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七、书面表达。(8分)
Chip将在7月15日回国，他的朋友们将为他举办一个送别会。
要求：1. 内容须覆盖表格中提示的信息；2. 注意使用正确的时态；3. 不少于40词；4. 注意大小写及标点符号规范。
A goodbye party
Chip will go back to London on the fifteenth of July. ___
______
Chip将在7月15日回国，他的朋友们将为他举办一个送别会。
要求：1. 内容须覆盖表格中提示的信息；2. 注意使用正确的时态；3. 不少于40词；4. 注意大小写及标点符号规范。
A goodbye party
Chip will go back to London on the fifteenth of July. ___
______
答案
示例： A goodbye party
Chip will go back to London on the fifteenth of July. All his friends are going to give him a special goodbye party to say thank you and wish him well. They will have the party at Peter's home on the 12th of July.
Lily will bring some fresh fruit like juicy apples and sweet grapes. Amy will buy some snacks, such as crispy chips and yummy cookies. Alice will prepare some nice presents, maybe a photo album or a goodbye card. At the party, they will play with toys, dance to music and sing Chip's favourite songs. Peter's mum will make a delicious cake with "Best Wishes, Chip!" on it. Everyone will take photos together and share happy memories. Chip will feel very happy before his trip.
Chip will go back to London on the fifteenth of July. All his friends are going to give him a special goodbye party to say thank you and wish him well. They will have the party at Peter's home on the 12th of July.
Lily will bring some fresh fruit like juicy apples and sweet grapes. Amy will buy some snacks, such as crispy chips and yummy cookies. Alice will prepare some nice presents, maybe a photo album or a goodbye card. At the party, they will play with toys, dance to music and sing Chip's favourite songs. Peter's mum will make a delicious cake with "Best Wishes, Chip!" on it. Everyone will take photos together and share happy memories. Chip will feel very happy before his trip.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇围绕送别派对展开的英语书面表达题。解题时，第一步需承接题目给出的开头句，点明朋友们举办送别会的目的，让文章开篇自然流畅；第二步要交代清楚派对的时间与地点，这是活动类写作的核心要素；第三步，为丰富内容，需具体描述不同朋友为派对准备的物品，用具体的例子来充实细节；第四步，介绍派对上的活动，让场景更生动真实；最后收尾表达Chip的心情，使文章结构完整。同时要注意使用一般将来时（will/be going to）描述计划中的事项，满足字数要求，严格规范大小写及标点符号。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接：在题目给出的句子后，点明送别会的目的，如“All his friends are going to give him a special goodbye party to say thank you and wish him well.”，自然引出派对主题。
2. 交代基本信息：明确派对的时间和地点，“They will have the party at Peter's home on the 12th of July.”，让读者清晰了解活动的基本安排。
3. 细节描写：分别介绍不同朋友的准备工作，比如Lily携带新鲜水果、Amy采购零食、Alice准备礼物，并用具体的物品名称（apples, grapes, chips等）让内容更具象。
4. 活动描述：列举派对上的多样活动，如“play with toys, dance to music and sing Chip's favourite songs”，补充Peter妈妈制作主题蛋糕的细节，让场景更饱满。
5. 收尾升华：描述大家的互动及Chip的心情，“Everyone will take photos together and share happy memories. Chip will feel very happy before his trip.”，使文章情感真挚，结构完整。
【答案】
A goodbye party
Chip will go back to London on the fifteenth of July. All his friends are going to give him a special goodbye party to say thank you and wish him well. They will have the party at Peter's home on the 12th of July.
Lily will bring some fresh fruit like juicy apples and sweet grapes. Amy will buy some snacks, such as crispy chips and yummy cookies. Alice will prepare some nice presents, maybe a photo album or a goodbye card. At the party, they will play with toys, dance to music and sing Chip's favourite songs. Peter's mum will make a delicious cake with "Best Wishes, Chip!" on it. Everyone will take photos together and share happy memories. Chip will feel very happy before his trip.
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时用法
2. 英语活动类写作
3. 日常词汇搭配
【点评】
这篇范文内容完整，覆盖了送别派对的目的、时间、地点、人员准备及活动安排等核心要素，时态运用准确，语言生动具体，使用了丰富的词汇和细节描写，符合题目要求，能很好地传递朋友们对Chip的送别之情，是一篇优秀的活动类书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们要明确这是一篇围绕送别派对展开的英语书面表达题。解题时，第一步需承接题目给出的开头句，点明朋友们举办送别会的目的，让文章开篇自然流畅；第二步要交代清楚派对的时间与地点，这是活动类写作的核心要素；第三步，为丰富内容，需具体描述不同朋友为派对准备的物品，用具体的例子来充实细节；第四步，介绍派对上的活动，让场景更生动真实；最后收尾表达Chip的心情，使文章结构完整。同时要注意使用一般将来时（will/be going to）描述计划中的事项，满足字数要求，严格规范大小写及标点符号。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接：在题目给出的句子后，点明送别会的目的，如“All his friends are going to give him a special goodbye party to say thank you and wish him well.”，自然引出派对主题。
2. 交代基本信息：明确派对的时间和地点，“They will have the party at Peter's home on the 12th of July.”，让读者清晰了解活动的基本安排。
3. 细节描写：分别介绍不同朋友的准备工作，比如Lily携带新鲜水果、Amy采购零食、Alice准备礼物，并用具体的物品名称（apples, grapes, chips等）让内容更具象。
4. 活动描述：列举派对上的多样活动，如“play with toys, dance to music and sing Chip's favourite songs”，补充Peter妈妈制作主题蛋糕的细节，让场景更饱满。
5. 收尾升华：描述大家的互动及Chip的心情，“Everyone will take photos together and share happy memories. Chip will feel very happy before his trip.”，使文章情感真挚，结构完整。
【答案】
A goodbye party
Chip will go back to London on the fifteenth of July. All his friends are going to give him a special goodbye party to say thank you and wish him well. They will have the party at Peter's home on the 12th of July.
Lily will bring some fresh fruit like juicy apples and sweet grapes. Amy will buy some snacks, such as crispy chips and yummy cookies. Alice will prepare some nice presents, maybe a photo album or a goodbye card. At the party, they will play with toys, dance to music and sing Chip's favourite songs. Peter's mum will make a delicious cake with "Best Wishes, Chip!" on it. Everyone will take photos together and share happy memories. Chip will feel very happy before his trip.
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时用法
2. 英语活动类写作
3. 日常词汇搭配
【点评】
这篇范文内容完整，覆盖了送别派对的目的、时间、地点、人员准备及活动安排等核心要素，时态运用准确，语言生动具体，使用了丰富的词汇和细节描写，符合题目要求，能很好地传递朋友们对Chip的送别之情，是一篇优秀的活动类书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
