九、书面表达
(2024 南通期末)最美的风景不一定在远
方。若心中有爱,眼中有景,生活中处处有美
景。家乡的美更是生命中最美好的记忆。作为
青少年的我们,有责任和义务宣传我们家乡的
美。请你以"Beauty of my hometown"为题,围绕
以下几个方面来介绍你家乡的美。

注意:
1. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,
不计入总词数。
2. 文中须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥,
使全文连贯、通顺。
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关
信息。
参考词汇
环境 environment 狼山 the Wolf Hill
南通博物苑 Nantong Museum
洲际绿博园 Zhou Ji Green Expo Garden
南通森林野生动物园 Nantong Forest Safari Park
Beauty of my hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something about my
hometown. It's the beauty in my eyes.





I'm really proud of my hometown. I hope
more and more people can come here to enjoy the
beauty of it.

One possible version:
Beauty of my hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something
about my hometown. It's the beauty in my
eyes.
My hometown is a modern and
beautiful city near the sea. The air is very
fresh. The water is green and clear. The
roads are clean and there are trees and
flowers on each side of the roads. We can
smell flowers and hear birds sing
everywhere. People live a happy and
comfortable life here. What's more, there
are lots of places to visit, such as Nantong
Museum, Zhou Ji Green Expo Garden,
Nantong Forest Safari Park and so on. You
can enjoy the beauty of view and learn more
about Nantong at the same time.
People here are very kind and
helpful. My neighbours are always ready to
help others. Many of them are volunteers of
our community centre. They have different
skills. They can help people with all kinds
of problems.
I'm really proud of my hometown. I
hope more and more people can come here
to enjoy the beauty of it.

【分析】
首先，我们要明确本次书面表达的核心是介绍家乡的“景之美”和“人之美”，需覆盖环境、景点、邻居、志愿者这四个要点。解题思路如下：
1. 衔接已给出的开头，先切入景之美：先描绘家乡的整体环境，比如空气、水域、道路等，让读者直观感受到环境的优美；再结合题目给出的参考景点举例，丰富景美的内容。
2. 接着过渡到人之美：先写邻居的热心友善，再拓展到社区志愿者的奉献，体现家乡人的美好品质。
3. 注意使用过渡词如What's more让段落衔接自然，同时控制词数，语言要符合英语表达习惯，避免出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 景之美段落：先描述家乡的自然与生活环境，用“The air is very fresh. The water is green and clear. The roads are clean and there are trees and flowers on each side of the roads.”这类句子展现环境优美；再用“such as Nantong Museum, Zhou Ji Green Expo Garden, Nantong Forest Safari Park and so on”列举景点，补充“You can enjoy the beauty of view and learn more about Nantong at the same time.”来体现景点的价值。
2. 人之美段落：用“People here are very kind and helpful.”总起，接着写“My neighbours are always ready to help others.”描述邻居的品质，再拓展“Many of them are volunteers of our community centre. They have different skills. They can help people with all kinds of problems.”体现志愿者的作用，完整覆盖要点。
3. 整体语言简洁流畅，过渡自然，符合词数要求，且内容完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
Beauty of my hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown. It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown is a modern and beautiful city near the sea. The air is very fresh. The water is green and clear. The roads are clean and there are trees and flowers on each side of the roads. We can smell flowers and hear birds sing everywhere. People live a happy and comfortable life here. What's more, there are lots of places to visit, such as Nantong Museum, Zhou Ji Green Expo Garden, Nantong Forest Safari Park and so on. You can enjoy the beauty of view and learn more about Nantong at the same time.
People here are very kind and helpful. My neighbours are always ready to help others. Many of them are volunteers of our community centre. They have different skills. They can help people with all kinds of problems.
I'm really proud of my hometown. I hope more and more people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
【知识点】
家乡主题英语写作、英语段落衔接技巧、日常交际表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖“景之美”和“人之美”的所有要点，内容充实且有条理。使用了丰富的描述性词汇和过渡词，语言流畅自然，准确传达出对家乡的喜爱与自豪之情，符合书面表达的评分标准，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7

一、完形填空
2024南京玄武期中 Do you live in a big city? I do. Every day, the streets are with millions of people, each of them living in their own way. It seems that people from everywhere of the planet live here. And every person has their own unique story.
However, people here can often feel quite . It's a strange contradiction—you're surrounded by other people at every moment, you still feel like you're the only person on the planet. You can a crowd and feel like you're floating alone in space. the busiest shopping mall can feel like a foreign planet.
Have you ever felt like this? It's not an unusual . Living in a crowded city can make people feel this way. There are many ways to this feeling—but perhaps the best way is to talk with your friends.
When I'm feeling lonely or sad, the first thing I do is my phone and text a friend. All of us are busy with work and our own matters—but my closest friends always take the time to reply. In a world where feelings of loneliness can come so easily, friends are the best antidote to these feelings. I've gotten through of the hardest times in my life with the help of my friends. Take time to develop your own . You never know when you will need someone to help you.
1. A. quiet B. noisy C. nice D. safe
2. A. angry B. lonely
C. afraid D. surprised
3. A. but B. if C. so D. or
4. A. walk through B. walk down
C. look through D. look down
5. A. Still B. Once C. Even D. Just
6. A. way B. story C. city D. feeling
7. A. prepare for B. worry about
C. look after D. deal with
8. A. pick up B. dress up
C. show up D. look up
9. A. none B. any
C. neither D. some
10. A. hobbies B. knowledge
C. friendships D. abilities

