Ⅸ.Writing practice.
去年,张华和他的同学们度过了一个愉快的暑假。下面是一些相关的图片,请根据这些图片写一篇小短文。不少于五句话。

去年,张华和他的同学们度过了一个愉快的暑假。下面是一些相关的图片,请根据这些图片写一篇小短文。不少于五句话。
Last summer holiday, Zhang Hua and his classmates were very happy. They went camping in a nature park. They went fishing and swimming there. They took some beautiful pictures. They also ate some delicious food. How happy they were!
答案
Ⅸ. Last summer holiday, Zhang Hua and his classmates were very
happy. They went camping in a nature park. They went fishing and
swimming there. They took some beautiful pictures. They also ate some
delicious food. How happy they were!
happy. They went camping in a nature park. They went fishing and
swimming there. They took some beautiful pictures. They also ate some
delicious food. How happy they were!
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题,先明确核心要求:围绕去年张华和同学们的愉快暑假,结合给出的5张图片内容写作,不少于5句话。第一步先确定时态,时间是去年暑假,属于过去的时间,全文要使用一般过去时。第二步逐一提取图片信息:第一张图是露营,第二张是钓鱼,第三张是游泳,第四张是拍照,第五张是享用美食。第三步搭建行文逻辑:开头先总述事件背景和整体感受,中间依次介绍大家开展的各项活动,最后收尾抒发愉悦的心情,把所有图片信息自然串联,保证语句通顺、符合句数要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明时间、人物和整体状态:用一般过去时说明去年暑假张华和同学们过得很开心,作为总起。
2. 依次对应图片描述活动:先写他们去自然公园露营,接着写在那里钓鱼、游泳,然后写他们拍了很多好看的照片,之后写他们还吃了美味的食物,所有图片的信息都完整覆盖。
3. 最后用感叹句收尾,强化整体的开心氛围,全文语句连贯,满足不少于5句话的要求,语法使用正确。
完整参考内容如下:
Last summer holiday, Zhang Hua and his classmates were very happy. They went camping in a nature park. They went fishing and swimming there. They took some beautiful pictures. They also ate some delicious food. How happy they were!
【答案】
Last summer holiday, Zhang Hua and his classmates were very happy. They went camping in a nature park. They went fishing and swimming there. They took some beautiful pictures. They also ate some delicious food. How happy they were!
【知识点】
1. 一般过去时应用
2. 户外活动短语
3. 记叙文写作
【点评】
本题属于基础看图写作题,给出的图片提示非常明确,学生只需要准确提取图中的户外活动信息,正确使用动词的过去式形式,将各项活动按逻辑串联起来,就可以轻松完成写作,能够有效锻炼学生用英语描述过往假期经历的表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题,先明确核心要求:围绕去年张华和同学们的愉快暑假,结合给出的5张图片内容写作,不少于5句话。第一步先确定时态,时间是去年暑假,属于过去的时间,全文要使用一般过去时。第二步逐一提取图片信息:第一张图是露营,第二张是钓鱼,第三张是游泳,第四张是拍照,第五张是享用美食。第三步搭建行文逻辑:开头先总述事件背景和整体感受,中间依次介绍大家开展的各项活动,最后收尾抒发愉悦的心情,把所有图片信息自然串联,保证语句通顺、符合句数要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明时间、人物和整体状态:用一般过去时说明去年暑假张华和同学们过得很开心,作为总起。
2. 依次对应图片描述活动:先写他们去自然公园露营,接着写在那里钓鱼、游泳,然后写他们拍了很多好看的照片,之后写他们还吃了美味的食物,所有图片的信息都完整覆盖。
3. 最后用感叹句收尾,强化整体的开心氛围,全文语句连贯,满足不少于5句话的要求,语法使用正确。
完整参考内容如下:
Last summer holiday, Zhang Hua and his classmates were very happy. They went camping in a nature park. They went fishing and swimming there. They took some beautiful pictures. They also ate some delicious food. How happy they were!
【答案】
Last summer holiday, Zhang Hua and his classmates were very happy. They went camping in a nature park. They went fishing and swimming there. They took some beautiful pictures. They also ate some delicious food. How happy they were!
【知识点】
1. 一般过去时应用
2. 户外活动短语
3. 记叙文写作
【点评】
本题属于基础看图写作题,给出的图片提示非常明确,学生只需要准确提取图中的户外活动信息,正确使用动词的过去式形式,将各项活动按逻辑串联起来,就可以轻松完成写作,能够有效锻炼学生用英语描述过往假期经历的表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
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