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七、书面表达(满分 30 分)
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分，满分 10 分)
71. 当我感觉到脚下的土地时，我已经筋疲力尽了。
72. 我试着把一只手从绳子里拉出来，终于挣脱了。
73. 借书的时候不要忘记告诉图书管理员什么时候还这些书。
74. 我得对这本书做一个简短的总结，但我不能透露结局。
75. 这个故事告诉我们，不仅要直面错误选择的结果，还要为我们认为正确的事情而奋斗。
A. 句子翻译(每小题 2 分，满分 10 分)
71. 当我感觉到脚下的土地时，我已经筋疲力尽了。
By the time I felt the land under my feet, I was tired out.
72. 我试着把一只手从绳子里拉出来，终于挣脱了。
I tried to pull one hand out of the rope and finally managed to break free.
73. 借书的时候不要忘记告诉图书管理员什么时候还这些书。
Don't forget to tell the librarian when to return these books when checking them out.
74. 我得对这本书做一个简短的总结，但我不能透露结局。
I have to give a short summary of the book, but I mustn't give away the ending.
75. 这个故事告诉我们，不仅要直面错误选择的结果，还要为我们认为正确的事情而奋斗。
The story tells us to face the results of bad choices as well as to fight for what we think is right.
答案
A. 句子翻译
71. By the time I felt the land under my feet, I was tired out.
72. I tried to pull one hand out of the rope and finally managed to break free.
73. Don't forget to tell the librarian when to return these books when checking them out.
74. I have to give a short summary of the book, but I mustn't give away the ending.
75. The story tells us to face the results of bad choices as well as to fight for what we think is right.
71. By the time I felt the land under my feet, I was tired out.
72. I tried to pull one hand out of the rope and finally managed to break free.
73. Don't forget to tell the librarian when to return these books when checking them out.
74. I have to give a short summary of the book, but I mustn't give away the ending.
75. The story tells us to face the results of bad choices as well as to fight for what we think is right.
解析
【分析】
做这类汉译英句子翻译题时，首先要先梳理中文句子的逻辑结构，先确定句子的核心时态、主干主谓成分，再逐一匹配课内学过的对应固定短语，之后补充状语、定语等修饰成分，还要注意符合英语表达习惯，避免逐字直译的中式英语错误，同时要留意特殊句式比如时间状语从句、疑问词+不定式、并列结构的正确使用，最后通读检查语法是否通顺。
【解析】
71. 本句用By the time引导时间状语从句，“感觉到脚下的土地”译为felt the land under my feet，主句“筋疲力尽”用固定短语be tired out，描述过去的状态用一般过去时，组合得到对应译文。
72. 本句为并列句，描述过去发生的动作，时态用一般过去时，“试着把一只手从绳子里拉出来”译为tried to pull one hand out of the rope，“成功挣脱”用managed to break free表达，用并列连词and连接两个动作即可。
73. 本句为祈使句，“不要忘记做某事”用Don't forget to do结构，“什么时候还这些书”用疑问词+不定式结构when to return these books，“借书的时候”用省略结构when checking them out表达，符合英语常用表达习惯。
74. 本句为转折并列句，“做一个简短的总结”译为give a short summary of the book，“不能透露结局”里的“透露”用固定短语give away表达，转折连词but连接两个分句即可。
75. 本句用tell sb to do sth的基础结构，用as well as连接两个并列的动作“直面错误选择的结果”和“为我们认为正确的事情而奋斗”，后半部分“我们认为正确的事情”用宾语从句what we think is right表达即可。
