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【书面表达】
(2025·芜湖)假设你是李华,近日你校开展了以"倡导互助活动,一日志愿者体验"为主题的实践活动。请你结合右图图示信息,用英语给你的英国笔友 Jim 写一封信,与他分享活动过程和感受。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 80~100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jim,
How is everything going?
Yours,
Li Hua
(2025·芜湖)假设你是李华,近日你校开展了以"倡导互助活动,一日志愿者体验"为主题的实践活动。请你结合右图图示信息,用英语给你的英国笔友 Jim 写一封信,与他分享活动过程和感受。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数 80~100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jim,
How is everything going?
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How is everything going? On 12th September, our school held an activity with the topic of "One-Day Volunteer Experience". We had some activities in our school. On that day, we cleaned up the school and recycled waste paper and waste plastic. We also planted many trees and flowers in the school garden. To help other students know more about the importance of being a volunteer, we also made some posters to spread it. We encouraged students to try their best to help others.
Through the activities, we are happy that we can make a difference to our society.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
How is everything going? On 12th September, our school held an activity with the topic of "One-Day Volunteer Experience". We had some activities in our school. On that day, we cleaned up the school and recycled waste paper and waste plastic. We also planted many trees and flowers in the school garden. To help other students know more about the importance of being a volunteer, we also made some posters to spread it. We encouraged students to try their best to help others.
Through the activities, we are happy that we can make a difference to our society.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题，需给笔友Jim分享“一日志愿者体验”活动。解题思路：1. 明确书信结构，开头结尾已给出，补充中间内容；2. 提取图示所有关键信息：活动日期（9月12日）、地点（学校）、活动内容（打扫卫生、种植、宣传志愿理念）、活动感受；3. 将信息转化为通顺英语，适当添加细节（如回收废品、做海报），控制词数80-100，避免真实信息，符合书信语气。
【解析】
首先点明活动的时间、主题与地点：On 12th September, our school held an activity with the topic of "One-Day Volunteer Experience". We had some activities in our school. 接着具体说明活动内容：We cleaned up the school and recycled waste paper and waste plastic. We also planted many trees and flowers in the school garden. To spread the idea of volunteering, we made posters to help others know its importance and encouraged them to help. 最后表达活动感受：Through the activities, we are happy that we can make a difference to our society. 这样既涵盖所有图示信息，又连贯自然，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How is everything going? On 12th September, our school held an activity with the topic of "One-Day Volunteer Experience". We had some activities in our school. On that day, we cleaned up the school and recycled waste paper and waste plastic. We also planted many trees and flowers in the school garden. To help other students know more about the importance of being a volunteer, we also made some posters to spread it. We encouraged students to try their best to help others.
Through the activities, we are happy that we can make a difference to our society.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、书面表达、话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行书面表达的能力，要求涵盖图示所有要点，语言连贯，符合日常交际需求，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，注重信息提取与语言运用的结合。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书信写作题，需给笔友Jim分享“一日志愿者体验”活动。解题思路：1. 明确书信结构，开头结尾已给出，补充中间内容；2. 提取图示所有关键信息：活动日期（9月12日）、地点（学校）、活动内容（打扫卫生、种植、宣传志愿理念）、活动感受；3. 将信息转化为通顺英语，适当添加细节（如回收废品、做海报），控制词数80-100，避免真实信息，符合书信语气。
【解析】
首先点明活动的时间、主题与地点：On 12th September, our school held an activity with the topic of "One-Day Volunteer Experience". We had some activities in our school. 接着具体说明活动内容：We cleaned up the school and recycled waste paper and waste plastic. We also planted many trees and flowers in the school garden. To spread the idea of volunteering, we made posters to help others know its importance and encouraged them to help. 最后表达活动感受：Through the activities, we are happy that we can make a difference to our society. 这样既涵盖所有图示信息，又连贯自然，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How is everything going? On 12th September, our school held an activity with the topic of "One-Day Volunteer Experience". We had some activities in our school. On that day, we cleaned up the school and recycled waste paper and waste plastic. We also planted many trees and flowers in the school garden. To help other students know more about the importance of being a volunteer, we also made some posters to spread it. We encouraged students to try their best to help others.
Through the activities, we are happy that we can make a difference to our society.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、书面表达、话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查学生整合信息、运用英语进行书面表达的能力，要求涵盖图示所有要点，语言连贯，符合日常交际需求，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，注重信息提取与语言运用的结合。
【难度系数】
0.5
