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假如你是李华,近期将作为志愿者带领学校交换生参观美术馆the Art Museum,请你用英语写一篇短文介绍参观美术馆的注意事项。
内容包括:
1. 保持安静;
2. 排队入馆;
3. 拍照时关闭闪光灯flash;
4. ……
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 60词左右。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一、二人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①遵守规则
②迟到
③准时
④不得不
⑤当然
⑥手机
⑦关掉水、电或煤气
⑧插队
⑨缺席;不在
⑩保持安静
⑪整理床铺;铺床
⑫闲逛;常去某处
⑬集中注意力、精力等于
⑭思考;考虑
2. 句型仿写
①Don't be late for school.教材p.10 1a
句型:祈使句的否定句
仿写:不要发出噪声。
②Wear the school uniform.教材p.10 1a
句型:祈使句的肯定句
仿写:请保持安静。
③Put up your hand if you want to ask your teacher a question.教材p.10 1a
句型:if引导的条件状语从句
仿写:如果你想了解更多,请让我知道。
连句成篇
假如你是李华,近期将作为志愿者带领学校交换生参观美术馆the Art Museum,请你用英语写一篇短文介绍参观美术馆的注意事项。
内容包括:
1. 保持安静;
2. 排队入馆;
3. 拍照时关闭闪光灯flash;
4. ……
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
3. 60词左右。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一、二人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①遵守规则
②迟到
③准时
④不得不
⑤当然
⑥手机
⑦关掉水、电或煤气
⑧插队
⑨缺席;不在
⑩保持安静
⑪整理床铺;铺床
⑫闲逛;常去某处
⑬集中注意力、精力等于
⑭思考;考虑
2. 句型仿写
①Don't be late for school.教材p.10 1a
句型:祈使句的否定句
仿写:不要发出噪声。
②Wear the school uniform.教材p.10 1a
句型:祈使句的肯定句
仿写:请保持安静。
③Put up your hand if you want to ask your teacher a question.教材p.10 1a
句型:if引导的条件状语从句
仿写:如果你想了解更多,请让我知道。
连句成篇
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①follow rules ②late for
③on time ④have to ⑤of course
⑥mobile phone ⑦turn off
⑧jump the queue ⑨absent from
⑩keep quiet ⑪make sb's / the bed
⑫hang out ⑬focus on ⑭think about
2. 句型仿写
①Don't make noise.
②Please keep quiet.
③If you want to know more, please let
me know.
【连句成篇】
Hello, everyone! Welcome to the Art
Museum. Now let me tell you some
important rules before the visit.
Firstly, please keep quiet. Don't make
noise. Secondly, don't jump the queue. It is
very important to wait your turn. This will
help us enjoy the exhibits better. Besides,
we are not allowed to use flash. Flash will
damage the exhibits. Finally, make sure you
bring a notebook in order to take notes.
Most of the exhibits in the museum are
full of history and stories. If you want to
know more, please let me know. I'm glad to
help you.
1. 主题词块
①follow rules ②late for
③on time ④have to ⑤of course
⑥mobile phone ⑦turn off
⑧jump the queue ⑨absent from
⑩keep quiet ⑪make sb's / the bed
⑫hang out ⑬focus on ⑭think about
2. 句型仿写
①Don't make noise.
②Please keep quiet.
③If you want to know more, please let
me know.
【连句成篇】
Hello, everyone! Welcome to the Art
Museum. Now let me tell you some
important rules before the visit.
Firstly, please keep quiet. Don't make
noise. Secondly, don't jump the queue. It is
very important to wait your turn. This will
help us enjoy the exhibits better. Besides,
we are not allowed to use flash. Flash will
damage the exhibits. Finally, make sure you
bring a notebook in order to take notes.
Most of the exhibits in the museum are
full of history and stories. If you want to
know more, please let me know. I'm glad to
help you.