【答案】
71. By the time I felt the land under my feet, I was tired out.
72. I tried to pull one hand out of the rope and finally managed to break free.
73. Don't forget to tell the librarian when to return these books when checking them out.
74. I have to give a short summary of the book, but I mustn't give away the ending.
75. The story tells us to face the results of bad choices as well as to fight for what we think is right.
【知识点】
汉译英常用短语，状语从句用法，并列结构表达
【点评】
这组翻译题全部围绕初中阶段核心的课内固定搭配和基础句式设置，既考察了学生对tired out、break free、give away等高频短语的记忆，也考察了学生对时间状语、非谓语特殊结构的灵活运用能力，引导学生规避中式直译的错误，夯实英语表达的基础。
【难度系数】
0.6
做这类汉译英句子翻译题时，首先要先梳理中文句子的逻辑结构，先确定句子的核心时态、主干主谓成分，再逐一匹配课内学过的对应固定短语，之后补充状语、定语等修饰成分，还要注意符合英语表达习惯，避免逐字直译的中式英语错误，同时要留意特殊句式比如时间状语从句、疑问词+不定式、并列结构的正确使用，最后通读检查语法是否通顺。
【解析】
71. 本句用By the time引导时间状语从句，“感觉到脚下的土地”译为felt the land under my feet，主句“筋疲力尽”用固定短语be tired out，描述过去的状态用一般过去时，组合得到对应译文。
72. 本句为并列句，描述过去发生的动作，时态用一般过去时，“试着把一只手从绳子里拉出来”译为tried to pull one hand out of the rope，“成功挣脱”用managed to break free表达，用并列连词and连接两个动作即可。
73. 本句为祈使句，“不要忘记做某事”用Don't forget to do结构，“什么时候还这些书”用疑问词+不定式结构when to return these books，“借书的时候”用省略结构when checking them out表达，符合英语常用表达习惯。
74. 本句为转折并列句，“做一个简短的总结”译为give a short summary of the book，“不能透露结局”里的“透露”用固定短语give away表达，转折连词but连接两个分句即可。
75. 本句用tell sb to do sth的基础结构，用as well as连接两个并列的动作“直面错误选择的结果”和“为我们认为正确的事情而奋斗”，后半部分“我们认为正确的事情”用宾语从句what we think is right表达即可。
【答案】
71. By the time I felt the land under my feet, I was tired out.
72. I tried to pull one hand out of the rope and finally managed to break free.
73. Don't forget to tell the librarian when to return these books when checking them out.
74. I have to give a short summary of the book, but I mustn't give away the ending.
75. The story tells us to face the results of bad choices as well as to fight for what we think is right.
【知识点】
汉译英常用短语，状语从句用法，并列结构表达
【点评】
这组翻译题全部围绕初中阶段核心的课内固定搭配和基础句式设置，既考察了学生对tired out、break free、give away等高频短语的记忆，也考察了学生对时间状语、非谓语特殊结构的灵活运用能力，引导学生规避中式直译的错误，夯实英语表达的基础。
【难度系数】
0.6
B. 写作(满分 20 分)
为了宣传今年的“世界读书日”，你校英语社团将举行以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为题的征文活动。请根据提示写一篇短文，介绍你对阅读的看法以及个人的阅读情况。
the importance of reading
(get more knowledge ...)
my reading habit
(when, where, what ...)
my favourite book
(character, feeling ...)
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在 80 左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read.
为了宣传今年的“世界读书日”，你校英语社团将举行以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为题的征文活动。请根据提示写一篇短文，介绍你对阅读的看法以及个人的阅读情况。
the importance of reading
(get more knowledge ...)
my reading habit
(when, where, what ...)
my favourite book
(character, feeling ...)
注意事项：
1. 短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在 80 左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. It’s important and necessary for everyone to read.
答案
B. 写作
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. It's important and necessary for everyone to read.
Reading is like a magical key that unlocks different worlds. It helps me get more knowledge, from history to science, and it also shapes my character. When I read, I can forget about my worries and enter the stories, experiencing various feelings.
I have developed a good reading habit. I usually read before going to bed. It relaxes me and broadens my horizons. Among all the books I've read, Pride and Prejudice is my favourite. I'm deeply attracted by the characters and the story.
In a word, reading enriches my life. It allows me to grow both mentally and emotionally. I hope more people can enjoy reading and find the beauty in books.
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. It's important and necessary for everyone to read.
Reading is like a magical key that unlocks different worlds. It helps me get more knowledge, from history to science, and it also shapes my character. When I read, I can forget about my worries and enter the stories, experiencing various feelings.
I have developed a good reading habit. I usually read before going to bed. It relaxes me and broadens my horizons. Among all the books I've read, Pride and Prejudice is my favourite. I'm deeply attracted by the characters and the story.
