九、写作(15分)
请你以“My Favourite Animal”为题,写一篇词数为60左右的英语短文分享你最喜欢的动物。
My Favourite Animal
请你以“My Favourite Animal”为题,写一篇词数为60左右的英语短文分享你最喜欢的动物。
My Favourite Animal
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Animal
I like many animals, such as cats, monkeys, fishes and tigers, but my favourite animals are dogs. I keep a dog in my house. My family members call it "Wang Wang". It is black and white. All of us like it. It is very cute, friendly and clever. I often take it out for a walk in the evening. It brings us joys and smiles. So I like it best.
My Favourite Animal
I like many animals, such as cats, monkeys, fishes and tigers, but my favourite animals are dogs. I keep a dog in my house. My family members call it "Wang Wang". It is black and white. All of us like it. It is very cute, friendly and clever. I often take it out for a walk in the evening. It brings us joys and smiles. So I like it best.
解析
【分析】首先审题,明确题目要求是写60词左右的英语短文,主题为“My Favourite Animal”。解题思路:1. 选择熟悉易写的动物(如狗);2. 开篇点明最喜欢的动物;3. 介绍该动物的基本信息(名字、外貌);4. 描述其性格特点及与自己的日常互动;5. 总结喜爱的原因,确保词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤:① 开篇用转折句引出最喜欢的动物,如“I like many animals... but my favourite animals are dogs.”;② 介绍动物的基本情况,如名字、外貌;③ 描述动物的性格(cute, friendly, clever)和日常活动(take it out for a walk);④ 结尾点明喜爱的原因(brings joys),控制总词数在60左右。
【答案】One possible version:
My Favourite Animal
I like many animals, such as cats, monkeys, fishes and tigers, but my favourite animals are dogs. I keep a dog in my house. My family members call it "Wang Wang". It is black and white. All of us like it. It is very cute, friendly and clever. I often take it out for a walk in the evening. It brings us joys and smiles. So I like it best.
【知识点】英语话题写作、动物类词汇运用、简单句表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求,词数符合60左右的规定,结构清晰:开篇点明主题,中间介绍动物的基本情况、性格特点及互动,结尾总结喜爱原因;语言简洁易懂,内容具体,准确表达了对最喜欢的动物的喜爱之情,适合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤:① 开篇用转折句引出最喜欢的动物,如“I like many animals... but my favourite animals are dogs.”;② 介绍动物的基本情况,如名字、外貌;③ 描述动物的性格(cute, friendly, clever)和日常活动(take it out for a walk);④ 结尾点明喜爱的原因(brings joys),控制总词数在60左右。
【答案】One possible version:
My Favourite Animal
I like many animals, such as cats, monkeys, fishes and tigers, but my favourite animals are dogs. I keep a dog in my house. My family members call it "Wang Wang". It is black and white. All of us like it. It is very cute, friendly and clever. I often take it out for a walk in the evening. It brings us joys and smiles. So I like it best.
【知识点】英语话题写作、动物类词汇运用、简单句表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求,词数符合60左右的规定,结构清晰:开篇点明主题,中间介绍动物的基本情况、性格特点及互动,结尾总结喜爱原因;语言简洁易懂,内容具体,准确表达了对最喜欢的动物的喜爱之情,适合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】0.5
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