假如你是李华,你刚结交的英国笔友Alan给你发了一封邮件。请你根据邮件内容用英语给他回一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm glad to be your new penfriend. I'm Alan, a student from the UK. I'm 13 years old. I like my family and school. I want to know something about you and your school life. Do you like sports? What's your favourite subject and why? What activities do you have? Have a nice day! Please write to me soon.
Alan
注意:1. 包含邮件中所有要点,可适当增加细节;2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;3. 书写规范、清晰、注意大小写和标点;4. 词数70左右,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
I'm happy to get your email. Now let me tell you something about me and my school life.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Li Hua,
I'm glad to be your new penfriend. I'm Alan, a student from the UK. I'm 13 years old. I like my family and school. I want to know something about you and your school life. Do you like sports? What's your favourite subject and why? What activities do you have? Have a nice day! Please write to me soon.
Alan
注意:1. 包含邮件中所有要点,可适当增加细节;2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;3. 书写规范、清晰、注意大小写和标点;4. 词数70左右,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
I'm happy to get your email. Now let me tell you something about me and my school life.
I am 13 years old, too. I like sports very much. I often play basketball with my friends after class.
My favourite subject is English. I think it's very interesting and useful.
At school, we have many activities. We have a sports meet every year and an English party in December. I like my school life.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
标准提分版:
Dear Alan,
I'm happy to get your email. Now let me tell you something about me and my school life.
I am 13 years old, too. I like sports very much. I often play basketball with my friends after class. My favourite subject is English. I think it's very interesting and useful. At school, we have many activities. We have a sports meet every year and an English party in December. I like my school life.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
进阶优化版:
Dear Alan,
I'm happy to get your email. Now let me tell you something about me and my school life.
I'm 13, just like you. I'm really into sports. I play basketball on the school team and we practise every afternoon. It's not only fun but also helpful. My favourite subject is English because I love reading English stories and watching movies. It helps me learn about different cultures. Our school is very lively. We have a big book fair in spring and an English drama competition every year. They are always the highlights of our school life.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Alan,
I'm happy to get your email. Now let me tell you something about me and my school life.
I am 13 years old, too. I like sports very much. I often play basketball with my friends after class. My favourite subject is English. I think it's very interesting and useful. At school, we have many activities. We have a sports meet every year and an English party in December. I like my school life.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
进阶优化版:
Dear Alan,
I'm happy to get your email. Now let me tell you something about me and my school life.
I'm 13, just like you. I'm really into sports. I play basketball on the school team and we practise every afternoon. It's not only fun but also helpful. My favourite subject is English because I love reading English stories and watching movies. It helps me learn about different cultures. Our school is very lively. We have a big book fair in spring and an English drama competition every year. They are always the highlights of our school life.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题,需回复英国笔友Alan的邮件,需覆盖其提出的所有问题:年龄、是否喜欢运动、最喜欢的科目及原因、学校活动。解题思路:1. 先回应年龄(与Alan同岁);2. 说明喜欢的运动及相关细节;3. 阐述最喜欢的科目及理由;4. 介绍学校的活动,确保所有要点齐全,语言简洁,符合词数要求,无真实信息,书写规范。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤:1. 开头已给出,直接衔接内容;2. 回应年龄:I am 13 years old, too;3. 说明运动喜好:I like sports very much. I often play basketball with my friends after class;4. 说明最喜欢的科目及原因:My favourite subject is English. I think it's very interesting and useful;5. 介绍学校活动:At school, we have many activities. We have a sports meet every year and an English party in December;6. 结尾呼应学校生活,符合要求,词数约70,覆盖所有要点,语言通顺。
【答案】
I am 13 years old, too. I like sports very much. I often play basketball with my friends after class. My favourite subject is English. I think it's very interesting and useful. At school, we have many activities. We have a sports meet every year and an English party in December. I like my school life.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点表达、英语实用写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语实用写作能力,要求准确回应笔友的所有问题,内容充实,语言规范,符合书信格式,难度适中,适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书信写作题,需回复英国笔友Alan的邮件,需覆盖其提出的所有问题:年龄、是否喜欢运动、最喜欢的科目及原因、学校活动。解题思路:1. 先回应年龄(与Alan同岁);2. 说明喜欢的运动及相关细节;3. 阐述最喜欢的科目及理由;4. 介绍学校的活动,确保所有要点齐全,语言简洁,符合词数要求,无真实信息,书写规范。
【解析】
写作时遵循以下步骤:1. 开头已给出,直接衔接内容;2. 回应年龄:I am 13 years old, too;3. 说明运动喜好:I like sports very much. I often play basketball with my friends after class;4. 说明最喜欢的科目及原因:My favourite subject is English. I think it's very interesting and useful;5. 介绍学校活动:At school, we have many activities. We have a sports meet every year and an English party in December;6. 结尾呼应学校生活,符合要求,词数约70,覆盖所有要点,语言通顺。
【答案】
I am 13 years old, too. I like sports very much. I often play basketball with my friends after class. My favourite subject is English. I think it's very interesting and useful. At school, we have many activities. We have a sports meet every year and an English party in December. I like my school life.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、要点表达、英语实用写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语实用写作能力,要求准确回应笔友的所有问题,内容充实,语言规范,符合书信格式,难度适中,适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.5
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