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每个国家都有自己的风俗习惯,请你用英文介绍一下自己国家的风俗习惯。要求:80词左右。内容应包括:
1. Greet people when you meet for the first time.
2. Table manners.
3. Rules in people's houses.
Customs in China
Each country has its own customs. In China,
每个国家都有自己的风俗习惯,请你用英文介绍一下自己国家的风俗习惯。要求:80词左右。内容应包括:
1. Greet people when you meet for the first time.
2. Table manners.
3. Rules in people's houses.
Customs in China
Each country has its own customs. In China,
we also
have our own customs.
When we meet people for the first time, we usually
shake hands instead of kissing or bowing. We often use
chopsticks to eat food. When we are at the dinner table,
we shouldn't talk with the mouth full. And it's polite to
wait for the old to eat first. It's rude to point at others
with your chopsticks. We'd better finish all the food in
our bowls because it's impolite to waste food. When we
visit our friends, we'd better take a small gift. We should
knock at the door before going into their rooms and we
must be polite in other people's homes.
When in China, do as Chinese do.
have our own customs.
When we meet people for the first time, we usually
shake hands instead of kissing or bowing. We often use
chopsticks to eat food. When we are at the dinner table,
we shouldn't talk with the mouth full. And it's polite to
wait for the old to eat first. It's rude to point at others
with your chopsticks. We'd better finish all the food in
our bowls because it's impolite to waste food. When we
visit our friends, we'd better take a small gift. We should
knock at the door before going into their rooms and we
must be polite in other people's homes.
When in China, do as Chinese do.
答案
One possible version:
Customs in China
Each country has its own customs. In China, we also
have our own customs.
When we meet people for the first time, we usually
shake hands instead of kissing or bowing. We often use
chopsticks to eat food. When we are at the dinner table,
we shouldn't talk with the mouth full. And it's polite to
wait for the old to eat first. It's rude to point at others
with your chopsticks. We'd better finish all the food in
our bowls because it's impolite to waste food. When we
visit our friends, we'd better take a small gift. We should
knock at the door before going into their rooms and we
must be polite in other people's homes.
When in China, do as Chinese do.
Customs in China
Each country has its own customs. In China, we also
have our own customs.
When we meet people for the first time, we usually
shake hands instead of kissing or bowing. We often use
chopsticks to eat food. When we are at the dinner table,
we shouldn't talk with the mouth full. And it's polite to
wait for the old to eat first. It's rude to point at others
with your chopsticks. We'd better finish all the food in
our bowls because it's impolite to waste food. When we
visit our friends, we'd better take a small gift. We should
knock at the door before going into their rooms and we
must be polite in other people's homes.
When in China, do as Chinese do.
解析
【分析】
首先第一步先审题，明确写作核心主题是介绍中国的风俗习惯，题干明确给出三个必须涵盖的内容要点，不能遗漏。接下来梳理写作逻辑：先承接题目给出的开头句，总述中国有自身的特色风俗，之后按照题干给出的三个要点顺序依次展开：先介绍初次见面的问候礼仪，再介绍典型的中国餐桌礼仪，最后说明去他人家中做客需要遵守的规则，最后可以用“入乡随俗”的相关谚语收尾呼应主题，写作过程中注意使用准确的常用词汇，保证语句通顺，控制总词数符合要求，避免出现基础语法错误。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：承接题干给出的开头句，补充总起句we also have our own customs，自然引出后续对各类风俗的介绍。
2. 要点1落实：介绍初次见面的问候方式，说明中国人初次见面通常行握手礼，区别于部分国家的亲吻、鞠躬礼仪，符合实际情况。
3. 要点2落实：围绕餐桌礼仪展开，依次介绍中国人用筷子就餐、不可满嘴食物交谈、要等长辈先动筷、不能用筷子指向他人、尽量吃完碗中食物不浪费粮食等典型的中国餐桌礼仪，内容充实合理。
4. 要点3落实：介绍去他人家中的规则，说明做客时最好携带小礼物、进房间前要先敲门、言行举止要礼貌，完全覆盖题干要求的第三个要点。
5. 收尾总结：用经典谚语"When in China, do as Chinese do."收尾，呼应主题，全文逻辑连贯，表达地道，符合写作要求。
【答案】
Customs in China
Each country has its own customs. In China, we also have our own customs.
