实战演练
假如你是心理咨询师 Daniel ，现请你根
据以下 Lynn 的邮件中的内容，写一封回信。
要求:
1.词数80左右;
2.文中不能出现真实人名、校名等信息。

Dear Daniel,
I like making friends and helping people,
but I find out that some of my classmate
don't really want to make friends with
me.They just hope I can do what they
should do. Last week,I helped a girl
clean the classroom when it was her turn.
She said she didn't feel well but in fact
she went shopping with others. I felt
disappointed.What should I do?
Lynn
Dear Lynn,
Thank you for your letter.I am ready to
help you solve your problems.Don't worry.





Yours,
Daniel

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【高分范文】
Dear Lynn,
Thank you for your letter. I am ready to
help you solve your problems. Don't worry.
You are so kind that there must be someone
who wants to be your friend. Communication
is the most important part of friendship, and
friendship needs time and care to build. Your
friends and you should take care of each other
and help each other, and then you will reap a
real friendship.
But stay away from those who are dishonest,
and find other new friends.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Daniel

【分析】首先明确写作身份为心理咨询师Daniel，需针对Lynn邮件中“同学利用自己、帮值日却遭欺骗”的交友困扰，撰写一封80词左右的回信；需包含安慰、正确的友谊认知、合理建议，且不能出现真实人名、校名等信息，遵循英语书信的格式规范。
【解析】1. 开头承接来信，表达愿意帮助Lynn解决问题的态度；2. 安慰Lynn，肯定她的善良，说明会有真诚的人愿意和她做朋友；3. 给出核心建议：友谊需要沟通、彼此付出，要远离不诚实的人，寻找真正的友谊；4. 结尾送上祝福，完成书信收尾。
【答案】Dear Lynn,
Thank you for your letter. I am ready to help you solve your problems. Don't worry.
You are so kind that there must be someone who wants to be your friend. Communication is the most important part of friendship, and friendship needs time and care to build. Your friends and you should take care of each other and help each other, and then you will reap a real friendship.
But stay away from those who are dishonest, and find other new friends.
Wish you all the best!
Yours,
Daniel
【知识点】英语书信写作；建议类应用文；词汇运用
【点评】范文紧扣Lynn的交友困扰，给出了实用且合理的建议，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，格式规范，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】0.5