主题写作专项 练写作 答案D4
主题词网
人物介绍
外貌特征 · tall · short · slim · strong · pretty · handsome
· short hair · a round face · big eyes · long hair · wear glasses · cute
性格品质 · friendly · polite · patient · shy · helpful · careful
· honest · humorous · nice · kind · quiet · outgoing
兴趣特长 · be good at · do well in · play...well · love · like · enjoy
· interested · play basketball · play chess · swim · sing · draw
写作实例
假如你是陈洁,最近才转到你现在的这个班级学习,在英语课上老师要求你作自我介绍。请你写一篇70词左右的英语短文介绍自己。内容包括:
→审词数 →审主题: 审人称: 第一、三人称
1.你的基本情况(姓名、年龄、性格、爱好、特长等); →审要点:
2.你家人的情况(父母的外貌、职业等); 审时态: 一般现在时
3.提出与大家交朋友的愿望。

Hello, everyone. I am Chen Jie, and I go by Amy. I’m 13 years old. I’m quiet and shy. I am always ready to help others. I enjoy reading in my free time. I can play the piano well. My father is tall and strong. He is good at playing basketball. He is always full of energy. He is a teacher in No. 1 Middle School. My mother is tall and slim. She is pretty and has short black hair. She is a doctor in a big hospital. I love them very much. This is me—a lovely girl. Would you like to make friends with me?

【分析】
本次写作任务是作为陈洁用英语作自我介绍，需明确：人称用第一人称，时态为一般现在时，要涵盖三个核心要点（自身基本情况、家人情况、交友愿望），词数控制在70左右，需运用给定的外貌、性格、兴趣类词汇。解题思路：先开头点明身份，再依次介绍自身情况（姓名、年龄、性格、爱好特长）、父母的外貌与职业，最后表达交友意愿，确保所有要点齐全，用词贴合主题词网，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：① 开头打招呼并点明身份：Hello, everyone. I am Chen Jie, and I go by Amy. I’m 13 years old.；② 介绍自身情况（性格、爱好、特长）：I’m quiet and shy. I am always ready to help others. I enjoy reading in my free time. I can play the piano well.；③ 介绍父母情况（外貌、职业）：My father is tall and strong. He is good at playing basketball. He is always full of energy. He is a teacher in No. 1 Middle School. My mother is tall and slim. She is pretty and has short black hair. She is a doctor in a big hospital.；④ 结尾表达交友愿望：I love them very much. This is me—a lovely girl. Would you like to make friends with me? 整体符合词数要求，时态正确，要点完整。
【答案】
Hello, everyone. I am Chen Jie, and I go by Amy. I’m 13 years old. I’m quiet and shy. I am always ready to help others. I enjoy reading in my free time. I can play the piano well. My father is tall and strong. He is good at playing basketball. He is always full of energy. He is a teacher in No. 1 Middle School. My mother is tall and slim. She is pretty and has short black hair. She is a doctor in a big hospital. I love them very much. This is me—a lovely girl. Would you like to make friends with me?
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；一般现在时；词汇运用
【点评】
范文紧扣写作要求，涵盖所有指定要点，用词贴合给定主题词网，语法正确，结构清晰，符合自我介绍的文体规范，是优秀的参考范例。
【难度系数】
0.6

写作支架
开头 — 介绍自己情况
Hello, everyone. I am Chen Jie, and I go by Amy.（高分句式1）
I'm years old. I'm . I am always .
I enjoy . I can .
中间 — 介绍家人情况
My father is . He is good at . He is always . He is .

My mother is . She is and has . She is .
I love .
结尾 — 总结并表达交友愿望
This is .
Would you like to make friends with me?（高分句式2）

1. 13
2. quiet and shy
3. ready to help others
4. reading in my free time
5. play the piano well
6. tall and strong
7. playing basketball
8. full of energy
9. a teacher in No. 1 Middle School
10. tall and slim
11. pretty
12. short black hair
13. a doctor in a big hospital
14. them very much
15. me—a lovely girl

【分析】这是一道英语自我介绍类写作填空题，需依据题目给出的写作结构（开头介绍自己、中间介绍家人、结尾总结并表达交友愿望），结合英语常用表达逻辑填写空缺，同时运用题目提供的高分句式提升表达效果，填写内容需符合语境和英语搭配习惯。
【解析】根据写作结构和英语表达规范，依次填写各空缺：1. 年龄填13；2. 性格填quiet and shy；3. 品质填ready to help others；4. 爱好填reading in my free time；5. 能力填play the piano well；6. 父亲外貌填tall and strong；7. 父亲特长填playing basketball；8. 父亲状态填full of energy；9. 父亲职业填a teacher in No.1 Middle School；10. 母亲外貌填tall and slim；11. 母亲特质填pretty；12. 母亲外貌细节填short black hair；13. 母亲职业填a doctor in a big hospital；14. 对家人的感情填them very much；15. 结尾总结填me—a lovely girl。
【答案】1.13；2.quiet and shy；3.ready to help others；4.reading in my free time；5.play the piano well；6.tall and strong；7.playing basketball；8.full of energy；9.a teacher in No.1 Middle School；10.tall and slim；11.pretty；12.short black hair；13.a doctor in a big hospital；14.them very much；15.me—a lovely girl
【知识点】英语写作、自我介绍表达、家人介绍表达
【点评】本题为写作支架类题目，结构清晰，提供高分句式降低写作难度，帮助学生完成符合要求的自我介绍短文，适合练习英语书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6