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第3步 典例分析
[2025·合肥新站区一模]学校的英语社团针对青少年和父母沟通不畅的问题面向全体学生征集建议。请你用英文写一篇短文参加此项活动。要点如下：
1. 良好亲子关系的重要性；
2. 提出至少两条建立良好亲子关系的建议。
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
【审题思路】
1. 体裁：说明文。
2. 主题：介绍良好亲子关系的重要性以及建议。
3. 人称：第一和第三人称。
4. 时态：一般现在时。
[2025·合肥新站区一模]学校的英语社团针对青少年和父母沟通不畅的问题面向全体学生征集建议。请你用英文写一篇短文参加此项活动。要点如下：
1. 良好亲子关系的重要性；
2. 提出至少两条建立良好亲子关系的建议。
要求：1. 词数80左右；
2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
【审题思路】
1. 体裁：说明文。
2. 主题：介绍良好亲子关系的重要性以及建议。
3. 人称：第一和第三人称。
4. 时态：一般现在时。
答案
A good relationship between parents and teenagers plays an important role in our lives. It provides a warm, pleasant and relaxing environment for our growth and helps us develop good mental health. Here are some practical suggestions on how to improve the relationship between us teenagers and our parents.
First and foremost, it is important to open our hearts to our parents. Secondly, when there are disagreements, we should listen carefully to what our parents say and express our own opinions politely. More importantly, we'd better spend time having fun together, which can build a bridge of understanding between us.
In conclusion, building a good parent-child relationship needs efforts from both sides. I truly believe these suggestions will make a great difference.
First and foremost, it is important to open our hearts to our parents. Secondly, when there are disagreements, we should listen carefully to what our parents say and express our own opinions politely. More importantly, we'd better spend time having fun together, which can build a bridge of understanding between us.
In conclusion, building a good parent-child relationship needs efforts from both sides. I truly believe these suggestions will make a great difference.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，审题需明确：①体裁为说明文；②主题是阐述良好亲子关系的重要性并给出建立该关系的建议；③人称可结合第一（自身）和第三人称（父母）；④时态以一般现在时为主。写作思路：先开篇点明良好亲子关系对成长、心理健康的重要性；再分点给出至少两条具体可行的建议；最后总结强调双方努力，同时注意词数80左右，避免真实信息，不逐句翻译，适当发挥。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇：用一般现在时说明良好亲子关系的重要性，如“良好的亲子关系为成长提供温暖环境，助力心理健康发展”；2. 主体：分点给出建议，如①主动与父母敞开心扉；②出现分歧时认真倾听父母意见并礼貌表达自身想法；③增加共度欢乐时光的建议（满足至少两条要求）；3. 结尾：总结良好亲子关系需要双方努力，呼应主题。写作时使用合适连接词，控制词数，避免真实信息，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
A good relationship between parents and teenagers plays an important role in our lives. It provides a warm, pleasant and relaxing environment for our growth and helps us develop good mental health. Here are some practical suggestions on how to improve the relationship between us teenagers and our parents.
First and foremost, it is important to open our hearts to our parents. Secondly, when there are disagreements, we should listen carefully to what our parents say and express our own opinions politely. More importantly, we'd better spend time having fun together, which can build a bridge of understanding between us.
In conclusion, building a good parent-child relationship needs efforts from both sides. I truly believe these suggestions will make a great difference.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、亲子话题英语应用、建议类句型
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰（总-分-总），要点齐全（重要性+多条建议），语言准确流畅，符合一般现在时、人称要求，词数合适，无真实信息，是符合考试要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语书面表达题，审题需明确：①体裁为说明文；②主题是阐述良好亲子关系的重要性并给出建立该关系的建议；③人称可结合第一（自身）和第三人称（父母）；④时态以一般现在时为主。写作思路：先开篇点明良好亲子关系对成长、心理健康的重要性；再分点给出至少两条具体可行的建议；最后总结强调双方努力，同时注意词数80左右，避免真实信息，不逐句翻译，适当发挥。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇：用一般现在时说明良好亲子关系的重要性，如“良好的亲子关系为成长提供温暖环境，助力心理健康发展”；2. 主体：分点给出建议，如①主动与父母敞开心扉；②出现分歧时认真倾听父母意见并礼貌表达自身想法；③增加共度欢乐时光的建议（满足至少两条要求）；3. 结尾：总结良好亲子关系需要双方努力，呼应主题。写作时使用合适连接词，控制词数，避免真实信息，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
A good relationship between parents and teenagers plays an important role in our lives. It provides a warm, pleasant and relaxing environment for our growth and helps us develop good mental health. Here are some practical suggestions on how to improve the relationship between us teenagers and our parents.
First and foremost, it is important to open our hearts to our parents. Secondly, when there are disagreements, we should listen carefully to what our parents say and express our own opinions politely. More importantly, we'd better spend time having fun together, which can build a bridge of understanding between us.
