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Ⅶ. 书面表达。
“心中有规矩，行为定方圆”。作为中学生，我们在学校和生活中必须遵守一些规则，以便成为一个更好的人。请根据思维导图，以“Rules in and out of School”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何成为一名遵规守纪的好学生。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
(2)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Rules in and Out of School
Rules are very important in our life. They help us to become a better person.
In a word, rules are everywhere. We should follow them to make our world a better place.
“心中有规矩，行为定方圆”。作为中学生，我们在学校和生活中必须遵守一些规则，以便成为一个更好的人。请根据思维导图，以“Rules in and out of School”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何成为一名遵规守纪的好学生。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
(2)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Rules in and Out of School
Rules are very important in our life. They help us to become a better person.
At school, we should follow the school rules. In class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. We have to wear the school uniform. We should respect our teachers and be friendly to our classmates.
We need to keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home, we should get up early and make the bed.
After school, we should do homework first. When we visit a zoo, we should be friendly to animals.
We shouldn't feed animals. It's bad for them.
In a word, rules are everywhere. We should follow them to make our world a better place.
答案
One possible version:
Rules in and Out of School
Rules are very important in our life.
They help us to become a better person.
At school, we should follow the school rules. In class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. We have to wear the school uniform. We should respect our teachers and be friendly to our classmates. We need to keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home, we should get up early and make the bed. After school, we should do homework first. When we visit a zoo, we should be friendly to animals. We shouldn't feed animals. It's bad for them.
In a word, rules are everywhere. We should follow them to make our world a better place.
Rules in and Out of School
Rules are very important in our life.
They help us to become a better person.
At school, we should follow the school rules. In class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. We have to wear the school uniform. We should respect our teachers and be friendly to our classmates. We need to keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home, we should get up early and make the bed. After school, we should do homework first. When we visit a zoo, we should be friendly to animals. We shouldn't feed animals. It's bad for them.
In a word, rules are everywhere. We should follow them to make our world a better place.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“Rules in and out of School”为题写短文，需结合思维导图的三个场景（学校、家庭、动物园）。解题思路：1. 提取各场景对应的核心短语，用情态动词should/shouldn't表达规则；2. 组织句子时注意语法正确、衔接自然；3. 控制词数（80左右），避免真实姓名和校名，补充开头结尾之间的内容即可。
【解析】写作步骤：① 学校场景：将“listen to; wear; respect; keep...tidy”转化为句子，如“In class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. We have to wear the school uniform. We should respect our teachers and keep the classroom tidy.”；② 家庭场景：对应“get up; make the bed; do homework”，写“At home, we should get up early and make the bed. After school, we should do homework first.”；③ 动物园场景：对应“be friendly to; don't feed”，写“When visiting a zoo, we should be friendly to animals and shouldn't feed them, as it's bad for them.”；④ 确保内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Rules in and Out of School
Rules are very important in our life. They help us to become a better person.
At school, we should follow the school rules. In class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. We have to wear the school uniform. We should respect our teachers and be friendly to our classmates. We need to keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home, we should get up early and make the bed. After school, we should do homework first. When we visit a zoo, we should be friendly to animals. We shouldn't feed animals. It's bad for them.
In a word, rules are everywhere. We should follow them to make our world a better place.
【知识点】英语书面表达；规则话题词汇；情态动词should的用法
【点评】本题结合学生熟悉的校内外生活场景，通过思维导图提供写作要点，降低了写作难度，考查学生运用所学语言知识组织短文的能力，贴近学生实际，易于完成。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：① 学校场景：将“listen to; wear; respect; keep...tidy”转化为句子，如“In class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. We have to wear the school uniform. We should respect our teachers and keep the classroom tidy.”；② 家庭场景：对应“get up; make the bed; do homework”，写“At home, we should get up early and make the bed. After school, we should do homework first.”；③ 动物园场景：对应“be friendly to; don't feed”，写“When visiting a zoo, we should be friendly to animals and shouldn't feed them, as it's bad for them.”；④ 确保内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Rules in and Out of School
Rules are very important in our life. They help us to become a better person.
At school, we should follow the school rules. In class, we should listen to the teacher carefully. We have to wear the school uniform. We should respect our teachers and be friendly to our classmates. We need to keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home, we should get up early and make the bed. After school, we should do homework first. When we visit a zoo, we should be friendly to animals. We shouldn't feed animals. It's bad for them.
In a word, rules are everywhere. We should follow them to make our world a better place.
【知识点】英语书面表达；规则话题词汇；情态动词should的用法
【点评】本题结合学生熟悉的校内外生活场景，通过思维导图提供写作要点，降低了写作难度，考查学生运用所学语言知识组织短文的能力，贴近学生实际，易于完成。
【难度系数】0.6
