写作提优
单元写作要求
本单元的话题是“户外活动”。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇日记，记录某次户外活动的经历及感受。
写作方法策略 如何写英文日记

写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——时态、人称、体裁、结构。英文日记通常由书端和正文两部分组成，书端包含日记的星期(可不写)、日期和天气(可不写)。正文开篇要引出话题，交代时间、地点、人物等背景信息；正文主体部分要正确运用一般过去时的相关知识，详细介绍活动过程；最后要表达对本次活动的感受，抒情并总结全文。
引出话题
详细活动
表达感想|Monday, June 10th, sunny
①Yesterday, my family and I went climbing and watched the sunrise. ②It was such a fantastic experience that I will never forget it.
We ③set off on a foggy morning. And because of the bad weather, we couldn’t see anything around. At first, everyone was excited and ready to reach the top without taking a break. But after a while, my legs were so tired that I felt like giving up. My parents kept telling me to hold on. As we got closer to the top, the weather gradually cleared. Suddenly, the first sunlight came through the sea of clouds, ④painting the sky pink. The beautiful scenery took my breath away and reminded me ⑤that all the difficulties during the climb were worth it.
What a wonderful experience I had! It taught us that we should never give up when faced with difficulties.|①运用本单元重点知识点：一般过去时。
②运用 such … that …构成结果状语从句。
③运用高级词组 set off，because of，at first，take a break，after a while，take one’s breath away。
④运用现在分词短语作结果状语。
⑤运用 that 引导宾语从句。|
话题写作积累
1. 独自；独立地
2. 查明；弄清(情况)
3. 迷路
4. 展开
5. 集中于；致力于
6. 入睡
7. 这个周末我迫不及待地想和朋友们去远足，因为这是我们亲近大自然的一个好机会。

8. 尽管这次骑行之旅很累，但我们都没有放弃，我们都为自己感到骄傲。

9. 远行者见识广。

写作提优
话题写作积累
1. on one's own
2. find out
3. get lost
4. roll out
5. focus on
6. fall asleep
7. I can't wait to go hiking with my friends this weekend because it's a great chance for us to get close to nature.
8. Although this cycling trip was tired, none of us gave up, and we were all proud of ourselves.
9. He who travels far knows much.

【分析】
这是户外主题英语写作的语料积累题，解题时首先要结合本单元所学的户外活动相关核心短语，将给出的中文释义对应到标准的固定英文搭配；翻译句子时，要灵活运用已积累的相关短语，结合正确的英语句式（如原因状语从句、让步状语从句）组织语言，保证语法准确、表达地道，谚语部分直接匹配对应的通用英文固定表达即可。
【解析】
1. 表示“独自；独立地”的常用固定短语为on one's own；
2. 表示“查明；弄清(情况)”的常用固定短语为find out；
3. 表示“迷路”的常用固定短语为get lost；
4. 表示“展开”的常用固定短语为roll out；
5. 表示“集中于；致力于”的常用固定短语为focus on；
6. 表示“入睡”的常用固定短语为fall asleep；
7. 翻译时用到核心结构can't wait to do sth（迫不及待做某事）、go hiking（去远足）、get close to nature（亲近大自然），用because引导原因状语从句，组合得到对应句子；
8. 翻译时用Although引导让步状语从句，用到核心短语give up（放弃）、be proud of（为……骄傲），组合得到对应句子；
9. 对应中文谚语“远行者见识广”的通用英文谚语表达为固定的He who travels far knows much。
【答案】
1. on one's own
2. find out
3. get lost
4. roll out
5. focus on
6. fall asleep
7. I can't wait to go hiking with my friends this weekend because it's a great chance for us to get close to nature.
8. Although this cycling trip was tired, none of us gave up, and we were all proud of ourselves.
9. He who travels far knows much.
【知识点】
固定短语识记；英汉互译；英语谚语积累
【点评】
本题属于户外主题写作的基础铺垫练习，覆盖了该写作场景下高频使用的核心短语、典型句式和相关谚语，能够帮助学生积累足量的写作语料，避免写作时出现表达匮乏的问题，同时也巩固了状语从句、固定搭配等基础语法知识点，为后续完成完整的户外活动主题英文日记写作打好基础。
【难度系数】
0.7