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四、书面表达
生活中音乐无处不在，音乐已经成为了人们生活中的一部分。每个人都有自己喜欢的音乐。你最喜欢哪种音乐呢？
提示:(1)What kind of music do you like best? (2)Why do you like this kind of music? (3)Who is your favourite singer?
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的个人信息;(2)请根据提示写一篇80－100词的短文,可适当发挥。
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【实战演练】
生活中音乐无处不在，音乐已经成为了人们生活中的一部分。每个人都有自己喜欢的音乐。你最喜欢哪种音乐呢？
提示:(1)What kind of music do you like best? (2)Why do you like this kind of music? (3)Who is your favourite singer?
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的个人信息;(2)请根据提示写一篇80－100词的短文,可适当发挥。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
答案
One possible version：
Music is everywhere in our life. It touches our hearts and has become an important part of our daily life. Different people have different tastes in music.
As for me, I love pop music best. It is full of energy and always carries warm feelings. The beautiful melodies can cheer me up and help me relax when I feel stressed from study. It also makes my life more colourful.
My favourite singer is Tom. He has a wonderful voice and writes many creative songs. Listening to his music is really a pleasant experience.
In a word, music enriches my life and brings me so much joy. I will always love it.
(101 words)
Music is everywhere in our life. It touches our hearts and has become an important part of our daily life. Different people have different tastes in music.
As for me, I love pop music best. It is full of energy and always carries warm feelings. The beautiful melodies can cheer me up and help me relax when I feel stressed from study. It also makes my life more colourful.
My favourite singer is Tom. He has a wonderful voice and writes many creative songs. Listening to his music is really a pleasant experience.
In a word, music enriches my life and brings me so much joy. I will always love it.
(101 words)
解析
【分析】这是一篇关于音乐的英语书面表达，需遵循“开头引入-正文阐述-结尾总结”的结构写作。开头要点明音乐在生活中的重要性；正文需依次回应提示要求：说明最喜欢的音乐类型及原因、介绍最喜欢的歌手，结合给定的常用句型（如be fond of、who引导的定语从句等）；结尾再次强调音乐的意义，确保覆盖所有提示点，词数控制在80-100词，且不出现真实个人信息。
【解析】第一步：开头段，用“Music plays an important part in our life.”类句型引出音乐的普遍性与重要性；第二步：正文第一段，明确自己最喜欢的音乐类型（如流行音乐），阐述原因（充满能量、缓解学习压力、丰富生活等）；第三步：正文第二段，介绍最喜欢的歌手，用定语从句描述歌手的特点；第四步：结尾段，用“In a word”总结音乐对自己的意义，呼应开头。注意使用正确时态和常用短语，控制词数。
【答案】One possible version：
Music is everywhere in our life. It touches our hearts and has become an important part of our daily life. Different people have different tastes in music.
As for me, I love pop music best. It is full of energy and always carries warm feelings. The beautiful melodies can cheer me up and help me relax when I feel stressed from study. It also makes my life more colourful.
My favourite singer is Tom. He has a wonderful voice and writes many creative songs. Listening to his music is really a pleasant experience.
In a word, music enriches my life and brings me so much joy. I will always love it.
(101 words)
【知识点】英语书面表达、常用句型运用、词汇运用
【点评】范文结构清晰，完全覆盖题目提示的所有要点，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作要求，词数达标，无真实个人信息，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】第一步：开头段，用“Music plays an important part in our life.”类句型引出音乐的普遍性与重要性；第二步：正文第一段，明确自己最喜欢的音乐类型（如流行音乐），阐述原因（充满能量、缓解学习压力、丰富生活等）；第三步：正文第二段，介绍最喜欢的歌手，用定语从句描述歌手的特点；第四步：结尾段，用“In a word”总结音乐对自己的意义，呼应开头。注意使用正确时态和常用短语，控制词数。
【答案】One possible version：
Music is everywhere in our life. It touches our hearts and has become an important part of our daily life. Different people have different tastes in music.
As for me, I love pop music best. It is full of energy and always carries warm feelings. The beautiful melodies can cheer me up and help me relax when I feel stressed from study. It also makes my life more colourful.
My favourite singer is Tom. He has a wonderful voice and writes many creative songs. Listening to his music is really a pleasant experience.
In a word, music enriches my life and brings me so much joy. I will always love it.
(101 words)
【知识点】英语书面表达、常用句型运用、词汇运用
【点评】范文结构清晰，完全覆盖题目提示的所有要点，语言流畅自然，符合初中英语写作要求，词数达标，无真实个人信息，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】0.5
