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端午节是中国的传统节日，粽子是端午节必备的传统食物。假如你的美国笔友Jack 对这一节日及这一传统食物很感兴趣，请你写一篇英语短文，向他介绍一下端午节及粽子的制作过程。
提示：
1. 纪念屈原；
2. 吃粽子，看龙舟比赛；
3. 准备糯米、肉和粽叶，糯米要浸泡几个小时；
4. 煮一小时。
要求：
1. 结构合理，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：sticky rice 糯米；bamboo leaves 粽叶；soak v. 浸泡；poet 诗人
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the traditional Chinese lunar calendar.
端午节是中国的传统节日，粽子是端午节必备的传统食物。假如你的美国笔友Jack 对这一节日及这一传统食物很感兴趣，请你写一篇英语短文，向他介绍一下端午节及粽子的制作过程。
提示：
1. 纪念屈原；
2. 吃粽子，看龙舟比赛；
3. 准备糯米、肉和粽叶，糯米要浸泡几个小时；
4. 煮一小时。
要求：
1. 结构合理，语句通顺，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：sticky rice 糯米；bamboo leaves 粽叶；soak v. 浸泡；poet 诗人
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth month of the traditional Chinese lunar calendar.
答案
One possible version:
It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. People celebrate it to remember Qu Yuan, a great ancient Chinese poet. On this day, Chinese people have lots of interesting activities. We eat delicious zongzi and watch exciting dragon boat races.
Do you want to know how to make zongzi? First, we prepare some sticky rice, fresh meat and green bamboo leaves. Then clean the leaves and soak the rice for a few hours. Next, we put sticky rice and meat into bamboo leaves and fold them into a special shape, then tie them tightly. Finally, we boil them for about one hour. Then the nice zongzi is ready.
I love the Dragon Boat Festival very much. I hope you can come to China and enjoy it one day!
It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. People celebrate it to remember Qu Yuan, a great ancient Chinese poet. On this day, Chinese people have lots of interesting activities. We eat delicious zongzi and watch exciting dragon boat races.
Do you want to know how to make zongzi? First, we prepare some sticky rice, fresh meat and green bamboo leaves. Then clean the leaves and soak the rice for a few hours. Next, we put sticky rice and meat into bamboo leaves and fold them into a special shape, then tie them tightly. Finally, we boil them for about one hour. Then the nice zongzi is ready.
I love the Dragon Boat Festival very much. I hope you can come to China and enjoy it one day!
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：给美国笔友Jack介绍端午节及粽子制作，开头已给出，需覆盖提示的4个要点（纪念屈原、节日活动、粽子材料与制作步骤、煮制时间），结构分为节日意义介绍、粽子制作说明、结尾邀请，语气要亲切符合笔友交流风格，确保语句通顺、满足词数要求。思考时先承接开头，依次展开节日介绍、粽子制作，最后收尾邀请，保证所有提示点都被涵盖。
【解析】写作时，先承接开头说明端午节是中国重要传统节日，纪念古代诗人屈原；接着写节日核心活动：吃粽子、看龙舟赛；再过渡到粽子制作：准备糯米、肉、粽叶，清洗粽叶、浸泡糯米数小时，包粽子（放材料、塑形、绑紧），煮一小时；最后表达对节日的喜爱，邀请Jack来中国体验。
【答案】One possible version:
It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. People celebrate it to remember Qu Yuan, a great ancient Chinese poet. On this day, Chinese people have lots of interesting activities. We eat delicious zongzi and watch exciting dragon boat races.
Do you want to know how to make zongzi? First, we prepare some sticky rice, fresh meat and green bamboo leaves. Then clean the leaves and soak the rice for a few hours. Next, we put sticky rice and meat into bamboo leaves and fold them into a special shape, then tie them tightly. Finally, we boil them for about one hour. Then the nice zongzi is ready.
I love the Dragon Boat Festival very much. I hope you can come to China and enjoy it one day!
【知识点】英语书面表达、节日话题写作
【点评】该范文严格贴合题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，结构清晰（节日介绍→粽子制作→结尾邀请），语句通顺自然，符合笔友交流的亲切语气，适当补充细节，满足词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作时，先承接开头说明端午节是中国重要传统节日，纪念古代诗人屈原；接着写节日核心活动：吃粽子、看龙舟赛；再过渡到粽子制作：准备糯米、肉、粽叶，清洗粽叶、浸泡糯米数小时，包粽子（放材料、塑形、绑紧），煮一小时；最后表达对节日的喜爱，邀请Jack来中国体验。
【答案】One possible version:
It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. People celebrate it to remember Qu Yuan, a great ancient Chinese poet. On this day, Chinese people have lots of interesting activities. We eat delicious zongzi and watch exciting dragon boat races.
Do you want to know how to make zongzi? First, we prepare some sticky rice, fresh meat and green bamboo leaves. Then clean the leaves and soak the rice for a few hours. Next, we put sticky rice and meat into bamboo leaves and fold them into a special shape, then tie them tightly. Finally, we boil them for about one hour. Then the nice zongzi is ready.
I love the Dragon Boat Festival very much. I hope you can come to China and enjoy it one day!
【知识点】英语书面表达、节日话题写作
【点评】该范文严格贴合题目要求，涵盖所有提示要点，结构清晰（节日介绍→粽子制作→结尾邀请），语句通顺自然，符合笔友交流的亲切语气，适当补充细节，满足词数要求，是一篇符合标准的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