In conclusion, building a good parent-child relationship needs efforts from both sides. I truly believe these suggestions will make a great difference.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、亲子话题英语应用、建议类句型
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰（总-分-总），要点齐全（重要性+多条建议），语言准确流畅，符合一般现在时、人称要求，词数合适，无真实信息，是符合考试要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
第4步 实战演练
[新考法·图文提示]成长的路上只有不断克服困难，才能收获真正的成长与进步。假设你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“Dealing with trouble in my life”的征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合图文写一篇英语短文积极投稿。
要求：1. 短文须包含图文中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80左右（题目已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dealing with trouble in my life
[新考法·图文提示]成长的路上只有不断克服困难，才能收获真正的成长与进步。假设你是李华，你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“Dealing with trouble in my life”的征文活动。请你根据写作要求，结合图文写一篇英语短文积极投稿。
要求：1. 短文须包含图文中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80左右（题目已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dealing with trouble in my life
I always got low marks in English when I was in Grade 8. I was weak in English grammar, and that became the biggest trouble for me then. Luckily, I made a great friend named Jane who was good at English and was willing to help me. She created a grammar study plan for me, and every school night, we spent half an hour working on it together. After three months, I was surprised to see my English grammar improve a lot.
I was very happy with my progress and thanked Jane for her help. This experience taught me that with hard work and the proper help, I can overcome any difficulty. From then on, I worked harder on all my subjects, because I believe I can keep getting better.
答案
【实战演练】
Dealing with trouble in my life
I always got low marks in English when I was in Grade 8. I was weak in English grammar, and that became the biggest trouble for me then. Luckily, I made a great friend named Jane who was good at English and was willing to help me. She created a grammar study plan for me, and every school night, we spent half an hour working on it together. After three months, I was surprised to see my English grammar improve a lot.
I was very happy with my progress and thanked Jane for her help. This experience taught me that with hard work and the proper help, I can overcome any difficulty. From then on, I worked harder on all my subjects, because I believe I can keep getting better.
Dealing with trouble in my life
I always got low marks in English when I was in Grade 8. I was weak in English grammar, and that became the biggest trouble for me then. Luckily, I made a great friend named Jane who was good at English and was willing to help me. She created a grammar study plan for me, and every school night, we spent half an hour working on it together. After three months, I was surprised to see my English grammar improve a lot.
I was very happy with my progress and thanked Jane for her help. This experience taught me that with hard work and the proper help, I can overcome any difficulty. From then on, I worked harder on all my subjects, because I believe I can keep getting better.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语记叙文写作题，主题为“Dealing with trouble in my life”。解题思路：1. 明确写作要求：需覆盖图文的三个核心要点——story（遇到的麻烦及解决过程）、feelings（自身感受与学到的道理）、change（带来的改变），词数80左右，不能出现真实姓名和学校信息；2. 构思内容：选取贴近学生生活的困难（如学习困难），按“遇到麻烦→解决麻烦→感受与成长”的逻辑展开，确保所有要点都包含在内，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
首先点明遇到的具体麻烦：八年级时英语成绩差，语法薄弱是最大的困扰；接着描述解决过程：朋友Jane擅长英语，帮“我”制定语法学习计划，每晚一起学习半小时；然后写感受与收获：为进步开心，感谢帮助，明白努力加合适的帮助能克服困难；最后写改变：之后更努力学习所有科目，相信自己能不断进步，符合图文的所有要点，词数达标。
【答案】
Dealing with trouble in my life
I always got low marks in English when I was in Grade 8. I was weak in English grammar, and that became the biggest trouble for me then. Luckily, I made a great friend named Jane who was good at English and was willing to help me. She created a grammar study plan for me, and every school night, we spent half an hour working on it together. After three months, I was surprised to see my English grammar improve a lot.
I was very happy with my progress and thanked Jane for her help. This experience taught me that with hard work and the proper help, I can overcome any difficulty. From then on, I worked harder on all my subjects, because I believe I can keep getting better.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；图文提示类作文
【点评】
本题结合图文提示考查英语写作能力，围绕成长中克服困难的主题，要求学生梳理故事脉络、表达真实感受与成长改变，既考查语言运用能力，也引导学生感悟成长的意义，结构清晰，要点明确，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语记叙文写作题，主题为“Dealing with trouble in my life”。解题思路：1. 明确写作要求：需覆盖图文的三个核心要点——story（遇到的麻烦及解决过程）、feelings（自身感受与学到的道理）、change（带来的改变），词数80左右，不能出现真实姓名和学校信息；2. 构思内容：选取贴近学生生活的困难（如学习困难），按“遇到麻烦→解决麻烦→感受与成长”的逻辑展开，确保所有要点都包含在内，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
首先点明遇到的具体麻烦：八年级时英语成绩差，语法薄弱是最大的困扰；接着描述解决过程：朋友Jane擅长英语，帮“我”制定语法学习计划，每晚一起学习半小时；然后写感受与收获：为进步开心，感谢帮助，明白努力加合适的帮助能克服困难；最后写改变：之后更努力学习所有科目，相信自己能不断进步，符合图文的所有要点，词数达标。
【答案】
Dealing with trouble in my life
I always got low marks in English when I was in Grade 8. I was weak in English grammar, and that became the biggest trouble for me then. Luckily, I made a great friend named Jane who was good at English and was willing to help me. She created a grammar study plan for me, and every school night, we spent half an hour working on it together. After three months, I was surprised to see my English grammar improve a lot.
I was very happy with my progress and thanked Jane for her help. This experience taught me that with hard work and the proper help, I can overcome any difficulty. From then on, I worked harder on all my subjects, because I believe I can keep getting better.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；图文提示类作文
【点评】
本题结合图文提示考查英语写作能力，围绕成长中克服困难的主题，要求学生梳理故事脉络、表达真实感受与成长改变，既考查语言运用能力，也引导学生感悟成长的意义，结构清晰，要点明确，贴近学生生活实际。
【难度系数】
0.5
