并成功的事迹；接着阐述个人感悟，点明坚持梦想、勇于创新的重要性；最后结合自身经历（如英语写作的困难与坚持后的进步），紧扣“永不放弃”的主题，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求，不出现真实人名校名地名。
【解析】
开头已给出，后续内容依次为：1. 介绍饺子的事迹：Yang taught himself animation and spent five years creating the amazing film. His persistence finally led to success through countless challenges. 2. 个人感悟：Yang's experience teaches me two valuable lessons. First, we should stick to our dreams even when facing difficulties. Second, innovation is key to breaking through difficulties. His creative storytelling ways made Ne Zha 2 stand out. 3. 自身经历：Last year, I had difficulty in English writing. Inspired by Yang, I kept practising daily instead of giving up. Through continued efforts, I improved my writing greatly. 4. 点题：Yang's story shows that success belongs to those who never give up.
【答案】
One possible version:
Never give up
Yang Yu, known as "Jiaozi", is the creator of Ne Zha 2. His story touches my heart deeply. Yang taught himself animation and spent five years creating the amazing film. His persistence finally led to success through countless challenges.
Yang's experience teaches me two valuable lessons. First, we should stick to our dreams even when facing difficulties. Second, innovation is key to breaking through difficulties. His creative storytelling ways made Ne Zha 2 stand out.
Last year, I had difficulty in English writing. Inspired by Yang, I kept practising daily instead of giving up. Through continued efforts, I improved my writing greatly. Yang's story shows that success belongs to those who never give up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题围绕“永不放弃”主题，结合真实人物事迹，要求学生整合事例、表达感悟并联系自身，既考查语言运用能力，又传递积极价值观，是典型的初中英语书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“Never give up”为题，结合饺子（杨宇）的故事完成短文。解题思路：首先承接已给开头，介绍饺子自学动画、坚持五年创作并成功的事迹；接着阐述个人感悟，点明坚持梦想、勇于创新的重要性；最后结合自身经历（如英语写作的困难与坚持后的进步），紧扣“永不放弃”的主题，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求，不出现真实人名校名地名。
【解析】
开头已给出，后续内容依次为：1. 介绍饺子的事迹：Yang taught himself animation and spent five years creating the amazing film. His persistence finally led to success through countless challenges. 2. 个人感悟：Yang's experience teaches me two valuable lessons. First, we should stick to our dreams even when facing difficulties. Second, innovation is key to breaking through difficulties. His creative storytelling ways made Ne Zha 2 stand out. 3. 自身经历：Last year, I had difficulty in English writing. Inspired by Yang, I kept practising daily instead of giving up. Through continued efforts, I improved my writing greatly. 4. 点题：Yang's story shows that success belongs to those who never give up.
【答案】
One possible version:
Never give up
Yang Yu, known as "Jiaozi", is the creator of Ne Zha 2. His story touches my heart deeply. Yang taught himself animation and spent five years creating the amazing film. His persistence finally led to success through countless challenges.
Yang's experience teaches me two valuable lessons. First, we should stick to our dreams even when facing difficulties. Second, innovation is key to breaking through difficulties. His creative storytelling ways made Ne Zha 2 stand out.
Last year, I had difficulty in English writing. Inspired by Yang, I kept practising daily instead of giving up. Through continued efforts, I improved my writing greatly. Yang's story shows that success belongs to those who never give up.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、记叙文写作
【点评】
本题围绕“永不放弃”主题，结合真实人物事迹，要求学生整合事例、表达感悟并联系自身，既考查语言运用能力，又传递积极价值观，是典型的初中英语书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
