任务情境
假定你是李华,请用英语给你的朋友John写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好,内容包括:
1. 介绍爱好;
2. 喜欢的原因;
3. 相关经历;
4. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 词数100左右,邮件的格式已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:

素材积累
1. 主题词块
①吹笛子
②写书法
③弹吉他
④打网球
⑤在周末
⑥在某人的空闲时间
⑦害怕……
⑧克服某人的恐惧
⑨放弃
⑩作为回报
⑪偶尔;间或
⑫出外游玩
⑬减轻压力
⑭成就感
⑮梦想;希望
2. 句型仿写
①... I think they're a good way to learn about different places ...
句型:主语+ is/are a good way to do sth.
仿写:它是减轻压力的好方式。
②Instead, this Italian teenager finds it fun to make mobile phone apps.
句型:... find(s) it fun to do ...
仿写:我发现团队合作很有趣。
③It makes me really happy when ...
句型:... make(s) sb really happy when ...
仿写:当我们赢得比赛时,我感到特别开心。
连句成篇
Dear John,
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,请用英语给你的朋友John写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好,内容包括:
1. 介绍爱好;
2. 喜欢的原因;
3. 相关经历;
4. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 词数100左右,邮件的格式已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①吹笛子
play the flute
②写书法
do calligraphy
③弹吉他
play the guitar
④打网球
play tennis
⑤在周末
at the weekend
⑥在某人的空闲时间
in one's free time
⑦害怕……
be scared/afraid of
⑧克服某人的恐惧
get over one's fear
⑨放弃
give up
⑩作为回报
in return
⑪偶尔;间或
once in a while
⑫出外游玩
go on an outing
⑬减轻压力
reduce stress
⑭成就感
a sense of achievement
⑮梦想;希望
dream of
2. 句型仿写
①... I think they're a good way to learn about different places ...
句型:主语+ is/are a good way to do sth.
仿写:它是减轻压力的好方式。
It's a good way to reduce stress.
②Instead, this Italian teenager finds it fun to make mobile phone apps.
句型:... find(s) it fun to do ...
仿写:我发现团队合作很有趣。
I find it fun to work as a team.
③It makes me really happy when ...
句型:... make(s) sb really happy when ...
仿写:当我们赢得比赛时,我感到特别开心。
It makes me really happy when we win games.
连句成篇
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm writing to share my favourite hobby with you.
I love playing basketball and there are two main reasons. First, it's a good way to reduce stress and stay healthy. Second, it gives me a chance to make lots of friends.
I started playing basketball when I was eight. I used to be scared of losing, but now I've got over my fear.
Playing basketball has taught me how to work with others as a team. It makes me really happy when we win games.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking forward to your reply.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
【主题写作·迁移】
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①play the flute ②do calligraphy
③play the guitar ④play tennis
⑤at the weekend ⑥in one's free time
⑦be scared/afraid of ⑧get over one's fear
⑨give up ⑩in return
⑪once in a while ⑫go on an outing
⑬reduce stress ⑭a sense of achievement
⑮dream of
2. 句型仿写
①It's a good way to reduce stress.
②I find it fun to work as a team.
③It makes me really happy when we win
games.
【连句成篇】
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm writing to
share my favourite hobby with you.
I love playing basketball and there are
two main reasons. First, it's a good way to
reduce stress and stay healthy. Second, it
gives me a chance to make lots of friends.
I started playing basketball when I was
eight. I used to be scared of losing, but now
I've got over my fear.
Playing basketball has taught me how
to work with others as a team. It makes me
really happy when we win games.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking
forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①play the flute ②do calligraphy
③play the guitar ④play tennis
⑤at the weekend ⑥in one's free time
⑦be scared/afraid of ⑧get over one's fear
⑨give up ⑩in return
⑪once in a while ⑫go on an outing
⑬reduce stress ⑭a sense of achievement
⑮dream of
2. 句型仿写
①It's a good way to reduce stress.
②I find it fun to work as a team.
③It makes me really happy when we win
games.
【连句成篇】
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm writing to
share my favourite hobby with you.
I love playing basketball and there are
two main reasons. First, it's a good way to
reduce stress and stay healthy. Second, it
gives me a chance to make lots of friends.
I started playing basketball when I was
eight. I used to be scared of losing, but now
I've got over my fear.
Playing basketball has taught me how
to work with others as a team. It makes me
really happy when we win games.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking
forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给朋友John写英语邮件分享兴趣爱好,需遵循思维导图的结构:开头点题说明写作意图(介绍爱好);主体依次阐述喜欢爱好的原因、相关发展经历、爱好带来的好处与感受;结尾希望对方回复分享爱好。写作时需用第一人称、一般现在时为主,符合邮件格式,适当运用素材中的词块和句型,确保行文连贯。
【解析】
1. 开头:点明写信目的,引出要分享的爱好,如“How's everything going? I'm writing to share my favourite hobby with you.”
2. 主体:
说明爱好及喜欢的原因:选择打篮球,原因是减轻压力、保持健康,还能交朋友;
叙述发展经历:从八岁开始接触,曾害怕输球,现在克服了恐惧;
表达感受:学会团队合作,赢球时很开心;
3. 结尾:询问对方的爱好,期待回复,如“So, how about your hobby? I'm looking forward to your reply.”
需运用素材中的主题词块(如play basketball, reduce stress等)和句型(如主语+is a good way to do sth.),符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm writing to share my favourite hobby with you.
I love playing basketball and there are two main reasons. First, it's a good way to reduce stress and stay healthy. Second, it gives me a chance to make lots of friends.
I started playing basketball when I was eight. I used to be scared of losing, but now I've got over my fear.
Playing basketball has taught me how to work with others as a team. It makes me really happy when we win games.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、兴趣爱好话题写作
【点评】
本题考查英语书信写作能力,围绕“分享兴趣爱好”展开,要求学生掌握书信结构、话题词汇及常用句型,清晰表达个人爱好的相关内容,注重语言的实用性与连贯性,符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以李华的身份给朋友John写英语邮件分享兴趣爱好,需遵循思维导图的结构:开头点题说明写作意图(介绍爱好);主体依次阐述喜欢爱好的原因、相关发展经历、爱好带来的好处与感受;结尾希望对方回复分享爱好。写作时需用第一人称、一般现在时为主,符合邮件格式,适当运用素材中的词块和句型,确保行文连贯。
【解析】
1. 开头:点明写信目的,引出要分享的爱好,如“How's everything going? I'm writing to share my favourite hobby with you.”
2. 主体:
说明爱好及喜欢的原因:选择打篮球,原因是减轻压力、保持健康,还能交朋友;
叙述发展经历:从八岁开始接触,曾害怕输球,现在克服了恐惧;
表达感受:学会团队合作,赢球时很开心;
3. 结尾:询问对方的爱好,期待回复,如“So, how about your hobby? I'm looking forward to your reply.”
需运用素材中的主题词块(如play basketball, reduce stress等)和句型(如主语+is a good way to do sth.),符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm writing to share my favourite hobby with you.
I love playing basketball and there are two main reasons. First, it's a good way to reduce stress and stay healthy. Second, it gives me a chance to make lots of friends.
I started playing basketball when I was eight. I used to be scared of losing, but now I've got over my fear.
Playing basketball has taught me how to work with others as a team. It makes me really happy when we win games.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、兴趣爱好话题写作
【点评】
本题考查英语书信写作能力,围绕“分享兴趣爱好”展开,要求学生掌握书信结构、话题词汇及常用句型,清晰表达个人爱好的相关内容,注重语言的实用性与连贯性,符合初中英语写作的考查方向。
【难度系数】
0.7
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