典例观摩
假设你是 Gina 的笔友 Alice ，读完 Gina
的来信后，请给她写一封回信。
Dear Alice,
I have some problems.I need your help.
I think I'm very shy and that I can't get on
well with my classmates.But I re all ly want to
be popular at school.Besides,I want to join a
guitar club,but I don't have enough money to
buy a guitar.Now I'm upset.Could you give
me some advice?
Yours,
Gina




注意:
1.词数80左右，可适当发挥;
2.不得使用真实校名及姓名。
范文欣赏
Dear Gina,
I am sorry to hear that you have some problems.I hope I can help you.
In order to be popular at school,maybe you should try to be more outgoing.How about joining some clubs and helping others when they're in trouble?You could also take part in after−school activities.If you don't have enough money to buy a guitar,I think you can make some money by doing housework.If you talk to your parents about your need,
I'm sure they will help you.
I hope that my advice can help you.
Yours,
Alice
[名师点评]
作者按照题目要求，运用所学词汇和
句式，针对笔友 Gina 在来信中所描述的
烦恼提出了一些可行性建议，语气中肯，
文笔流畅。
.亮点词汇:join some clubs ; take
part in ; make some money 等。
.高分句式:I am sorry to hear that you
have some problems.(that 弓|导宾语从句)
How about joining some clubs and
helping others when they're in trouble?(How
about 句式用以提出中肯的意见和建议)

Dear Gina,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling upset. Let me offer you some advice.
To get on well with classmates and be popular, you should try to be more active. How about greeting your classmates warmly every day and joining group activities? You can also help others when they need it. For the guitar, you can do housework to earn pocket money or talk to your parents about your dream. I believe they'll support you.
Hope my advice helps.
Yours,
Alice

【分析】这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以笔友Alice的身份给Gina写回信，解决她的两个烦恼：一是害羞难与同学相处、想在学校受欢迎；二是没钱买吉他想加入吉他社。解题思路：1. 遵循英文书信格式（称呼、正文、结尾署名）；2. 针对每个烦恼给出具体可行的建议，避免空泛；3. 运用所学的提建议句式（如How about...）和表达关心的句式，语气亲切符合笔友身份；4. 控制词数在80左右，符合要求。
【解析】首先开头用Dear Gina表达对Gina烦恼的关心；针对与同学相处的问题，建议主动和同学打招呼、参与小组活动、帮助有需要的同学；针对没钱买吉他的问题，建议通过做家务赚零花钱或和父母沟通；最后表达希望建议有帮助，结尾署名Alice，确保内容紧扣问题、格式正确、词数达标。
【答案】Dear Gina,
I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling upset. Let me offer you some advice.
To get on well with classmates and be popular, you should try to be more active. How about greeting your classmates warmly every day and joining group activities? You can also help others when they need it. For the guitar, you can do housework to earn pocket money or talk to your parents about your dream. I believe they'll support you.
Hope my advice helps.
Yours,
Alice
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类应用文写作
【点评】这篇回信紧扣Gina的两个烦恼，给出的建议具体可行，语气亲切自然，符合笔友间交流的语境，句式多样，用词恰当，词数符合要求，很好地完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5