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四、书面表达。(30 分)
丰富多彩的初中生活不仅让我们增长了知识,还让我们的眼界更加开阔。身边的同学
们也有了不同的业余爱好。请你根据以下提示和要求写一篇短文,介绍你的业余爱好。
要点提示:1. 你的业余爱好是什么?
2. 你选择这项爱好的原因是什么?
3. 在进行这项活动的过程中,你遇到过什么挑战? 又是如何战胜这些挑战的?
4. 你从这项爱好中有哪些感悟?
要求:
1. 100 词左右;
2. 语言通顺,要点齐全。
丰富多彩的初中生活不仅让我们增长了知识,还让我们的眼界更加开阔。身边的同学
们也有了不同的业余爱好。请你根据以下提示和要求写一篇短文,介绍你的业余爱好。
要点提示:1. 你的业余爱好是什么?
2. 你选择这项爱好的原因是什么?
3. 在进行这项活动的过程中,你遇到过什么挑战? 又是如何战胜这些挑战的?
4. 你从这项爱好中有哪些感悟?
要求:
1. 100 词左右;
2. 语言通顺,要点齐全。
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in Grade 8. As a middle school student, my life is colourful. I learn a lot at school, and there are also many communities in our school. We can create and develop our hobbies there. I like playing the Chinese flute, so I joined a club at school. But I found that when I need to practise and get better, it didn't feel so fun at first. I knew little about it before I joined the club, but because I wanted to play it well, I practised a lot in my spare time. When I finally stood on the stage of the New Year's show, I and won praise from the whole school, I was proud of myself. All the effort I put into it became meaningful. As long as you want to get good at something, you need to put your heart into it, and the key is to take action and never give up so easily.
答案
One possible version: I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in Grade 8. As a middle school student, my life is colourful. I learn a lot at school, and there are also many communities in our school. We can create and develop our hobbies there. I like playing the Chinese flute, so I joined a club at school. But I found that when I need to practise and get better, it didn't feel so fun at first. I knew little about it before I joined the club, but because I wanted to play it well, I practised a lot in my spare time. When I finally stood on the stage of the New Year's show, I and won praise from the whole school, I was proud of myself. All the effort I put into it became meaningful. As long as you want to get good at something, you need to put your heart into it, and the key is to take action and never give up so easily.
解析
【分析】
这道题是初中英语爱好主题的书面表达，解题时首先要明确题干给出的4个必写要点，避免漏点丢分。首先第一步先铺垫初中多彩校园生活的背景，自然引出自己的业余爱好是什么；第二步交代选择这项爱好的原因，结合校园社团这类学生熟悉的场景会更真实；第三步要写出具体遇到的实际挑战，再对应写出自己克服挑战的具体做法，内容要贴合学生日常；最后收尾写出自己从爱好中得到的感悟，全程控制总词数在100词左右，保证语言通顺、语法准确即可。
【解析】
写作可按照四步走的规范完成：
1. 开篇引入：先介绍自己的身份，点明初中生活丰富多彩，学校有各类社团可以培养爱好，顺势点明自己的爱好是吹奏竹笛，加入了对应的学校社团。
2. 说明选择原因：本身对中国竹笛很感兴趣，学校的相关社团可以给自己提供学习和展示的平台。
3. 叙述挑战与解决过程：刚加入社团时对竹笛相关技巧完全不了解，初期反复练习的过程十分枯燥，进步很慢；之后自己利用所有课余时间反复练习气息、指法，不断打磨演奏技巧。
4. 收尾谈感悟：最终自己登上了新年演出的舞台，获得了全校师生的好评，由此得出感悟：想要做好一件事就要全心投入，付诸行动、不轻言放弃就会有收获。
写作过程中注意衔接语句，保证逻辑连贯，不要出现语法错误，控制总词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version: I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in Grade 8. As a middle school student, my life is colourful. I learn a lot at school, and there are also many communities in our school. We can create and develop our hobbies there. I like playing the Chinese flute, so I joined a club at school. But I found that when I need to practise and get better, it didn't feel so fun at first. I knew little about it before I joined the club, but because I wanted to play it well, I practised a lot in my spare time. When I finally stood on the stage of the New Year's show, I and won praise from the whole school, I was proud of myself. All the effort I put into it became meaningful. As long as you want to get good at something, you need to put your heart into it, and the key is to take action and never give up so easily.
【知识点】
爱好话题写作，叙事类作文结构，英语句式运用
【点评】
这篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部4个要点，叙事逻辑流畅自然，选取的校园社团、新年演出等场景十分贴合初中学生的真实生活，情感真挚积极，语言难度符合八年级学生的英语水平，没有过多超纲表达，词数也符合题干100词左右的要求，是一篇合格的高分范文。学生写作时可以参考该结构，先逐一对应列出要点再填充内容，能有效避免漏点问题。
【难度系数】
0.6
这道题是初中英语爱好主题的书面表达，解题时首先要明确题干给出的4个必写要点，避免漏点丢分。首先第一步先铺垫初中多彩校园生活的背景，自然引出自己的业余爱好是什么；第二步交代选择这项爱好的原因，结合校园社团这类学生熟悉的场景会更真实；第三步要写出具体遇到的实际挑战，再对应写出自己克服挑战的具体做法，内容要贴合学生日常；最后收尾写出自己从爱好中得到的感悟，全程控制总词数在100词左右，保证语言通顺、语法准确即可。
【解析】
写作可按照四步走的规范完成：
1. 开篇引入：先介绍自己的身份，点明初中生活丰富多彩，学校有各类社团可以培养爱好，顺势点明自己的爱好是吹奏竹笛，加入了对应的学校社团。
2. 说明选择原因：本身对中国竹笛很感兴趣，学校的相关社团可以给自己提供学习和展示的平台。
3. 叙述挑战与解决过程：刚加入社团时对竹笛相关技巧完全不了解，初期反复练习的过程十分枯燥，进步很慢；之后自己利用所有课余时间反复练习气息、指法，不断打磨演奏技巧。
4. 收尾谈感悟：最终自己登上了新年演出的舞台，获得了全校师生的好评，由此得出感悟：想要做好一件事就要全心投入，付诸行动、不轻言放弃就会有收获。
写作过程中注意衔接语句，保证逻辑连贯，不要出现语法错误，控制总词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version: I'm Li Hua, a middle school student in Grade 8. As a middle school student, my life is colourful. I learn a lot at school, and there are also many communities in our school. We can create and develop our hobbies there. I like playing the Chinese flute, so I joined a club at school. But I found that when I need to practise and get better, it didn't feel so fun at first. I knew little about it before I joined the club, but because I wanted to play it well, I practised a lot in my spare time. When I finally stood on the stage of the New Year's show, I and won praise from the whole school, I was proud of myself. All the effort I put into it became meaningful. As long as you want to get good at something, you need to put your heart into it, and the key is to take action and never give up so easily.
【知识点】
爱好话题写作，叙事类作文结构，英语句式运用
【点评】
这篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部4个要点，叙事逻辑流畅自然，选取的校园社团、新年演出等场景十分贴合初中学生的真实生活，情感真挚积极，语言难度符合八年级学生的英语水平，没有过多超纲表达，词数也符合题干100词左右的要求，是一篇合格的高分范文。学生写作时可以参考该结构，先逐一对应列出要点再填充内容，能有效避免漏点问题。
【难度系数】
0.6