解析
【分析】
本题是英语应用文写作任务，要求以李华的身份向交换生介绍参观美术馆的注意事项。解题思路需遵循给定的思维导图结构：1. 开篇问候并点明写作主旨（告知美术馆参观规则）；2. 主体部分分点列出规则，需包含题目要求的“保持安静、排队入馆、拍照关闭闪光灯”，并适当补充合理内容（如带笔记本），用连接词使条理清晰；3. 结尾表达乐意提供帮助，呼应主旨。写作时注意人称（第一、二人称）、时态（一般现在时），运用学过的祈使句、if条件状语从句等句型，控制字数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇：用“Hello, everyone! Welcome to the Art Museum. Now let me tell you some important rules before the visit.”点明主旨，符合开篇点题要求；
2. 主体：分点阐述规则：
Firstly，用祈使句说明保持安静：“please keep quiet. Don't make noise.”；
Secondly，说明排队入馆：“don't jump the queue. It is very important to wait your turn.”；
Besides，说明拍照需关闪光灯：“we are not allowed to use flash. Flash will damage the exhibits.”；
Finally，适当发挥补充带笔记本的内容：“make sure you bring a notebook in order to take notes.”；
3. 结尾：用“If you want to know more, please let me know. I'm glad to help you.”呼应要求，表达乐意帮忙。
整个过程条理清晰，涵盖所有要求内容，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! Welcome to the Art Museum. Now let me tell you some important rules before the visit.
Firstly, please keep quiet. Don't make noise. Secondly, don't jump the queue. It is very important to wait your turn. This will help us enjoy the exhibits better. Besides, we are not allowed to use flash. Flash will damage the exhibits. Finally, make sure you bring a notebook in order to take notes. Most of the exhibits in the museum are full of history and stories. If you want to know more, please let me know. I'm glad to help you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，祈使句，条件状语从句
【点评】
本篇写作严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰，涵盖所有规定内容，适当发挥合理，语言准确通顺，运用了祈使句、if条件状语从句等常用句型，符合初中英语写作的要求，能很好地考察学生的应用文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语应用文写作任务，要求以李华的身份向交换生介绍参观美术馆的注意事项。解题思路需遵循给定的思维导图结构：1. 开篇问候并点明写作主旨（告知美术馆参观规则）；2. 主体部分分点列出规则，需包含题目要求的“保持安静、排队入馆、拍照关闭闪光灯”，并适当补充合理内容（如带笔记本），用连接词使条理清晰；3. 结尾表达乐意提供帮助，呼应主旨。写作时注意人称（第一、二人称）、时态（一般现在时），运用学过的祈使句、if条件状语从句等句型，控制字数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇：用“Hello, everyone! Welcome to the Art Museum. Now let me tell you some important rules before the visit.”点明主旨，符合开篇点题要求；
2. 主体：分点阐述规则：
Firstly，用祈使句说明保持安静：“please keep quiet. Don't make noise.”；
Secondly，说明排队入馆：“don't jump the queue. It is very important to wait your turn.”；
Besides，说明拍照需关闪光灯：“we are not allowed to use flash. Flash will damage the exhibits.”；
Finally，适当发挥补充带笔记本的内容：“make sure you bring a notebook in order to take notes.”；
3. 结尾：用“If you want to know more, please let me know. I'm glad to help you.”呼应要求，表达乐意帮忙。
整个过程条理清晰，涵盖所有要求内容，语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! Welcome to the Art Museum. Now let me tell you some important rules before the visit.
Firstly, please keep quiet. Don't make noise. Secondly, don't jump the queue. It is very important to wait your turn. This will help us enjoy the exhibits better. Besides, we are not allowed to use flash. Flash will damage the exhibits. Finally, make sure you bring a notebook in order to take notes. Most of the exhibits in the museum are full of history and stories. If you want to know more, please let me know. I'm glad to help you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，祈使句，条件状语从句
【点评】
本篇写作严格遵循题目要求，结构清晰，涵盖所有规定内容，适当发挥合理，语言准确通顺，运用了祈使句、if条件状语从句等常用句型，符合初中英语写作的要求，能很好地考察学生的应用文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
