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[2026江苏扬州期末]某英语报社正在举行英语征文大赛，大赛主题为“My Best Friend”。假如你是李华，请根据下图提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你最好的朋友Julie并参赛。
注意:(1)短文中应包含所要求的信息,可以适当发挥；
(2)词数80左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数；
(3)短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
My Best Friend
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend, Julie.
[2026江苏扬州期末]某英语报社正在举行英语征文大赛，大赛主题为“My Best Friend”。假如你是李华，请根据下图提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你最好的朋友Julie并参赛。
注意:(1)短文中应包含所要求的信息,可以适当发挥；
(2)词数80左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数；
(3)短文中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
My Best Friend
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my best friend, Julie.
Julie is a beautiful girl with a ponytail. She has a round face and bright smiling eyes. She is very tall, almost 1.66 metres. She likes singing and dancing.
Julie has a sense of humour. She tells me funny jokes and makes me laugh. She also works hard and is a top student. Besides, she likes playing volleyball. She is in the school volleyball team. In the future, she wants to be a great dancer. She believes it will come true.
答案
Julie is a beautiful girl with a ponytail. She has a round face and bright smiling eyes. She is very tall, almost 1.66 metres. She likes singing and dancing.
Julie has a sense of humour. She tells me funny jokes and makes me laugh. She also works hard and is a top student. Besides, she likes playing volleyball. She is in the school volleyball team.
In the future, she wants to be a great dancer. She believes it will come true.
Julie has a sense of humour. She tells me funny jokes and makes me laugh. She also works hard and is a top student. Besides, she likes playing volleyball. She is in the school volleyball team.
In the future, she wants to be a great dancer. She believes it will come true.
解析
【分析】
首先承接给定开头，围绕“My Best Friend”主题，按要求从外貌、性格爱好、学业、未来梦想四个维度介绍Julie：1. 描述外貌特征（对应提示的马尾辫、圆脸、笑眼、身高）；2. 介绍性格（幽默）、爱好（唱歌跳舞、排球）、学业状态（努力的优等生）；3. 说明未来梦想，同时控制词数80左右，适当发挥且不涉及真实信息。
【解析】
根据题目要求，结合提示信息，按以下结构写作：
1. 外貌描写：Julie是扎马尾的漂亮女孩，圆脸，明亮的笑眼，身高近1.66米；
2. 性格与爱好：有幽默感，会讲笑话逗人笑，喜欢唱歌跳舞，在校排球队，学习努力是优等生；
3. 未来梦想：想成为优秀舞者，相信梦想会实现。
【答案】
Julie is a beautiful girl with a ponytail. She has a round face and bright smiling eyes. She is very tall, almost 1.66 metres. She likes singing and dancing.
Julie has a sense of humour. She tells me funny jokes and makes me laugh. She also works hard and is a top student. Besides, she likes playing volleyball. She is in the school volleyball team.
In the future, she wants to be a great dancer. She believes it will come true.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍类作文
【点评】
本文紧扣大赛主题，从外貌、性格爱好、学业、未来梦想等方面全面介绍好友Julie，内容完整，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合参赛要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先承接给定开头，围绕“My Best Friend”主题，按要求从外貌、性格爱好、学业、未来梦想四个维度介绍Julie：1. 描述外貌特征（对应提示的马尾辫、圆脸、笑眼、身高）；2. 介绍性格（幽默）、爱好（唱歌跳舞、排球）、学业状态（努力的优等生）；3. 说明未来梦想，同时控制词数80左右，适当发挥且不涉及真实信息。
【解析】
根据题目要求，结合提示信息，按以下结构写作：
1. 外貌描写：Julie是扎马尾的漂亮女孩，圆脸，明亮的笑眼，身高近1.66米；
2. 性格与爱好：有幽默感，会讲笑话逗人笑，喜欢唱歌跳舞，在校排球队，学习努力是优等生；
3. 未来梦想：想成为优秀舞者，相信梦想会实现。
【答案】
Julie is a beautiful girl with a ponytail. She has a round face and bright smiling eyes. She is very tall, almost 1.66 metres. She likes singing and dancing.
Julie has a sense of humour. She tells me funny jokes and makes me laugh. She also works hard and is a top student. Besides, she likes playing volleyball. She is in the school volleyball team.
In the future, she wants to be a great dancer. She believes it will come true.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物介绍类作文
【点评】
本文紧扣大赛主题，从外貌、性格爱好、学业、未来梦想等方面全面介绍好友Julie，内容完整，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合参赛要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.6
