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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
假设你是 Daniel，你的英国笔友 John 计划来你的家乡泰州游玩，并给你发了一封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容用英语回信，词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown—Taizhou. It's a good place to visit.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Daniel
假设你是 Daniel，你的英国笔友 John 计划来你的家乡泰州游玩，并给你发了一封电子邮件，想详细了解你的家乡。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容用英语回信，词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear you're coming to my hometown—Taizhou. It's a good place to visit.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Daniel
答案
Dear John，
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Taizhou. It’s a good place to visit.
The air is fresh in Taizhou. There are many trees and rivers. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. The people here are kind and helpful. In my community, people often help each other with problems. In the bus, they always give their seats to others, and they are friendly to some outsiders who ask for directions. They always tell them how to get there very carefully.
Besides, Taizhou is the hometown of Mei Lanfang, a master of Beijing Opera. So, when you come here, you can learn more about our traditional culture. Last but not least, the traffic here is so convenient that you can travel around easily. Taizhou is well worth a visit.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours，
Daniel
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Taizhou. It’s a good place to visit.
The air is fresh in Taizhou. There are many trees and rivers. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. The people here are kind and helpful. In my community, people often help each other with problems. In the bus, they always give their seats to others, and they are friendly to some outsiders who ask for directions. They always tell them how to get there very carefully.
Besides, Taizhou is the hometown of Mei Lanfang, a master of Beijing Opera. So, when you come here, you can learn more about our traditional culture. Last but not least, the traffic here is so convenient that you can travel around easily. Taizhou is well worth a visit.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours，
Daniel
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题，第一步先明确写作要求：你需要以Daniel的身份回复John的邮件，必须完整回应John提出的三个问题，不能漏点。首先第一个问题问家乡环境，你可以先描述泰州宜居的特点，比如空气清新、绿植多、河网密布，有鸟语花香的舒适体验；第二个问题问邻里居民的特点，首先点明大家友善热心，再按照要求举出至少两个实例，比如邻里之间互相帮忙解决生活难题、主动给问路的外地人耐心指路，两个例子就符合要求；第三个问题问来泰州可以做什么，你可以结合泰州的本地特色，比如参观梅兰芳相关场馆了解京剧传统文化，最后控制总词数在100左右，语气亲切符合笔友交流的感觉，衔接自然就可以完成写作。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：文体为英文回复邮件，时态以一般现在时为主，核心需要覆盖三个必答要点，词数不计首尾给出的内容约100词，语气要自然亲切符合笔友交流场景。
2. 内容分层：
第一层：回应环境相关问题，介绍泰州空气清新，遍布树木河流，日常可以闻花香听鸟鸣，居住体验舒适。
第二层：回应邻里居民特点，点明大家善良热心，举出两个实例：一是社区里大家经常互相帮忙解决各类生活问题，二是大家在公交上主动让座，遇到外地人问路都会非常耐心地告知路线。
第三层：回应游玩相关的内容，介绍泰州是京剧大师梅兰芳的故乡，来这里可以深度了解中国传统戏曲文化，同时本地交通十分便利，可以轻松游览各处景点，突出泰州值得游玩的特点。
3. 整体衔接语句，保证逻辑通顺，没有语法错误，符合写作要求。
【答案】
Dear John，
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Taizhou. It’s a good place to visit.
The air is fresh in Taizhou. There are many trees and rivers. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. The people here are kind and helpful. In my community, people often help each other with problems. In the bus, they always give their seats to others, and they are friendly to some outsiders who ask for directions. They always tell them how to get there very carefully.
Besides, Taizhou is the hometown of Mei Lanfang, a master of Beijing Opera. So, when you come here, you can learn more about our traditional culture. Last but not least, the traffic here is so convenient that you can travel around easily. Taizhou is well worth a visit.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours，
Daniel
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
要点类作文表达
一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于应用类书面表达，难度适中，核心考察学生读取来信信息、完整覆盖写作要点的能力，需要注意举例部分必须满足至少两个的要求，避免要点缺失丢分，同时可以适当加入本地特色内容让文章更真实自然，整体对学生的基础语句组织能力要求不高。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道题，第一步先明确写作要求：你需要以Daniel的身份回复John的邮件，必须完整回应John提出的三个问题，不能漏点。首先第一个问题问家乡环境，你可以先描述泰州宜居的特点，比如空气清新、绿植多、河网密布，有鸟语花香的舒适体验；第二个问题问邻里居民的特点，首先点明大家友善热心，再按照要求举出至少两个实例，比如邻里之间互相帮忙解决生活难题、主动给问路的外地人耐心指路，两个例子就符合要求；第三个问题问来泰州可以做什么，你可以结合泰州的本地特色，比如参观梅兰芳相关场馆了解京剧传统文化，最后控制总词数在100左右，语气亲切符合笔友交流的感觉，衔接自然就可以完成写作。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：文体为英文回复邮件，时态以一般现在时为主，核心需要覆盖三个必答要点，词数不计首尾给出的内容约100词，语气要自然亲切符合笔友交流场景。
2. 内容分层：
第一层：回应环境相关问题，介绍泰州空气清新，遍布树木河流，日常可以闻花香听鸟鸣，居住体验舒适。
第二层：回应邻里居民特点，点明大家善良热心，举出两个实例：一是社区里大家经常互相帮忙解决各类生活问题，二是大家在公交上主动让座，遇到外地人问路都会非常耐心地告知路线。
第三层：回应游玩相关的内容，介绍泰州是京剧大师梅兰芳的故乡，来这里可以深度了解中国传统戏曲文化，同时本地交通十分便利，可以轻松游览各处景点，突出泰州值得游玩的特点。
3. 整体衔接语句，保证逻辑通顺，没有语法错误，符合写作要求。
【答案】
Dear John，
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Taizhou. It’s a good place to visit.
The air is fresh in Taizhou. There are many trees and rivers. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. The people here are kind and helpful. In my community, people often help each other with problems. In the bus, they always give their seats to others, and they are friendly to some outsiders who ask for directions. They always tell them how to get there very carefully.
Besides, Taizhou is the hometown of Mei Lanfang, a master of Beijing Opera. So, when you come here, you can learn more about our traditional culture. Last but not least, the traffic here is so convenient that you can travel around easily. Taizhou is well worth a visit.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours，
Daniel
【知识点】
英文邮件写作
要点类作文表达
一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题属于应用类书面表达，难度适中，核心考察学生读取来信信息、完整覆盖写作要点的能力，需要注意举例部分必须满足至少两个的要求，避免要点缺失丢分，同时可以适当加入本地特色内容让文章更真实自然，整体对学生的基础语句组织能力要求不高。
【难度系数】
0.6
