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1. 阅读介绍“糖丸爷爷”顾方舟的片段，并将其与文后的提要进行匹配。
A. I look up to him for his great courage and selflessness. He cared more about
others' health than his own. His creativity and love for children made the
vaccine easy to take. He is a true hero who used his knowledge to help people.
B. Gu Fangzhou was a medical scientist. When polio threatened Chinese
children, he worked hard to create a vaccine. He even tested it on himself
first to make sure it was safe. Finally, he made the vaccine into a sweet
"sugar pill" for children.
C. Thanks to his "sugar pill", millions of children in China were protected from
polio. This terrible disease almost disappeared in our country. Therefore, he
is called "People's Scientist".
(1) What he did:
(2) What he achieved:
(3) The reasons I admire him:
2. 仿照“糖丸爷爷”的介绍，根据所给提示，介绍另一位时代楷模：南仁东。
注意：请不要逐字翻译，可适当添加细节；句子时态正确，意思完整，符合
逻辑。
Role Model of Our Time: Nan Rendong
What he did:
• 中国著名的天文学家
• "中国天眼"工程首席
科学家兼总工程师
What he achieved:
• 历时22年建成了位于
贵州的FAST,为探索
宇宙提供了目前最先进
的工具之一
• 推动中国天文学的
发展
The reason(s) I admire
him:
• 追逐梦想的热情
• ……
1. 阅读介绍“糖丸爷爷”顾方舟的片段，并将其与文后的提要进行匹配。
A. I look up to him for his great courage and selflessness. He cared more about
others' health than his own. His creativity and love for children made the
vaccine easy to take. He is a true hero who used his knowledge to help people.
B. Gu Fangzhou was a medical scientist. When polio threatened Chinese
children, he worked hard to create a vaccine. He even tested it on himself
first to make sure it was safe. Finally, he made the vaccine into a sweet
"sugar pill" for children.
C. Thanks to his "sugar pill", millions of children in China were protected from
polio. This terrible disease almost disappeared in our country. Therefore, he
is called "People's Scientist".
(1) What he did:
B
(2) What he achieved:
C
(3) The reasons I admire him:
A
2. 仿照“糖丸爷爷”的介绍，根据所给提示，介绍另一位时代楷模：南仁东。
注意：请不要逐字翻译，可适当添加细节；句子时态正确，意思完整，符合
逻辑。
Role Model of Our Time: Nan Rendong
What he did:
• 中国著名的天文学家
• "中国天眼"工程首席
科学家兼总工程师
What he achieved:
• 历时22年建成了位于
贵州的FAST,为探索
宇宙提供了目前最先进
的工具之一
• 推动中国天文学的
发展
The reason(s) I admire
him:
• 追逐梦想的热情
• ……
答案
1. BCA
2. The person I admire most is Nan Rendong, the "father of FAST". He led the building of
FAST, the world's largest radio telescope, to help China explore the universe.
Nan Rendong worked very hard and faced many problems. He searched for the best place to
build the telescope and solved difficult technical problems. Even when it was tough, he never gave
up.
Because of his efforts, FAST can find signals from stars, planets, and galaxies. It has made
China a leader in space exploration.
I admire Nan Rendong's passion and dedication. He taught us to follow our dreams and do
something meaningful. I want to learn from him and try my best to realize my dream.
2. The person I admire most is Nan Rendong, the "father of FAST". He led the building of
FAST, the world's largest radio telescope, to help China explore the universe.
Nan Rendong worked very hard and faced many problems. He searched for the best place to
build the telescope and solved difficult technical problems. Even when it was tough, he never gave
up.
Because of his efforts, FAST can find signals from stars, planets, and galaxies. It has made
China a leader in space exploration.
I admire Nan Rendong's passion and dedication. He taught us to follow our dreams and do
something meaningful. I want to learn from him and try my best to realize my dream.
