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请根据表格中的要点，以“A girl's life was changed by WWF”为题写一篇短文，不少于90词。
A girl's life was changed by WWF
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest to make a living, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help keep forests and wild animals safe.
答案
One possible version:
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest to make a living, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help keep forests and wild animals safe.
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest to make a living, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help keep forests and wild animals safe.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先明确核心要求：要写一篇题为A girl's life was changed by WWF的记叙文，覆盖表格给出的全部要点，字数不少于90词。我们可以按照时间线的逻辑搭建文章框架，避免遗漏要点：第一步先开篇介绍主人公基础信息，交代Lila来自巴西、全家依靠森林生活、过去看着森林逐渐消失的背景；第二步写关键转折点，补充WWF工作人员到访的合理细节；第三步描述Lila现在加入环境教育项目后的状态；最后补充贴合主题的未来期望完成全文。写作时注意对应不同时间节点使用正确时态，过去经历用一般过去时，当前状态用一般现在时，未来设想用一般将来时，保证语句通顺、要点完整。
【解析】
我们按照搭建的叙事框架逐步完成写作：
1. 开篇铺垫背景：点明主人公身份，说明她的家庭原本依靠森林谋生，过去眼看着森林一点点消失，此前她并没有意识到保护森林的重要性，完成基础信息的交代。
2. 叙述转折事件：补充WWF工作人员到访的细节，说明工作人员向当地居民科普保护森林、保护野生动物的意义，号召当地孩子学习自然相关知识，守护自己的家园，让转折点内容更具体饱满。
3. 描述当下状态：说明Lila之后加入了环境教育项目，现在每周都参与自然课程，享受探索自然的过程，十分感谢WWF给她带来的改变。
4. 收尾写未来期望：贴合环保主题，写出Lila想要成为自然保护者，希望守护好森林和野生动物的心愿，完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version:
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest to make a living, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help keep forests and wild animals safe.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作
时态正确运用
要点整合表达
【点评】
本题属于提示类记叙文写作，给出的要点清晰明确，引导学生按照时间先后顺序串联完整故事，既考察学生对一般过去时、一般现在时等基础时态的掌握能力，也锻炼学生整合零散信息、补充合理细节让行文流畅饱满的写作能力，同时渗透了生态保护的主题引导。
【难度系数】
0.65
拿到这道写作题，首先明确核心要求：要写一篇题为A girl's life was changed by WWF的记叙文，覆盖表格给出的全部要点，字数不少于90词。我们可以按照时间线的逻辑搭建文章框架，避免遗漏要点：第一步先开篇介绍主人公基础信息，交代Lila来自巴西、全家依靠森林生活、过去看着森林逐渐消失的背景；第二步写关键转折点，补充WWF工作人员到访的合理细节；第三步描述Lila现在加入环境教育项目后的状态；最后补充贴合主题的未来期望完成全文。写作时注意对应不同时间节点使用正确时态，过去经历用一般过去时，当前状态用一般现在时，未来设想用一般将来时，保证语句通顺、要点完整。
【解析】
我们按照搭建的叙事框架逐步完成写作：
1. 开篇铺垫背景：点明主人公身份，说明她的家庭原本依靠森林谋生，过去眼看着森林一点点消失，此前她并没有意识到保护森林的重要性，完成基础信息的交代。
2. 叙述转折事件：补充WWF工作人员到访的细节，说明工作人员向当地居民科普保护森林、保护野生动物的意义，号召当地孩子学习自然相关知识，守护自己的家园，让转折点内容更具体饱满。
3. 描述当下状态：说明Lila之后加入了环境教育项目，现在每周都参与自然课程，享受探索自然的过程，十分感谢WWF给她带来的改变。
4. 收尾写未来期望：贴合环保主题，写出Lila想要成为自然保护者，希望守护好森林和野生动物的心愿，完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version:
A girl's life was changed by WWF
Lila is a girl from Brazil. Her family depended on the forest to make a living, but they watched it disappear little by little. Lila didn't know it is important to protect it until she met a WWF worker.
One day, a WWF worker came to Lila's town and talked about why people needed to save forests. He said that it was very important for children to protect the environment. He wanted all the children in the town to learn about wild animals and how to protect their homes.
A month later, Lila joined an environmental education programme. Now she goes to nature classes every week. She enjoys exploring nature and is grateful to WWF.
Lila says that she wants to be a nature protector in the future. She hopes she can help keep forests and wild animals safe.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作
时态正确运用
要点整合表达
【点评】
本题属于提示类记叙文写作，给出的要点清晰明确，引导学生按照时间先后顺序串联完整故事，既考察学生对一般过去时、一般现在时等基础时态的掌握能力，也锻炼学生整合零散信息、补充合理细节让行文流畅饱满的写作能力，同时渗透了生态保护的主题引导。
【难度系数】
0.65
