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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文,向大家介绍你的好朋友。
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数80左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Best Friend
I have a good friend.
请你根据下表提供的信息,用英语写一篇短文,向大家介绍你的好朋友。
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数80左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Best Friend
I have a good friend.
答案
[参考范文]
My Best Friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Lisa. She is 13 and studies in Class 2, Grade 7. She lives with her parents and her sister. Lisa has a lovely pet dog, and she likes listening to music. She loves eating hot pot because it’s tasty and fun to share with friends. In her free time, she enjoys playing basketball with her classmates after school. Lisa is very kind and always ready to help others. I’m so lucky to have such a wonderful friend!
My Best Friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Lisa. She is 13 and studies in Class 2, Grade 7. She lives with her parents and her sister. Lisa has a lovely pet dog, and she likes listening to music. She loves eating hot pot because it’s tasty and fun to share with friends. In her free time, she enjoys playing basketball with her classmates after school. Lisa is very kind and always ready to help others. I’m so lucky to have such a wonderful friend!
解析
【分析】
本题要求根据表格提供的信息，用英语写一篇介绍好朋友的短文，开头已给出，需覆盖表格中所有关键信息（姓名、年龄、班级、家庭成员、宠物、爱好、喜爱的食物和运动），词数约80，语言需通顺自然，符合英语表达习惯。解题思路：先承接开头引出朋友名字，再依次介绍个人基本信息、家庭情况、宠物、爱好、喜爱的食物和运动，最后添加一句对朋友的评价使内容完整，确保所有表格信息自然融入，避免生硬罗列。
【解析】
1. 承接开头引出朋友名字：Her name is Lisa.
2. 介绍基本信息：She is 13 and studies in Class 2, Grade 7.
3. 说明家庭成员：She lives with her parents and her sister.
4. 介绍宠物和爱好：She has a lovely pet dog, and she likes listening to music.
5. 说明喜爱的食物：She loves eating hot pot because it’s tasty and fun to share with friends.
6. 介绍喜爱的运动：In her free time, she enjoys playing basketball with her classmates after school.
7. 添加评价完善内容：Lisa is very kind and always ready to help others. I’m so lucky to have such a wonderful friend!
【答案】
My Best Friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Lisa. She is 13 and studies in Class 2, Grade 7. She lives with her parents and her sister. Lisa has a lovely pet dog, and she likes listening to music. She loves eating hot pot because it’s tasty and fun to share with friends. In her free time, she enjoys playing basketball with her classmates after school. Lisa is very kind and always ready to help others. I’m so lucky to have such a wonderful friend!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、信息整合、英语句式运用
【点评】
本题考查学生根据给定信息进行英语写作的能力，要求准确提取表格关键信息并合理组织成逻辑连贯的短文，是基础英语写作题型，注重信息转化和语言表达的规范性。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求根据表格提供的信息，用英语写一篇介绍好朋友的短文，开头已给出，需覆盖表格中所有关键信息（姓名、年龄、班级、家庭成员、宠物、爱好、喜爱的食物和运动），词数约80，语言需通顺自然，符合英语表达习惯。解题思路：先承接开头引出朋友名字，再依次介绍个人基本信息、家庭情况、宠物、爱好、喜爱的食物和运动，最后添加一句对朋友的评价使内容完整，确保所有表格信息自然融入，避免生硬罗列。
【解析】
1. 承接开头引出朋友名字：Her name is Lisa.
2. 介绍基本信息：She is 13 and studies in Class 2, Grade 7.
3. 说明家庭成员：She lives with her parents and her sister.
4. 介绍宠物和爱好：She has a lovely pet dog, and she likes listening to music.
5. 说明喜爱的食物：She loves eating hot pot because it’s tasty and fun to share with friends.
6. 介绍喜爱的运动：In her free time, she enjoys playing basketball with her classmates after school.
7. 添加评价完善内容：Lisa is very kind and always ready to help others. I’m so lucky to have such a wonderful friend!
【答案】
My Best Friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Lisa. She is 13 and studies in Class 2, Grade 7. She lives with her parents and her sister. Lisa has a lovely pet dog, and she likes listening to music. She loves eating hot pot because it’s tasty and fun to share with friends. In her free time, she enjoys playing basketball with her classmates after school. Lisa is very kind and always ready to help others. I’m so lucky to have such a wonderful friend!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、信息整合、英语句式运用
【点评】
本题考查学生根据给定信息进行英语写作的能力，要求准确提取表格关键信息并合理组织成逻辑连贯的短文，是基础英语写作题型，注重信息转化和语言表达的规范性。
【难度系数】
0.6
