A(2023·江苏盐城大丰区一模)
阅读是语言学习的重要途径。请你结合下面的问题，以“How Reading Improves My English”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的英语专栏投稿。
【提示问题】·What do you like to read?
·In which ways does reading help you improve English?
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【写作要求】
1.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
3.语言通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。
How Reading Improves My English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning.

One possible version
How Reading Improves My English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning. To improve my English, I keep on reading English books, magazines and newspapers and I enjoy reading English classics most.
Through reading, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved. It gives me confidence when I speak in English. Moreover, reading helps make writing easier for me. I have collected some beautiful words and sentences from books so that I can use them for my own writing. Most importantly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I've read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more.
In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning.

【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心写作主题是“阅读如何提升我的英语”，同时要覆盖题干给出的两个提示问题，控制词数在100左右。首先第一步，承接已经给出的开头，先回答第一个问题“你喜欢读什么”，结合中学生的真实学习场景，说明自己日常的英语阅读内容，点明自己偏好的读物类型，内容真实不空洞。第二步，核心部分回答“阅读从哪些方面提升英语”，选择2-3个贴合实际的维度展开，比如口语能力、写作积累、思维拓展，用衔接词把不同维度的内容串起来，避免逻辑混乱。最后第三步用简短的总结句收尾，升华主题，全程注意不要出现真实姓名、校名，保证语言通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步规范完成：
1. 开篇承接给定开头，直接介绍自己长期坚持阅读英文书籍、杂志、报纸，点明自己最喜欢英文经典作品，完成第一个提示问题的作答，符合学生身份设定。
2. 主体部分分层论述阅读对英语的提升作用：首先说明大量阅读让自己的口语水平大幅提升，开口说英语更有自信；其次说明阅读过程中积累的优美词句可以复用在写作中，让写作变得更轻松；最后补充阅读还能锻炼思维能力，拓宽自身眼界，让内容层次更丰富。
3. 结尾用总结句收尾，点明阅读既给自己带来了乐趣，也培养了对英语学习的兴趣，让整篇短文结构完整，主题突出。
【答案】
One possible version
How Reading Improves My English
Reading plays an important role in my English learning. To improve my English, I keep on reading English books, magazines and newspapers and I enjoy reading English classics most.
Through reading, I find that my spoken English has greatly improved. It gives me confidence when I speak in English. Moreover, reading helps make writing easier for me. I have collected some beautiful words and sentences from books so that I can use them for my own writing. Most importantly, reading develops my thinking ability. What I've read makes me open-minded and enables me to think more.
In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also great interest in English learning.
【知识点】
1. 英语话题作文写作
2. 语篇衔接词运用
3. 阅读类话题表达
【点评】
这篇范文完全贴合题目所有要求，完整回应了全部提示问题，行文逻辑清晰，从个人阅读喜好切入，分层阐述阅读对英语能力不同维度的提升作用，最后总结升华。文中使用的moreover、most importantly等衔接词让语篇连贯自然，内容贴合中学生真实学习场景，没有堆砌复杂难词，词数符合100左右的要求，是非常规范的应试投稿类短文，学生可以借鉴这种分层论述的思路，避免写作内容空洞零散。
【难度系数】
0.6

B(2023·江苏盐城景山中学三模)
假如你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Martin计划暑假来盐城旅游。他给你发来邮件，询问盐城著名的地标景点(Famous Landmarks in Yancheng)。请你用英语回复一封邮件，推荐一个你眼中的盐城地标景点，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。
【要求】根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于100词的短文写作。已给出的内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语：locate，best - loved，play a role，history
【提示问题】·What's the famous landmark in Yancheng? Please describe it.
·Why do you think it can be a landmark?
Dear Martin，
I'm glad to know that you're coming to visit Yancheng.



















Yours，
Li Hua

One possible version
Dear Martin,
I'm glad to know that you're coming to visit Yancheng. It has a large number of ancient and modern landmarks for you to travel around. Let me share one with you and I think you must love it when you travel in Yancheng.
Yancheng Museum, is located in the middle of our city. It is the best choice. It's one of the most attractive buildings. It is so great that it attracts many tourists every year. During the visit, you can learn about the history and culture of Yancheng. Being the best-loved public space, it plays a necessary role in history. That's why I think it can be a landmark in Yancheng. It's well worth visiting.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask me if you have any question.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作任务：给加拿大笔友写回信，推荐一处盐城地标景点。第一步先梳理题干要求的核心要点：一是要明确点明推荐的地标，对它的位置、基本情况做简要描述，二是要说明它能成为地标的理由，还要自然用上给出的提示词locate、best-loved、play a role、history，保证字数不少于100词，语气符合笔友交流的轻松友好的语境。接下来搭建写作逻辑：首先承接开头句，自然引出要推荐的景点，接着先介绍景点的位置、外观特点，再结合景点的文化属性讲它的意义，对应推荐理由，最后收尾表达欢迎，告知对方有问题可以随时询问，整个逻辑顺下来就能覆盖所有得分点。
【解析】
1. 确定写作基础属性：文体为私人往来英文邮件，使用第一人称写作，整体以一般现在时作为主导时态，符合日常交流的表达习惯。
2. 搭建三段式清晰结构：
① 开篇承接题干给出的开头句，先总述盐城有很多特色景点，自然引出本次要推荐的地标，起到过渡作用。
② 主体段落先点明推荐的地标是盐城博物馆，用提示词locate介绍它的地理位置，接着描述它的外观吸引力，说明每年吸引大量游客；再用提示词history说明参观过程中可以了解盐城的历史文化，用提示词best-loved说明它是本地最受喜爱的公共文化空间，用提示词play a role点明它在城市文化传承中起到重要作用，完整解释它能成为盐城地标的理由，所有提示词全部自然融入，没有生硬堆砌。
③ 结尾段落补充表达希望推荐内容对对方有帮助，欢迎对方随时提问，符合邮件的收尾礼仪。
3. 全文内容完整覆盖题干两个提示问题，总词数符合不少于100词的要求，没有出现校名、姓名等违规信息。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear Martin,
I'm glad to know that you're coming to visit Yancheng. It has a large number of ancient and modern landmarks for you to travel around. Let me share one with you and I think you must love it when you travel in Yancheng.
Yancheng Museum, is located in the middle of our city. It is the best choice. It's one of the most attractive buildings. It is so great that it attracts many tourists every year. During the visit, you can learn about the history and culture of Yancheng. Being the best-loved public space, it plays a necessary role in history. That's why I think it can be a landmark in Yancheng. It's well worth visiting.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask me if you have any question.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文书信格式；地点话题写作；提示词活用
【点评】
本题属于生活化的应用文写作，既考察学生对英文邮件写作规范的掌握程度，也要求学生能结合本土场景合理组织内容，自然融入指定提示词，避免生硬套用通用模板，同时锻炼学生描述事物、清晰阐述理由的逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6