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假如你是李华，你的朋友 Mike 第一次到中国家庭做客。请你根据下表内容，给他写一封信，向他介绍中国的餐桌礼仪并提出建议。
Table Manners in China
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；（3）不少于 80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
I heard that you are going to visit a Chinese family. Here are some table manners you should know.
Yours，
Li Hua
分数：
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
假如你是李华，你的朋友 Mike 第一次到中国家庭做客。请你根据下表内容，给他写一封信，向他介绍中国的餐桌礼仪并提出建议。
Table Manners in China
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；（3）不少于 80词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike，
I heard that you are going to visit a Chinese family. Here are some table manners you should know.
First, wait to be shown your seat—the host usually arranges seating. During the meal, speak quietly and politely. Don't take too much food at once. It is helpful to see how others behave properly. It's so rude to stick chopsticks upright in a bowl of rice that you should never do it. Also, avoid pointing at people with your chopsticks. Remember to eat up the food unless you're truly full. If you can't finish, it's polite to say "I'm full, thank you." The host may keep offering food, but you can gently refuse after several times.
Always remember, "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." Hope you have a wonderful dinner experience! (共 114 词)
Yours，
Li Hua
分数：
书写：☆☆☆☆☆
结构：☆☆☆☆☆
内容：☆☆☆☆☆
Advice from your teacher：
答案
Dear Mike,
I heard that you are going to visit a Chinese family. Here are some table manners you should know.
First, wait to be shown your seat—the host usually arranges seating. During the meal, speak quietly and politely. Don't take too much food at once. It is helpful to see how others behave properly. It's so rude to stick chopsticks upright in a bowl of rice that you should never do it. Also, avoid pointing at people with your chopsticks. Remember to eat up the food unless you're truly full. If you can't finish, it's polite to say "I'm full, thank you." The host may keep offering food, but you can gently refuse after several times.
Always remember, "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." Hope you have a wonderful dinner experience! (共 114 词)
Yours,
Li Hua
I heard that you are going to visit a Chinese family. Here are some table manners you should know.
First, wait to be shown your seat—the host usually arranges seating. During the meal, speak quietly and politely. Don't take too much food at once. It is helpful to see how others behave properly. It's so rude to stick chopsticks upright in a bowl of rice that you should never do it. Also, avoid pointing at people with your chopsticks. Remember to eat up the food unless you're truly full. If you can't finish, it's polite to say "I'm full, thank you." The host may keep offering food, but you can gently refuse after several times.
Always remember, "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." Hope you have a wonderful dinner experience! (共 114 词)
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
首先，这是一篇面向外国朋友的餐桌礼仪介绍类书信写作题，解题思路如下：
1. 审题明确要求：需涵盖表格中所有“要做”和“不要做”的礼仪内容，字数不少于80词，采用书信格式，语气要友好亲切。
2. 搭建内容结构：承接已给出的开头，先依次阐述表格里的“Dos”，补充细节让内容更具体，比如说明座位由主人安排；再讲解“Don'ts”，点明这些行为的不妥之处；最后补充实用建议，加入合适的谚语提升内容温度，结尾送上祝福。
3. 语言组织：使用符合书信场景的礼貌表达，借助连接词让内容逻辑连贯，整体用一般现在时介绍礼仪规范。
【解析】
1. 承接开头自然切入礼仪介绍，先说明座位安排的细节，引出第一个礼仪要点；
2. 依次讲解用餐时的礼貌行为：轻声交谈、吃完食物，同时补充吃不完时的礼貌表达，丰富内容；
3. 逐一列举禁忌行为，解释行为的失礼之处，让建议更有说服力；
4. 加入谚语“When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”强化入乡随俗的理念，最后送上祝福，使文章结构完整、语气友好；
5. 全文语言流畅，连接词恰当，覆盖所有要点，字数达标，符合书信写作要求。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I heard that you are going to visit a Chinese family. Here are some table manners you should know.
First, wait to be shown your seat—the host usually arranges seating. During the meal, speak quietly and politely. Don't take too much food at once. It is helpful to see how others behave properly. It's so rude to stick chopsticks upright in a bowl of rice that you should never do it. Also, avoid pointing at people with your chopsticks. Remember to eat up the food unless you're truly full. If you can't finish, it's polite to say "I'm full, thank you." The host may keep offering food, but you can gently refuse after several times.
Always remember, "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." Hope you have a wonderful dinner experience! (共 114 词)
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
1. 英语书信写作
2. 餐桌礼仪英语表达
3. 情景交际用语
【点评】
这篇书信完整覆盖了题目要求的所有餐桌礼仪要点，内容充实且有合理发挥；语言流畅自然，连接词的使用让逻辑清晰；加入谚语增强了文章的感染力，完全符合给外国朋友提建议的友好语境，是一篇优秀的书信范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，这是一篇面向外国朋友的餐桌礼仪介绍类书信写作题，解题思路如下：
1. 审题明确要求：需涵盖表格中所有“要做”和“不要做”的礼仪内容，字数不少于80词，采用书信格式，语气要友好亲切。
2. 搭建内容结构：承接已给出的开头，先依次阐述表格里的“Dos”，补充细节让内容更具体，比如说明座位由主人安排；再讲解“Don'ts”，点明这些行为的不妥之处；最后补充实用建议，加入合适的谚语提升内容温度，结尾送上祝福。
3. 语言组织：使用符合书信场景的礼貌表达，借助连接词让内容逻辑连贯，整体用一般现在时介绍礼仪规范。
【解析】
1. 承接开头自然切入礼仪介绍，先说明座位安排的细节，引出第一个礼仪要点；
2. 依次讲解用餐时的礼貌行为：轻声交谈、吃完食物，同时补充吃不完时的礼貌表达，丰富内容；
3. 逐一列举禁忌行为，解释行为的失礼之处，让建议更有说服力；
4. 加入谚语“When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”强化入乡随俗的理念，最后送上祝福，使文章结构完整、语气友好；
5. 全文语言流畅，连接词恰当，覆盖所有要点，字数达标，符合书信写作要求。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I heard that you are going to visit a Chinese family. Here are some table manners you should know.
First, wait to be shown your seat—the host usually arranges seating. During the meal, speak quietly and politely. Don't take too much food at once. It is helpful to see how others behave properly. It's so rude to stick chopsticks upright in a bowl of rice that you should never do it. Also, avoid pointing at people with your chopsticks. Remember to eat up the food unless you're truly full. If you can't finish, it's polite to say "I'm full, thank you." The host may keep offering food, but you can gently refuse after several times.
Always remember, "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." Hope you have a wonderful dinner experience! (共 114 词)
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
1. 英语书信写作
2. 餐桌礼仪英语表达
3. 情景交际用语
【点评】
这篇书信完整覆盖了题目要求的所有餐桌礼仪要点，内容充实且有合理发挥；语言流畅自然，连接词的使用让逻辑清晰；加入谚语增强了文章的感染力，完全符合给外国朋友提建议的友好语境，是一篇优秀的书信范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