In a word, reading enriches my life. It allows me to grow both mentally and emotionally. I hope more people can enjoy reading and find the beauty in books.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心写作要求：主题是“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”，必须覆盖三个指定要点：阅读的重要性、个人阅读习惯、最爱的书籍相关内容。题目已经给出了开篇内容，不需要自行创作开头，接下来第一步先承接开头，围绕“阅读的重要性”展开，结合提示里的get more knowledge等方向补充内容，说明阅读对个人成长的作用；第二步介绍自己的阅读习惯，对应提示的when、where、what要素，说明日常阅读的时间、场景、常读的内容；第三步介绍自己最爱的书，点明书籍的人物特点和自己的阅读感受；最后收尾点题，呼应“享受阅读享受生活”的主题，同时注意控制总词数在要求范围内，不能出现真实个人、学校信息，保证语句连贯通顺。
【解析】
写作按照如下逻辑分步完成：
1. 承接给定开头，阐述阅读的重要性：用比喻的方式点明阅读的价值，说明阅读可以帮助我们获取不同领域的知识，塑造个人品格，还能帮我们消解烦恼，完成第一个要点的输出。
2. 介绍个人阅读习惯：说明自己养成了良好的阅读习惯，日常睡前固定阅读，阅读可以放松身心拓宽视野，对应提示的时间、场景等要素，完成第二个要点的输出。
3. 介绍最爱的书籍：点明自己最喜欢的书是《傲慢与偏见》，说明自己被书中的人物和故事深深吸引，对应提示的人物、感受要素，完成第三个要点的输出。
4. 最后收尾总结，点明阅读丰富了自己的生活，呼吁更多人爱上阅读，呼应征文主题，整体内容逻辑连贯，要点全覆盖，符合词数和写作规范要求。
【答案】
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. It's important and necessary for everyone to read.
Reading is like a magical key that unlocks different worlds. It helps me get more knowledge, from history to science, and it also shapes my character. When I read, I can forget about my worries and enter the stories, experiencing various feelings.
I have developed a good reading habit. I usually read before going to bed. It relaxes me and broadens my horizons. Among all the books I've read, Pride and Prejudice is my favourite. I'm deeply attracted by the characters and the story.
In a word, reading enriches my life. It allows me to grow both mentally and emotionally. I hope more people can enjoy reading and find the beauty in books.
【知识点】
英语提纲作文写作，阅读话题表达
【点评】
本题属于校园主题的提示类写作，给出的写作要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照提示的三个维度填充对应内容，适当加入贴合主题的细节，保证语句通顺、要点无遗漏即可拿到不错的分数，写作时要注意避免堆砌复杂长句，优先保证表意准确，同时严格遵守词数要求，不要出现真实个人信息。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心写作要求：主题是“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”，必须覆盖三个指定要点：阅读的重要性、个人阅读习惯、最爱的书籍相关内容。题目已经给出了开篇内容，不需要自行创作开头，接下来第一步先承接开头，围绕“阅读的重要性”展开，结合提示里的get more knowledge等方向补充内容，说明阅读对个人成长的作用；第二步介绍自己的阅读习惯，对应提示的when、where、what要素，说明日常阅读的时间、场景、常读的内容；第三步介绍自己最爱的书，点明书籍的人物特点和自己的阅读感受；最后收尾点题，呼应“享受阅读享受生活”的主题，同时注意控制总词数在要求范围内，不能出现真实个人、学校信息，保证语句连贯通顺。
【解析】
写作按照如下逻辑分步完成：
1. 承接给定开头，阐述阅读的重要性：用比喻的方式点明阅读的价值，说明阅读可以帮助我们获取不同领域的知识，塑造个人品格，还能帮我们消解烦恼，完成第一个要点的输出。
2. 介绍个人阅读习惯：说明自己养成了良好的阅读习惯，日常睡前固定阅读，阅读可以放松身心拓宽视野，对应提示的时间、场景等要素，完成第二个要点的输出。
3. 介绍最爱的书籍：点明自己最喜欢的书是《傲慢与偏见》，说明自己被书中的人物和故事深深吸引，对应提示的人物、感受要素，完成第三个要点的输出。
4. 最后收尾总结，点明阅读丰富了自己的生活，呼吁更多人爱上阅读，呼应征文主题，整体内容逻辑连贯，要点全覆盖，符合词数和写作规范要求。
【答案】
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading makes a full man. It's important and necessary for everyone to read.
Reading is like a magical key that unlocks different worlds. It helps me get more knowledge, from history to science, and it also shapes my character. When I read, I can forget about my worries and enter the stories, experiencing various feelings.
I have developed a good reading habit. I usually read before going to bed. It relaxes me and broadens my horizons. Among all the books I've read, Pride and Prejudice is my favourite. I'm deeply attracted by the characters and the story.
In a word, reading enriches my life. It allows me to grow both mentally and emotionally. I hope more people can enjoy reading and find the beauty in books.
【知识点】
英语提纲作文写作，阅读话题表达
【点评】
本题属于校园主题的提示类写作，给出的写作要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照提示的三个维度填充对应内容，适当加入贴合主题的细节，保证语句通顺、要点无遗漏即可拿到不错的分数，写作时要注意避免堆砌复杂长句，优先保证表意准确，同时严格遵守词数要求，不要出现真实个人信息。
【难度系数】
0.7
