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童话故事是世界文学宝库中的常青树，一直深受青少年的喜爱。你读过哪些童话故事？请你以“My Favourite Story”为题，讲述一个令你印象最深刻的童话故事。
提示:1. What's the name of it?
2. Who is in it?
3. What's the story?
4. What do you think of it?
注意:1. 词数70左右；
2. 条理清晰，语义连贯，句式规范。
My Favourite Story
童话故事是世界文学宝库中的常青树，一直深受青少年的喜爱。你读过哪些童话故事？请你以“My Favourite Story”为题，讲述一个令你印象最深刻的童话故事。
提示:1. What's the name of it?
2. Who is in it?
3. What's the story?
4. What do you think of it?
注意:1. 词数70左右；
2. 条理清晰，语义连贯，句式规范。
My Favourite Story
I love reading,and I have read many stories. My favourite one is The Monkey and the Tiger.
There lived a tiger in the forest. All the animals were afraid of him. A monkey decided not to let the tiger live here. One day,the monkey said to the tiger,“Hey,Mr Tiger. Do you know that another tiger also lives here? He said he wasn't afraid of you at all.” The tiger was very angry. He asked the monkey to take him to see it. The monkey took the tiger to a river.“Look into the river,Mr Tiger. There he is.” The tiger looked into the river and found another tiger was looking at him angrily. He jumped into the river and died.
I like the story because it is interesting and it teaches us that we should stay calm when facing challenges.
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Story
I love reading,and I have read many stories. My favourite one is The Monkey and the Tiger.
There lived a tiger in the forest. All the animals were afraid of him. A monkey decided not to let the tiger live here. One day,the monkey said to the tiger,“Hey,Mr Tiger. Do you know that another tiger also lives here? He said he wasn't afraid of you at all.” The tiger was very angry. He asked the monkey to take him to see it. The monkey took the tiger to a river.“Look into the river,Mr Tiger. There he is.” The tiger looked into the river and found another tiger was looking at him angrily. He jumped into the river and died.
I like the story because it is interesting and it teaches us that we should stay calm when facing challenges.
My Favourite Story
I love reading,and I have read many stories. My favourite one is The Monkey and the Tiger.
There lived a tiger in the forest. All the animals were afraid of him. A monkey decided not to let the tiger live here. One day,the monkey said to the tiger,“Hey,Mr Tiger. Do you know that another tiger also lives here? He said he wasn't afraid of you at all.” The tiger was very angry. He asked the monkey to take him to see it. The monkey took the tiger to a river.“Look into the river,Mr Tiger. There he is.” The tiger looked into the river and found another tiger was looking at him angrily. He jumped into the river and died.
I like the story because it is interesting and it teaches us that we should stay calm when facing challenges.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“My Favourite Story”，需围绕提示的四个要点（故事名称、角色、内容、个人看法）写作，词数约70词。解题思路：第一步，审题确定写作核心；第二步，选取熟悉的童话故事；第三步，按“点出故事名→简述核心情节→表达个人感悟”的结构组织内容；第四步，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时先点明最喜欢的故事名称，再介绍故事中的角色，接着简述关键情节（猴子利用老虎的倒影骗其跳河），最后表达对故事的看法，传递积极道理，同时注意用词准确、语句通顺，控制词数。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Favourite Story
I love reading,and I have read many stories. My favourite one is The Monkey and the Tiger.
There lived a tiger in the forest. All the animals were afraid of him. A monkey decided not to let the tiger live here. One day,the monkey said to the tiger,“Hey,Mr Tiger. Do you know that another tiger also lives here? He said he wasn't afraid of you at all.” The tiger was very angry. He asked the monkey to take him to see it. The monkey took the tiger to a river.“Look into the river,Mr Tiger. There he is.” The tiger looked into the river and found another tiger was looking at him angrily. He jumped into the river and died.
I like the story because it is interesting and it teaches us that we should stay calm when facing challenges.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、童话故事话题写作、英语语句连贯
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，情节叙述简洁清晰，观点积极向上，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“My Favourite Story”，需围绕提示的四个要点（故事名称、角色、内容、个人看法）写作，词数约70词。解题思路：第一步，审题确定写作核心；第二步，选取熟悉的童话故事；第三步，按“点出故事名→简述核心情节→表达个人感悟”的结构组织内容；第四步，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作时先点明最喜欢的故事名称，再介绍故事中的角色，接着简述关键情节（猴子利用老虎的倒影骗其跳河），最后表达对故事的看法，传递积极道理，同时注意用词准确、语句通顺，控制词数。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Favourite Story
I love reading,and I have read many stories. My favourite one is The Monkey and the Tiger.
There lived a tiger in the forest. All the animals were afraid of him. A monkey decided not to let the tiger live here. One day,the monkey said to the tiger,“Hey,Mr Tiger. Do you know that another tiger also lives here? He said he wasn't afraid of you at all.” The tiger was very angry. He asked the monkey to take him to see it. The monkey took the tiger to a river.“Look into the river,Mr Tiger. There he is.” The tiger looked into the river and found another tiger was looking at him angrily. He jumped into the river and died.
I like the story because it is interesting and it teaches us that we should stay calm when facing challenges.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、童话故事话题写作、英语语句连贯
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，情节叙述简洁清晰，观点积极向上，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】
0.7
