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假定你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展 "The Joy of Helping Others" 主题分享活动。请你根据下面表格中的信息,用英语写一篇演讲稿,讲述一下你助人的经历。
注意:
1. 短文须包含表格中的关键词,请增加细节以使短文完整、通顺；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数 80~100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to share
That's all. Thank you for listening!
注意:
1. 短文须包含表格中的关键词,请增加细节以使短文完整、通顺；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数 80~100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to share
That's all. Thank you for listening!
答案
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to share my experience of helping others.
Last month,I volunteered at a community centre, teaching English to children from families in need. At first,I was nervous,but their smiles and progress filled me with joy. One shy girl,Xiaoling,could hardly speak English,but after weeks of practice,she bravely introduced herself in front of everyone.
Helping others doesn’t just change their lives—it changes ours too. We learn patience and find real joy. When we help others,we help make our world warmer. So,let’s do more to help. Together,simple things can make a big difference.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to share my experience of helping others.
Last month,I volunteered at a community centre, teaching English to children from families in need. At first,I was nervous,but their smiles and progress filled me with joy. One shy girl,Xiaoling,could hardly speak English,but after weeks of practice,she bravely introduced herself in front of everyone.
Helping others doesn’t just change their lives—it changes ours too. We learn patience and find real joy. When we help others,we help make our world warmer. So,let’s do more to help. Together,simple things can make a big difference.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需围绕“The Joy of Helping Others”主题，结合表格中时间（Last month）、地点（A community centre）、事件（Teach English）、人物（Children, Xiaoling）、意义（Make our world warmer; make a difference）的关键词，补充合理细节，完成80-100词的演讲稿，且不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。解题思路为：先承接已给开头点明分享助人经历；再按表格要素展开，加入具体细节（如自己作为志愿者的心情变化、Xiaoling的进步事例）；最后升华主题，呼应帮助他人的意义，确保内容完整通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接给定内容，明确分享“my experience of helping others”；
2. 主体：按表格信息，说明时间（Last month）、地点（a community centre），做的事（teach English to children），补充Xiaoling的具体事例（起初害羞不敢说英语，经练习后进步）及自己的心情（从紧张到因孩子进步而开心）；
3. 结尾：结合表格中的意义，升华主题，点出帮助他人能温暖世界、带来改变，呼应主题；
4. 全程控制词数，避免真实信息，保证语句通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to share my experience of helping others.
Last month,I volunteered at a community centre, teaching English to children from families in need. At first,I was nervous,but their smiles and progress filled me with joy. One shy girl,Xiaoling,could hardly speak English,but after weeks of practice,she bravely introduced herself in front of everyone.
Helping others doesn’t just change their lives—it changes ours too. We learn patience and find real joy. When we help others,we help make our world warmer. So,let’s do more to help. Together,simple things can make a big difference.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语叙事表达
【点评】
本题考查学生整合给定信息、撰写符合要求的英语演讲稿的能力，要求紧扣主题，补充合理细节，语言通顺，符合词数限制，是常见的英语写作题型，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确题目要求：需围绕“The Joy of Helping Others”主题，结合表格中时间（Last month）、地点（A community centre）、事件（Teach English）、人物（Children, Xiaoling）、意义（Make our world warmer; make a difference）的关键词，补充合理细节，完成80-100词的演讲稿，且不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。解题思路为：先承接已给开头点明分享助人经历；再按表格要素展开，加入具体细节（如自己作为志愿者的心情变化、Xiaoling的进步事例）；最后升华主题，呼应帮助他人的意义，确保内容完整通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：承接给定内容，明确分享“my experience of helping others”；
2. 主体：按表格信息，说明时间（Last month）、地点（a community centre），做的事（teach English to children），补充Xiaoling的具体事例（起初害羞不敢说英语，经练习后进步）及自己的心情（从紧张到因孩子进步而开心）；
3. 结尾：结合表格中的意义，升华主题，点出帮助他人能温暖世界、带来改变，呼应主题；
4. 全程控制词数，避免真实信息，保证语句通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to share my experience of helping others.
Last month,I volunteered at a community centre, teaching English to children from families in need. At first,I was nervous,but their smiles and progress filled me with joy. One shy girl,Xiaoling,could hardly speak English,but after weeks of practice,she bravely introduced herself in front of everyone.
Helping others doesn’t just change their lives—it changes ours too. We learn patience and find real joy. When we help others,we help make our world warmer. So,let’s do more to help. Together,simple things can make a big difference.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语叙事表达
【点评】
本题考查学生整合给定信息、撰写符合要求的英语演讲稿的能力，要求紧扣主题，补充合理细节，语言通顺，符合词数限制，是常见的英语写作题型，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
