十二、书面表达。
吴梅生病了,所以她没有去上学。请根据问题提示写一篇短文介绍一下她的病情以及医生的建议。要求:语句通顺、语法正确、不少于40词。

吴梅生病了,所以她没有去上学。请根据问题提示写一篇短文介绍一下她的病情以及医生的建议。要求:语句通顺、语法正确、不少于40词。
答案
示例:
Wu Mei feels bad and she
doesn't go to school. She feels bad
because she eats too much ice
cream. Now she has a toothache.
The doctor says that she should
take some medicine and brush her
teeth. She shouldn't eat any sweets.
She can get well soon.
Wu Mei feels bad and she
doesn't go to school. She feels bad
because she eats too much ice
cream. Now she has a toothache.
The doctor says that she should
take some medicine and brush her
teeth. She shouldn't eat any sweets.
She can get well soon.
解析
【分析】
首先,我们需要紧扣题目中的三个问题提示来构建短文:
1. 先回答“What's wrong with Wu Mei?”,点明吴梅身体不适,无法上学,具体症状是牙痛;
2. 接着回答“Why does Wu Mei feel bad?”,说明她不舒服的原因是吃了太多冰淇淋;
3. 最后回答“What should/shouldn't Wu Mei do?”,写出医生给出的建议,包括应该做的事和不应该做的事。同时要保证语句通顺、语法正确,字数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:直接说明吴梅身体不适,没能去上学,引出她的病情:"Wu Mei feels bad and she doesn't go to school."
2. 说明病因:解释她不舒服的原因是吃太多冰淇淋,进而导致牙痛:"She feels bad because she eats too much ice cream. Now she has a toothache."
3. 给出建议:写出医生的建议,用should表达应该做的事,shouldn't表达不应该做的事:"The doctor says that she should take some medicine and brush her teeth. She shouldn't eat any sweets."
4. 结尾补充:加上一句祝福,让短文更完整:"She can get well soon."
【答案】
Wu Mei feels bad and she
doesn't go to school. She feels bad
because she eats too much ice
cream. Now she has a toothache.
The doctor says that she should
take some medicine and brush her
teeth. She shouldn't eat any sweets.
She can get well soon.
【知识点】
1. 一般现在时运用
2. should/shouldn't提建议
3. 疾病类英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目给出的三个问题提示,逻辑清晰,层次分明,准确运用了一般现在时和提建议的句型,语句通顺、语法正确,很好地完成了介绍吴梅病情和医生建议的任务,符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先,我们需要紧扣题目中的三个问题提示来构建短文:
1. 先回答“What's wrong with Wu Mei?”,点明吴梅身体不适,无法上学,具体症状是牙痛;
2. 接着回答“Why does Wu Mei feel bad?”,说明她不舒服的原因是吃了太多冰淇淋;
3. 最后回答“What should/shouldn't Wu Mei do?”,写出医生给出的建议,包括应该做的事和不应该做的事。同时要保证语句通顺、语法正确,字数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇引入:直接说明吴梅身体不适,没能去上学,引出她的病情:"Wu Mei feels bad and she doesn't go to school."
2. 说明病因:解释她不舒服的原因是吃太多冰淇淋,进而导致牙痛:"She feels bad because she eats too much ice cream. Now she has a toothache."
3. 给出建议:写出医生的建议,用should表达应该做的事,shouldn't表达不应该做的事:"The doctor says that she should take some medicine and brush her teeth. She shouldn't eat any sweets."
4. 结尾补充:加上一句祝福,让短文更完整:"She can get well soon."
【答案】
Wu Mei feels bad and she
doesn't go to school. She feels bad
because she eats too much ice
cream. Now she has a toothache.
The doctor says that she should
take some medicine and brush her
teeth. She shouldn't eat any sweets.
She can get well soon.
【知识点】
1. 一般现在时运用
2. should/shouldn't提建议
3. 疾病类英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目给出的三个问题提示,逻辑清晰,层次分明,准确运用了一般现在时和提建议的句型,语句通顺、语法正确,很好地完成了介绍吴梅病情和医生建议的任务,符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.8
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