登录
B(2024·湖北)
学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意:1. 根据上图所给提示行文,并作适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I often read books in my free time.
学校的英语校刊正在开展“畅享阅读”征文活动。请你围绕下图所示的三个问题，用英文写一篇短文投稿。
注意:1. 根据上图所给提示行文,并作适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I often read books in my free time.
Reading brings me both pleasure and knowledge. I enjoy exploring different worlds and ideas through books. My favourite types of books are storybooks and science books. Storybooks take me on adventures with exciting characters, while science books teach me amazing facts about the world. I have a habit of taking notes while reading to remember important points. Sometimes I draw mind maps to understand complex ideas better. Both of them help me appreciate the books more and learn effectively.
答案
One possible version:
I often read books in my free time. Reading brings me both pleasure and knowledge. I enjoy exploring different worlds and ideas through books. My favourite types of books are storybooks and science books. Storybooks take me on adventures with exciting characters, while science books teach me amazing facts about the world. I have a habit of taking notes while reading to remember important points. Sometimes I draw mind maps to understand complex ideas better. Both of them help me appreciate the books more and learn effectively.
I often read books in my free time. Reading brings me both pleasure and knowledge. I enjoy exploring different worlds and ideas through books. My favourite types of books are storybooks and science books. Storybooks take me on adventures with exciting characters, while science books teach me amazing facts about the world. I have a habit of taking notes while reading to remember important points. Sometimes I draw mind maps to understand complex ideas better. Both of them help me appreciate the books more and learn effectively.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，要求围绕“畅享阅读”主题投稿征文，需根据图示的三个核心问题（阅读的原因、阅读的书籍类型、阅读习惯）完成短文，开头已给出。解题思路：先承接开头点明阅读的双重目的（对应图示中“for pleasure”“for knowledge”）；接着说明常读的书籍类型（对应图示中“storybooks”“science books”）并补充作用；再介绍自己的阅读习惯（对应图示中“take notes”“draw mind maps”）及好处；最后总结，确保内容紧扣图示、适当发挥，符合字数要求，无真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头“I often read books in my free time.”，点明阅读目的：Reading brings me both pleasure and knowledge. 对应图示中阅读原因的提示；2. 说明阅读书籍类型：My favourite types of books are storybooks and science books. 补充故事书带来冒险体验、科学书传授知识，对应图示中书籍类型的提示；3. 介绍阅读习惯：I have a habit of taking notes to remember key points, sometimes I draw mind maps to understand complex ideas better. 对应图示中阅读习惯的提示；4. 结尾总结，使内容完整，控制在80词左右，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I often read books in my free time. Reading brings me both pleasure and knowledge. I enjoy exploring different worlds and ideas through books. My favourite types of books are storybooks and science books. Storybooks take me on adventures with exciting characters, while science books teach me amazing facts about the world. I have a habit of taking notes while reading to remember important points. Sometimes I draw mind maps to understand complex ideas better. Both of them help me appreciate the books more and learn effectively.
【知识点】
英语话题作文，应用文写作，阅读主题表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，结合图示提示的三个问题展开，内容完整，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合征文的积极导向，字数恰当，未出现真实姓名和校名，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语话题写作题，要求围绕“畅享阅读”主题投稿征文，需根据图示的三个核心问题（阅读的原因、阅读的书籍类型、阅读习惯）完成短文，开头已给出。解题思路：先承接开头点明阅读的双重目的（对应图示中“for pleasure”“for knowledge”）；接着说明常读的书籍类型（对应图示中“storybooks”“science books”）并补充作用；再介绍自己的阅读习惯（对应图示中“take notes”“draw mind maps”）及好处；最后总结，确保内容紧扣图示、适当发挥，符合字数要求，无真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头“I often read books in my free time.”，点明阅读目的：Reading brings me both pleasure and knowledge. 对应图示中阅读原因的提示；2. 说明阅读书籍类型：My favourite types of books are storybooks and science books. 补充故事书带来冒险体验、科学书传授知识，对应图示中书籍类型的提示；3. 介绍阅读习惯：I have a habit of taking notes to remember key points, sometimes I draw mind maps to understand complex ideas better. 对应图示中阅读习惯的提示；4. 结尾总结，使内容完整，控制在80词左右，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I often read books in my free time. Reading brings me both pleasure and knowledge. I enjoy exploring different worlds and ideas through books. My favourite types of books are storybooks and science books. Storybooks take me on adventures with exciting characters, while science books teach me amazing facts about the world. I have a habit of taking notes while reading to remember important points. Sometimes I draw mind maps to understand complex ideas better. Both of them help me appreciate the books more and learn effectively.