【语篇导读】生活在大城市的人们常常感
到孤独,作者建议通过与朋友交谈来缓
解这种孤独感。
1. B 提示:quiet 安静的;noisy 吵闹的;nice 漂
亮的;safe 安全的。句意:每天,街道上挤着
数百万人,非常吵闹,每个人都以自己的方式
生活。
2. B 提示:angry 生气的;lonely 孤独的;afraid
害怕的;surprised 惊讶的。句意:然而,这里
的人们可能经常感到很孤独。
3. A 提示:but 但是;if 如果;so 所以;or 或者。
句意:这是一个奇怪的矛盾——你每时每刻
都被其他人围绕着,但你仍然觉得自己是这
个星球上唯一的人。
4. A 提示:walk through 穿过;walk down 沿
着……走;look through 浏览;look down 俯视。
句意:你可以穿过人群,感觉自己独自在太空
中漂浮。
5. C 提示:still 仍然;once 曾经;even 甚至;just
仅仅。句意:甚至最繁忙的购物中心也会感
觉像一个外星球。
6. D 提示:way 方法;story 故事;city 城市;
feeling 感觉。句意:这不是一种不寻常的
感觉。
7. D 提示:prepare for 为……做准备;worry
about 担忧;look after 照顾;deal with 处理。句
意:有很多方法可以处理这种感觉——但也
许最好的方法是和你的朋友谈谈。
8. A 提示:pick up 拿起;dress up 装扮;show
up 出现;look up 查阅。句意:当我感到孤独
或悲伤时,我做的第一件事就是拿起手机给
朋友发短信。
9. D 提示:none 没有一个;any 任何;neither 两
者都不;some 一些。句意:在朋友的帮助下,
我度过了人生中最艰难的一些时光。
10. C 提示:hobby 爱好;knowledge 知识;
friendship 友谊;ability 能力。句意:花点时
间发展你自己的友谊。

【分析】
首先通读全文，把握文章主旨：本文讲述了生活在大城市的人们常感到孤独，作者提出与朋友交流是缓解这种情绪的最佳方法，还分享了自己的经历并建议发展友谊。
解题时，需结合上下文语境、词汇含义以及句子逻辑关系来逐一分析选项：
1. 第一空，根据前文“streets are ______ with millions of people”，街道上有数百万人，结合生活常识，这样的街道应该是吵闹的，由此确定选项。
2. 第二空，根据后文“you still feel like you're the only person on the planet”以及后文的“feeling”提示，可知人们会感到孤独，从而锁定答案。
3. 第三空，前文“you're surrounded by other people”和后文“you still feel like you're the only person”是转折关系，需选择转折连词。
4. 第四空，根据“a crowd”和“feel like you're floating alone in space”，这里表达“穿过人群”的含义，结合短语辨析选择合适的搭配。
5. 第五空，前文说穿过人群像独自在太空，后文说最繁忙的购物中心像外星球，是递进加强语气，用even来突出这种孤独感的强烈。
6. 第六空，前文“Have you ever felt like this?”中的“this”指的是这种孤独的情绪，所以此处应填表示“感觉”的词汇。
7. 第七空，根据后文“but perhaps the best way is to talk with your friends”，这里是说处理这种孤独感的方法，选择表示“处理”的短语。
8. 第八空，根据“my phone and text a friend”，可知是拿起手机发短信，结合短语含义选择。
9. 第九空，根据“the hardest times in my life”，这里表示“一些艰难的时光”，结合代词的用法选择合适的词。
10. 第十空，前文一直在强调朋友的帮助，所以这里建议发展友谊，选择对应的词汇。
【解析】
1. 第1题：选项A安静的；B吵闹的；C漂亮的；D安全的。根据“streets are ______ with millions of people”，街道上有数百万的人，结合语境可知街道是吵闹的，故选B。
2. 第2题：选项A生气的；B孤独的；C害怕的；D惊讶的。根据后文“you still feel like you're the only person on the planet”可知，人们会感到孤独，故选B。
3. 第3题：选项A但是；B如果；C所以；D或者。前文“你每时每刻都被其他人围绕着”和后文“你仍然觉得自己是这个星球上唯一的人”是转折关系，用but连接，故选A。
4. 第4题：选项A穿过；B沿着……走；C浏览；D俯视。根据“a crowd”和“feel like you're floating alone in space”，此处表达“穿过人群”，walk through符合语境，故选A。
5. 第5题：选项A仍然；B曾经；C甚至；D仅仅。前文描述穿过人群的孤独感，后文进一步说最繁忙的购物中心也像外星球，even用来加强语气，突出孤独感，故选C。
6. 第6题：选项A方法；B故事；C城市；D感觉。前文“Have you ever felt like this?”中的“this”指的是孤独的感觉，所以此处填feeling，故选D。
7. 第7题：选项A为……做准备；B担忧；C照顾；D处理。根据后文“but perhaps the best way is to talk with your friends”，这里指处理这种孤独感的方法，deal with符合语境，故选D。
8. 第8题：选项A拿起；B装扮；C出现；D查阅。根据“my phone and text a friend”，可知是拿起手机发短信，pick up符合题意，故选A。
9. 第9题：选项A没有一个；B任何；C两者都不；D一些。根据“the hardest times in my life”，此处表示“人生中一些最艰难的时光”，some符合语境，故选D。
10. 第10题：选项A爱好；B知识；C友谊；D能力。前文强调朋友的帮助能缓解孤独，所以建议发展友谊，friendships符合题意，故选C。
【答案】
1. B 2. B 3. A 4. A 5. C 6. D 7. D 8. A 9. D 10. C
【知识点】
1. 完形填空词义辨析
2. 语境理解
3. 逻辑关系判断
【点评】
本文围绕大城市中的孤独感展开，贴近生活实际，解题关键在于紧密结合上下文语境，准确辨析词汇和短语的含义，同时把握句子间的逻辑关系。通过这篇完形填空，能帮助学生提升在语境中运用词汇的能力，也引导学生关注人际交往的重要性。
【难度系数】
0.6