解析
【分析】
这道题分为两部分，第一部分是信息匹配，解题思路是先明确三个题干的核心指向：①“他做了什么”要找描述人物身份、具体付出和行动的内容；②“他取得了什么成就”要找行动带来的正向结果、实际影响的内容；③“我敬佩他的原因”要找对人物品质的评价、抒发敬佩情感的内容，再逐一对应三个段落的核心含义就能完成匹配。第二部分是人物类写作，先按照提示的三个模块梳理内容逻辑：开篇点明南仁东的身份，中间补充他研发中国天眼的具体付出，再介绍他取得的成果，最后说明敬佩他的理由和自身感悟，注意时态统一、适当补充合理细节避免逐字翻译，就能写出符合要求的作文。
【解析】
1. 信息匹配部分：
(1) 题干What he did意为“他的所作所为”，B段完整介绍了顾方舟的医学家身份，以及他为研发小儿麻痹症疫苗付出的全部行动：全力攻关、以身试药、把疫苗做成糖丸，完全对应“人物行动”的要求，因此选B。
(2) 题干What he achieved意为“他取得的成就”，C段介绍了糖丸疫苗带来的实际成果：数百万中国儿童免于患病、小儿麻痹症几乎在国内消失，他也因此获得“人民科学家”的称号，完全对应“行动成果”的要求，因此选C。
(3) 题干The reasons I admire him意为“我敬佩他的原因”，A段从他的勇气、无私、创造力、对儿童的关爱等品质角度，阐述了敬佩他的核心理由，完全对应“情感评价”的要求，因此选A。
2. 写作部分：
首先开篇引入人物，点明南仁东“FAST之父”的身份，覆盖“中国著名天文学家、FAST工程首席科学家兼总工程师”的提示信息；接着补充他22年里选址、攻克技术难题的细节，丰富“他的行动”部分的内容；之后介绍FAST建成后给中国天文探索带来的提升，覆盖“建成FAST、推动中国天文学发展”的提示信息；最后点明敬佩他的追梦热情和奉献精神，表达自己的学习志向，全程保证时态准确、逻辑连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】
1. (1) B (2) C (3) A
2. The person I admire most is Nan Rendong, the "father of FAST". He led the building of FAST, the world's largest radio telescope, to help China explore the universe. Nan Rendong worked very hard and faced many problems. He searched for the best place to build the telescope and solved difficult technical problems. Even when it was tough, he never gave up. Because of his efforts, FAST can find signals from stars, planets, and galaxies. It has made China a leader in space exploration. I admire Nan Rendong's passion and dedication. He taught us to follow our dreams and do something meaningful. I want to learn from him and try my best to realize my dream.
【知识点】
信息匹配筛选，人物类英语写作，时态正确应用
【点评】
本题先通过低难度的信息匹配，帮学生理清人物介绍类文本的通用写作框架，再引导学生仿照框架完成新的时代楷模介绍，既考察了学生的文本信息定位能力，也循序渐进锻炼了学生的英语书面表达能力，同时融入了正向的榜样教育，题型设计梯度合理。
【难度系数】
0.6
这道题分为两部分，第一部分是信息匹配，解题思路是先明确三个题干的核心指向：①“他做了什么”要找描述人物身份、具体付出和行动的内容；②“他取得了什么成就”要找行动带来的正向结果、实际影响的内容；③“我敬佩他的原因”要找对人物品质的评价、抒发敬佩情感的内容，再逐一对应三个段落的核心含义就能完成匹配。第二部分是人物类写作，先按照提示的三个模块梳理内容逻辑：开篇点明南仁东的身份，中间补充他研发中国天眼的具体付出，再介绍他取得的成果，最后说明敬佩他的理由和自身感悟，注意时态统一、适当补充合理细节避免逐字翻译，就能写出符合要求的作文。
【解析】
1. 信息匹配部分：
(1) 题干What he did意为“他的所作所为”，B段完整介绍了顾方舟的医学家身份，以及他为研发小儿麻痹症疫苗付出的全部行动：全力攻关、以身试药、把疫苗做成糖丸，完全对应“人物行动”的要求，因此选B。
(2) 题干What he achieved意为“他取得的成就”，C段介绍了糖丸疫苗带来的实际成果：数百万中国儿童免于患病、小儿麻痹症几乎在国内消失，他也因此获得“人民科学家”的称号，完全对应“行动成果”的要求，因此选C。
(3) 题干The reasons I admire him意为“我敬佩他的原因”，A段从他的勇气、无私、创造力、对儿童的关爱等品质角度，阐述了敬佩他的核心理由，完全对应“情感评价”的要求，因此选A。
2. 写作部分：
首先开篇引入人物，点明南仁东“FAST之父”的身份，覆盖“中国著名天文学家、FAST工程首席科学家兼总工程师”的提示信息；接着补充他22年里选址、攻克技术难题的细节，丰富“他的行动”部分的内容；之后介绍FAST建成后给中国天文探索带来的提升，覆盖“建成FAST、推动中国天文学发展”的提示信息；最后点明敬佩他的追梦热情和奉献精神，表达自己的学习志向，全程保证时态准确、逻辑连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】
1. (1) B (2) C (3) A
2. The person I admire most is Nan Rendong, the "father of FAST". He led the building of FAST, the world's largest radio telescope, to help China explore the universe. Nan Rendong worked very hard and faced many problems. He searched for the best place to build the telescope and solved difficult technical problems. Even when it was tough, he never gave up. Because of his efforts, FAST can find signals from stars, planets, and galaxies. It has made China a leader in space exploration. I admire Nan Rendong's passion and dedication. He taught us to follow our dreams and do something meaningful. I want to learn from him and try my best to realize my dream.
【知识点】
信息匹配筛选，人物类英语写作，时态正确应用
【点评】
本题先通过低难度的信息匹配，帮学生理清人物介绍类文本的通用写作框架，再引导学生仿照框架完成新的时代楷模介绍，既考察了学生的文本信息定位能力，也循序渐进锻炼了学生的英语书面表达能力，同时融入了正向的榜样教育，题型设计梯度合理。
【难度系数】
0.6