【知识点】
英语话题作文，应用文写作，阅读主题表达
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，结合图示提示的三个问题展开，内容完整，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，符合征文的积极导向，字数恰当，未出现真实姓名和校名，是一篇符合要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.3
C(2024·宿迁市沭阳期末)
近日，“骑行”这一低碳环保的休闲运动受到越来越多人的青睐。“骑行”既是一种运动，又能保护环境、减少污染。请以“Enjoying cycling”为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍骑行的好处和注意事项。
25－4
注意:1. 100词左右；
2. 短文须包括以上所有要点，可作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Enjoying cycling
近日，“骑行”这一低碳环保的休闲运动受到越来越多人的青睐。“骑行”既是一种运动，又能保护环境、减少污染。请以“Enjoying cycling”为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍骑行的好处和注意事项。
25－4
注意:1. 100词左右；
2. 短文须包括以上所有要点，可作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Enjoying cycling
答案
One possible version:
Enjoying cycling
Nowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with people. It's a useful sport and it brings us a lot of benefits.
Firstly, cycling is good exercise because it can help us keep healthy. Besides, it's also good for the environment because it can greatly reduce air pollution. Thirdly, it is very easy for us to stop any time and helps avoid the traffic jam.
However, we should be careful when riding. We shouldn't ride too fast. Remember to wear helmets when riding. It's important for us to obey the traffic rules.
In a word, we can benefit a lot from cycling. Let's get on bicycles and enjoy cycling!
Enjoying cycling
Nowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with people. It's a useful sport and it brings us a lot of benefits.
Firstly, cycling is good exercise because it can help us keep healthy. Besides, it's also good for the environment because it can greatly reduce air pollution. Thirdly, it is very easy for us to stop any time and helps avoid the traffic jam.
However, we should be careful when riding. We shouldn't ride too fast. Remember to wear helmets when riding. It's important for us to obey the traffic rules.
In a word, we can benefit a lot from cycling. Let's get on bicycles and enjoy cycling!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语话题应用文写作，要求以“Enjoying cycling”为题，介绍骑行的好处和注意事项。解题思路：1. 开头点明骑行的流行趋势，引出主题；2. 分点阐述骑行的好处，需包含题目给出的“有益锻炼”“对环境有益”，补充合理的第三点（如避免交通拥堵）；3. 说明骑行的安全注意事项，如不超速、戴头盔、遵守交规；4. 结尾总结并发出呼吁。写作时需注意词数100左右，语言连贯，无真实人名、校名等信息。
【解析】
按照写作思路，依次完成各部分内容：
1. 开头：点明骑行的流行，引出其带来的益处；
2. 好处部分：依次说明骑行是有益锻炼、对环境友好、能避免交通拥堵；
3. 安全事项部分：说明骑行时需注意的安全要点，如不超速、戴头盔、遵守交通规则；
4. 结尾：总结骑行的好处，呼吁大家参与骑行。
【答案】
One possible version:
Enjoying cycling
Nowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with people. It's a useful sport and it brings us a lot of benefits.
Firstly, cycling is good exercise because it can help us keep healthy. Besides, it's also good for the environment because it can greatly reduce air pollution. Thirdly, it is very easy for us to stop any time and helps avoid the traffic jam.
However, we should be careful when riding. We shouldn't ride too fast. Remember to wear helmets when riding. It's important for us to obey the traffic rules.
In a word, we can benefit a lot from cycling. Let's get on bicycles and enjoy cycling!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，覆盖了骑行的所有要求要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语话题应用文写作，要求以“Enjoying cycling”为题，介绍骑行的好处和注意事项。解题思路：1. 开头点明骑行的流行趋势，引出主题；2. 分点阐述骑行的好处，需包含题目给出的“有益锻炼”“对环境有益”，补充合理的第三点（如避免交通拥堵）；3. 说明骑行的安全注意事项，如不超速、戴头盔、遵守交规；4. 结尾总结并发出呼吁。写作时需注意词数100左右，语言连贯，无真实人名、校名等信息。
【解析】
按照写作思路，依次完成各部分内容：
1. 开头：点明骑行的流行，引出其带来的益处；
2. 好处部分：依次说明骑行是有益锻炼、对环境友好、能避免交通拥堵；
3. 安全事项部分：说明骑行时需注意的安全要点，如不超速、戴头盔、遵守交通规则；
4. 结尾：总结骑行的好处，呼吁大家参与骑行。
【答案】
One possible version:
Enjoying cycling
Nowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with people. It's a useful sport and it brings us a lot of benefits.
Firstly, cycling is good exercise because it can help us keep healthy. Besides, it's also good for the environment because it can greatly reduce air pollution. Thirdly, it is very easy for us to stop any time and helps avoid the traffic jam.
However, we should be careful when riding. We shouldn't ride too fast. Remember to wear helmets when riding. It's important for us to obey the traffic rules.
In a word, we can benefit a lot from cycling. Let's get on bicycles and enjoy cycling!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题作文
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，覆盖了骑行的所有要求要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
