四、提升题 书面表达。
学校英语杂志社正在开展以"我与音乐"为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇短文投稿,先描述你喜欢的音乐类型,再说说你最喜欢的音乐家,最后谈谈音乐给你带来的影响。
写作要点:
1. What kind of music do you like?
2. What is your favourite musician like?
3. How does music influence you?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 词数 80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Without music, life would be a journey without light.

Pop music with warm, uplifting energy is my favourite. I like this kind of music because it can cheer me up when I feel upset.
My favourite musician is a singer who writes his own songs. His songs have wonderful lyrics and always touch my heart. I often listen to his music, and it brings me joy and peace.
Music has a positive influence on me. It gives me the courage to keep going whenever I feel down. It also makes my life more colourful. It is a gift that I will always treasure.

【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“我与音乐”主题完成征文，需覆盖三个核心要点：喜欢的音乐类型、最喜欢的音乐家、音乐的影响，且开头已给出，需补全内容。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先明确自己喜欢的音乐类型及原因，回应第一个要点；2. 接着介绍最喜欢的音乐家的特点，回应第二个要点；3. 最后阐述音乐对自己的积极影响，回应第三个要点；同时需注意不能出现真实信息，词数控制在80-120，行文连贯。
【解析】需按照要求补全内容：首先承接开头，点明喜欢的音乐类型为有温暖振奋能量的流行音乐，说明其能在沮丧时让人振作；接着介绍最喜欢的音乐家是创作型歌手，其歌词优美触动内心；最后阐述音乐带来的积极影响，如给予前行的勇气、让生活多彩，整体语言流畅，覆盖所有要点，符合要求。
【答案】Pop music with warm, uplifting energy is my favourite. I like this kind of music because it can cheer me up when I feel upset.
My favourite musician is a singer who writes his own songs. His songs have wonderful lyrics and always touch my heart. I often listen to his music, and it brings me joy and peace.
Music has a positive influence on me. It gives me the courage to keep going whenever I feel down. It also makes my life more colourful. It is a gift that I will always treasure.
【知识点】英语话题书面表达、英语征文写作
【点评】本文紧扣“我与音乐”主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，情感真挚，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.5