(二)书面表达
英语课上老师组织读书分享活动,要
求同学们撰写一篇书评。请你以 "Book
Report: The Little Prince" 为题,根据以
下思维导图的提示写一篇英语短文。
注意:(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础
上适当拓展信息;
(2) 语句连贯,词数 70 左右。
写作指导
(1) 审题定调
文体: 时态:
人称:
(2) 思路构建
Book Report: The Little Prince
英语课上老师组织读书分享活动,要
求同学们撰写一篇书评。请你以 "Book
Report: The Little Prince" 为题,根据以
下思维导图的提示写一篇英语短文。
注意:(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础
上适当拓展信息;
(2) 语句连贯,词数 70 左右。
写作指导
(1) 审题定调
文体: 时态:
人称:
(2) 思路构建
Book Report: The Little Prince
答案
(1)应用文;一般现在时;第三人称
One possible version:
Book Report: The Little Prince
Written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince follows a young prince from a small planet. He leaves home after arguing with his rose and travels to different planets. There, he meets strange adults like a power-hungry king and a selfish man, confused by their meaningless goals.
On Earth, the prince makes friends with a wise fox who teaches him how to form bonds of love and duty. With the snake's help, he returns to his planet at last.
The story shows how adults often miss life's true meaning, while celebrating the beauty of friendship and kindness.
One possible version:
Book Report: The Little Prince
Written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince follows a young prince from a small planet. He leaves home after arguing with his rose and travels to different planets. There, he meets strange adults like a power-hungry king and a selfish man, confused by their meaningless goals.
On Earth, the prince makes friends with a wise fox who teaches him how to form bonds of love and duty. With the snake's help, he returns to his planet at last.
The story shows how adults often miss life's true meaning, while celebrating the beauty of friendship and kindness.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达中的书评写作题,解题思路如下:第一步,审题定调:明确文体为应用文(书评),介绍书籍内容和观点常用一般现在时,以第三人称叙述书籍相关内容;第二步,思路构建:围绕《小王子》的作者、核心情节(小王子的星球旅行经历)、主题(关于爱、责任与生活真谛)搭建写作框架;第三步,写作成文:结合思维导图提示适当拓展细节,保证语句连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 审题定调:确定文体为应用文,时态选用一般现在时,人称采用第三人称;
2. 梳理内容:先介绍《小王子》的作者及基本情节(小王子因与玫瑰争吵离开星球,旅行中遇到奇怪的成年人),再补充在地球的经历(与狐狸交朋友,领悟爱与责任),最后点明书籍主题(批判成人迷失生活真谛,赞美友谊与善良);
3. 成文时注意语句连贯,控制词数在70左右,适当拓展细节使内容完整。
【答案】
Book Report: The Little Prince
Written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince follows a young prince from a small planet. He leaves home after arguing with his rose and travels to different planets. There, he meets strange adults like a power-hungry king and a selfish man, confused by their meaningless goals.
On Earth, the prince makes friends with a wise fox who teaches him how to form bonds of love and duty. With the snake's help, he returns to his planet at last.
The story shows how adults often miss life's true meaning, while celebrating the beauty of friendship and kindness.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作;书评写作;一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求掌握书评的基本结构,能围绕书籍内容与主题展开叙述,需注意时态、人称的正确使用,适当拓展信息以保证内容连贯完整,是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达中的书评写作题,解题思路如下:第一步,审题定调:明确文体为应用文(书评),介绍书籍内容和观点常用一般现在时,以第三人称叙述书籍相关内容;第二步,思路构建:围绕《小王子》的作者、核心情节(小王子的星球旅行经历)、主题(关于爱、责任与生活真谛)搭建写作框架;第三步,写作成文:结合思维导图提示适当拓展细节,保证语句连贯,词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 审题定调:确定文体为应用文,时态选用一般现在时,人称采用第三人称;
2. 梳理内容:先介绍《小王子》的作者及基本情节(小王子因与玫瑰争吵离开星球,旅行中遇到奇怪的成年人),再补充在地球的经历(与狐狸交朋友,领悟爱与责任),最后点明书籍主题(批判成人迷失生活真谛,赞美友谊与善良);
3. 成文时注意语句连贯,控制词数在70左右,适当拓展细节使内容完整。
【答案】
Book Report: The Little Prince
Written by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince follows a young prince from a small planet. He leaves home after arguing with his rose and travels to different planets. There, he meets strange adults like a power-hungry king and a selfish man, confused by their meaningless goals.
On Earth, the prince makes friends with a wise fox who teaches him how to form bonds of love and duty. With the snake's help, he returns to his planet at last.
The story shows how adults often miss life's true meaning, while celebrating the beauty of friendship and kindness.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作;书评写作;一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力,要求掌握书评的基本结构,能围绕书籍内容与主题展开叙述,需注意时态、人称的正确使用,适当拓展信息以保证内容连贯完整,是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
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