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五、书面表达。
某英文报刊编辑部发起了主题为“与春天的约会”的英语征文活动。请综合图片和表格信息写一篇短文投稿。
要求:1. 词数80左右;2. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Spring is a great time to have a school trip.
某英文报刊编辑部发起了主题为“与春天的约会”的英语征文活动。请综合图片和表格信息写一篇短文投稿。
要求:1. 词数80左右;2. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Spring is a great time to have a school trip.
The school
trip is one of the most popular activities in our school. We
went to Spring Park last Saturday. The weather was great
and the park was really beautiful.
trip is one of the most popular activities in our school. We
went to Spring Park last Saturday. The weather was great
and the park was really beautiful.
When we got there,we sat under the big trees. After
putting down our schoolbags,we played games with our
classmates. Some boys flew kites by the small river. They
were so happy.
putting down our schoolbags,we played games with our
classmates. Some boys flew kites by the small river. They
were so happy.
Some girls had a picnic on the grassland.
They talked and laughed,filling the air with laughter and
joy. How relaxed they were!
They talked and laughed,filling the air with laughter and
joy. How relaxed they were!
I climbed the mountains with
my best friends. Along the way,we saw cute birds and
colourful flowers. It was interesting to do things I like.
my best friends. Along the way,we saw cute birds and
colourful flowers. It was interesting to do things I like.
All in all,it was a perfect day for everyone to enjoy the
beauty of nature.
beauty of nature.
What a wonderful school trip!
答案
五、 Spring is a great time to have a school trip. The school
trip is one of the most popular activities in our school. We
went to Spring Park last Saturday. The weather was great
and the park was really beautiful.
When we got there,we sat under the big trees. After
putting down our schoolbags,we played games with our
classmates. Some boys flew kites by the small river. They
were so happy. Some girls had a picnic on the grassland.
They talked and laughed,filling the air with laughter and
joy. How relaxed they were! I climbed the mountains with
my best friends. Along the way,we saw cute birds and
colourful flowers. It was interesting to do things I like.
All in all,it was a perfect day for everyone to enjoy the
beauty of nature. What a wonderful school trip!
trip is one of the most popular activities in our school. We
went to Spring Park last Saturday. The weather was great
and the park was really beautiful.
When we got there,we sat under the big trees. After
putting down our schoolbags,we played games with our
classmates. Some boys flew kites by the small river. They
were so happy. Some girls had a picnic on the grassland.
They talked and laughed,filling the air with laughter and
joy. How relaxed they were! I climbed the mountains with
my best friends. Along the way,we saw cute birds and
colourful flowers. It was interesting to do things I like.
All in all,it was a perfect day for everyone to enjoy the
beauty of nature. What a wonderful school trip!
解析
【分析】
解题思路：首先明确题目要求：主题为“与春天的约会”的英语征文，开头已给出，词数80左右，需结合春日旅行的相关信息。第一步，承接开头，点明本次学校春日旅行的时间、地点，引出春天的场景；第二步，具体描述旅行中的活动，分不同同学的活动（如男生放风筝、女生野餐、自己爬山），融入春天的典型元素（小鸟、鲜花），体现“与春天约会”的氛围；第三步，结尾总结旅行感受，升华主题。写作时需用一般过去时，控制词数，保证语言流畅。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 确定结构：采用“总-分-总”结构，开头已给出，正文分为旅行基本情况、具体活动、总结感受三部分；
2. 选定时态：描述已发生的旅行，使用一般过去时；
3. 内容填充：结合春天特点，描述具体活动，加入春日景物，体现主题；
4. 检查调整：确保词数符合要求，语法正确，主题突出。
【答案】
Spring is a great time to have a school trip. The school trip is one of the most popular activities in our school. We went to Spring Park last Saturday. The weather was great and the park was really beautiful.
When we got there,we sat under the big trees. After putting down our schoolbags,we played games with our classmates. Some boys flew kites by the small river. They were so happy. Some girls had a picnic on the grassland. They talked and laughed,filling the air with laughter and joy. How relaxed they were! I climbed the mountains with my best friends. Along the way,we saw cute birds and colourful flowers. It was interesting to do things I like.
All in all,it was a perfect day for everyone to enjoy the beauty of nature. What a wonderful school trip!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“与春天的约会”主题，结构清晰，内容具体，通过描述春日旅行的活动融入春天典型景物，生动展现春日美好，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.5
解题思路：首先明确题目要求：主题为“与春天的约会”的英语征文，开头已给出，词数80左右，需结合春日旅行的相关信息。第一步，承接开头，点明本次学校春日旅行的时间、地点，引出春天的场景；第二步，具体描述旅行中的活动，分不同同学的活动（如男生放风筝、女生野餐、自己爬山），融入春天的典型元素（小鸟、鲜花），体现“与春天约会”的氛围；第三步，结尾总结旅行感受，升华主题。写作时需用一般过去时，控制词数，保证语言流畅。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 确定结构：采用“总-分-总”结构，开头已给出，正文分为旅行基本情况、具体活动、总结感受三部分；
2. 选定时态：描述已发生的旅行，使用一般过去时；
3. 内容填充：结合春天特点，描述具体活动，加入春日景物，体现主题；
4. 检查调整：确保词数符合要求，语法正确，主题突出。
【答案】
Spring is a great time to have a school trip. The school trip is one of the most popular activities in our school. We went to Spring Park last Saturday. The weather was great and the park was really beautiful.
When we got there,we sat under the big trees. After putting down our schoolbags,we played games with our classmates. Some boys flew kites by the small river. They were so happy. Some girls had a picnic on the grassland. They talked and laughed,filling the air with laughter and joy. How relaxed they were! I climbed the mountains with my best friends. Along the way,we saw cute birds and colourful flowers. It was interesting to do things I like.
All in all,it was a perfect day for everyone to enjoy the beauty of nature. What a wonderful school trip!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“与春天的约会”主题，结构清晰，内容具体，通过描述春日旅行的活动融入春天典型景物，生动展现春日美好，语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合题目要求的优秀征文。
【难度系数】
0.5