When we meet people for the first time, we usually shake hands instead of kissing or bowing. We often use chopsticks to eat food. When we are at the dinner table, we shouldn't talk with the mouth full. And it's polite to wait for the old to eat first. It's rude to point at others with your chopsticks. We'd better finish all the food in our bowls because it's impolite to waste food. When we visit our friends, we'd better take a small gift. We should knock at the door before going into their rooms and we must be polite in other people's homes.
When in China, do as Chinese do.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；中国传统习俗；情景交际
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个内容要点，内容完全贴合中国真实的日常风俗习惯，行文逻辑清晰，从见面礼仪到餐桌礼仪再到做客规则层层递进，收尾用经典谚语升华主题，语言表达地道流畅，没有语法错误，词数符合要求，是一篇非常规范的同主题参考范文。学生写作时可以优先保证所有题干要求的要点都完整呈现，再补充合理的细节内容，避免遗漏得分点。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先第一步先审题，明确写作核心主题是介绍中国的风俗习惯，题干明确给出三个必须涵盖的内容要点，不能遗漏。接下来梳理写作逻辑：先承接题目给出的开头句，总述中国有自身的特色风俗，之后按照题干给出的三个要点顺序依次展开：先介绍初次见面的问候礼仪，再介绍典型的中国餐桌礼仪，最后说明去他人家中做客需要遵守的规则，最后可以用“入乡随俗”的相关谚语收尾呼应主题，写作过程中注意使用准确的常用词汇，保证语句通顺，控制总词数符合要求，避免出现基础语法错误。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：承接题干给出的开头句，补充总起句we also have our own customs，自然引出后续对各类风俗的介绍。
2. 要点1落实：介绍初次见面的问候方式，说明中国人初次见面通常行握手礼，区别于部分国家的亲吻、鞠躬礼仪，符合实际情况。
3. 要点2落实：围绕餐桌礼仪展开，依次介绍中国人用筷子就餐、不可满嘴食物交谈、要等长辈先动筷、不能用筷子指向他人、尽量吃完碗中食物不浪费粮食等典型的中国餐桌礼仪，内容充实合理。
4. 要点3落实：介绍去他人家中的规则，说明做客时最好携带小礼物、进房间前要先敲门、言行举止要礼貌，完全覆盖题干要求的第三个要点。
5. 收尾总结：用经典谚语"When in China, do as Chinese do."收尾，呼应主题，全文逻辑连贯，表达地道，符合写作要求。
【答案】
Customs in China
Each country has its own customs. In China, we also have our own customs.
When we meet people for the first time, we usually shake hands instead of kissing or bowing. We often use chopsticks to eat food. When we are at the dinner table, we shouldn't talk with the mouth full. And it's polite to wait for the old to eat first. It's rude to point at others with your chopsticks. We'd better finish all the food in our bowls because it's impolite to waste food. When we visit our friends, we'd better take a small gift. We should knock at the door before going into their rooms and we must be polite in other people's homes.
When in China, do as Chinese do.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；中国传统习俗；情景交际
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个内容要点，内容完全贴合中国真实的日常风俗习惯，行文逻辑清晰，从见面礼仪到餐桌礼仪再到做客规则层层递进，收尾用经典谚语升华主题，语言表达地道流畅，没有语法错误，词数符合要求，是一篇非常规范的同主题参考范文。学生写作时可以优先保证所有题干要求的要点都完整呈现，再补充合理的细节内容，避免遗漏得分点。
【难度系数】
0.7
