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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D4
「2026江苏南通如皋外国语学校月考」
《学英语报》正举办以“My new friend”为题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请根据下图所给的提示要点，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的新朋友Wendy。
注意:1.表达中必须包含所给的要点,省略号部分可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数80左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.表达中请勿提及真实姓名。
My new friend
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my new friend Wendy.
「2026江苏南通如皋外国语学校月考」
《学英语报》正举办以“My new friend”为题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请根据下图所给的提示要点，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你的新朋友Wendy。
注意:1.表达中必须包含所给的要点,省略号部分可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2.词数80左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.表达中请勿提及真实姓名。
My new friend
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my new friend Wendy.
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
My new friend
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my new friend Wendy. She is 13 years old. She's in Class 10, Grade 7. She has big eyes and long hair. She doesn't wear glasses. She is tall and slim.
Wendy has many hobbies. She enjoys running and dancing. She thinks running can help her keep healthy and dancing can make her feel happy. She likes reading in her free time. She is good at volleyball too. We often see her play volleyball in the playground.
Wendy wants to be a teacher in the future because she loves being with children. I'm really happy to have a good friend like her!
Thank you!
进阶版范文
My new friend
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my new friend Wendy. She's thirteen years old. She is in Class Ten, Grade Seven. She has big bright eyes with long hair. She doesn't wear glasses. She's tall and slim, so she looks very pretty.
Wendy is crazy about running and dancing. Besides, she's good at volleyball. When she is free, she loves reading books. After class, we often run around the playground together, and she even teaches me small dance steps. They're so fun!
Wendy wants to be a teacher in the future because she loves being with children. Wendy is such a nice girl that I'm really happy to be her friend!
Thank you!
基础版范文
My new friend
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my new friend Wendy. She is 13 years old. She's in Class 10, Grade 7. She has big eyes and long hair. She doesn't wear glasses. She is tall and slim.
Wendy has many hobbies. She enjoys running and dancing. She thinks running can help her keep healthy and dancing can make her feel happy. She likes reading in her free time. She is good at volleyball too. We often see her play volleyball in the playground.
Wendy wants to be a teacher in the future because she loves being with children. I'm really happy to have a good friend like her!
Thank you!
进阶版范文
My new friend
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my new friend Wendy. She's thirteen years old. She is in Class Ten, Grade Seven. She has big bright eyes with long hair. She doesn't wear glasses. She's tall and slim, so she looks very pretty.
Wendy is crazy about running and dancing. Besides, she's good at volleyball. When she is free, she loves reading books. After class, we often run around the playground together, and she even teaches me small dance steps. They're so fun!
Wendy wants to be a teacher in the future because she loves being with children. Wendy is such a nice girl that I'm really happy to be her friend!
Thank you!
解析
【分析】本题是英语主题写作题，要求以“My new friend”为题写演讲稿介绍新朋友Wendy。解题思路：1. 明确写作结构：开头已给出，需依次介绍Wendy的基本情况（年龄、班级、外貌）、兴趣爱好（给定内容可补充细节）、未来梦想；2. 严格涵盖所有提示要点，适当发挥省略号部分，控制词数在80左右，语言符合演讲稿语气；3. 检查是否符合不提及真实姓名的要求。
【解析】承接开头后，先介绍Wendy的基本情况：She is 13 years old, in Class 10, Grade 7. She has big eyes and long hair, doesn't wear glasses, and is tall and slim. 接着补充兴趣爱好细节：She enjoys running and dancing (running keeps her healthy, dancing makes her happy), likes reading in free time, and is good at volleyball. 最后写未来梦想：She wants to be a teacher because she loves being with children. 结尾加演讲稿常用语Thank you!
【答案】My new friend
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my new friend Wendy. She is 13 years old. She's in Class 10, Grade 7. She has big eyes and long hair. She doesn't wear glasses. She is tall and slim.
Wendy has many hobbies. She enjoys running and dancing. She thinks running can help her keep healthy and dancing can make her feel happy. She likes reading in her free time. She is good at volleyball too. We often see her play volleyball in the playground.
Wendy wants to be a teacher in the future because she loves being with children. I'm really happy to have a good friend like her!
Thank you!
【知识点】英语主题写作；演讲稿写作
【点评】本题考查学生根据提示要点组织英语语篇的能力，要求兼顾要点完整性、语言通顺性及演讲稿格式，是初中英语常见的写作题型，能锻炼学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】承接开头后，先介绍Wendy的基本情况：She is 13 years old, in Class 10, Grade 7. She has big eyes and long hair, doesn't wear glasses, and is tall and slim. 接着补充兴趣爱好细节：She enjoys running and dancing (running keeps her healthy, dancing makes her happy), likes reading in free time, and is good at volleyball. 最后写未来梦想：She wants to be a teacher because she loves being with children. 结尾加演讲稿常用语Thank you!
【答案】My new friend
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. Let me tell you something about my new friend Wendy. She is 13 years old. She's in Class 10, Grade 7. She has big eyes and long hair. She doesn't wear glasses. She is tall and slim.
Wendy has many hobbies. She enjoys running and dancing. She thinks running can help her keep healthy and dancing can make her feel happy. She likes reading in her free time. She is good at volleyball too. We often see her play volleyball in the playground.
Wendy wants to be a teacher in the future because she loves being with children. I'm really happy to have a good friend like her!
Thank you!
【知识点】英语主题写作；演讲稿写作
【点评】本题考查学生根据提示要点组织英语语篇的能力，要求兼顾要点完整性、语言通顺性及演讲稿格式，是初中英语常见的写作题型，能锻炼学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.7
