典例分析
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter 受邀到一名中国朋友家做客。他不了解去中国家庭做客的礼仪,向你发邮件求助。请你给他写一封回信,告诉他一些基本的礼仪以及你的具体建议。
【审题要领】

【写作框架】

1. 开篇点题——介绍一些中国礼仪→I'm glad to introduce ...
2. 具体列举中国的访客与餐桌礼仪并提纲→(1) We usually shake hands and ...
(2) First,... a good idea to ...
(3) Second,... you should ...
(4) Third,you'd better ...
3. 总结全文,祝愿玩得开心→... you will have a good time.
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句:1. I am going to tell you something about table manners. 我要告诉你一些关于餐桌礼仪的事情。
中间句:1. It's very impolite to keep others waiting. 让别人等是非常不礼貌的。
2. They go out of their way to make me feel at home. 他们想尽办法让我有宾至如归的感觉。
结尾句:1. When in Rome,do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。2. It is polite to express your thanks to the host when you leave. 在你离开的时候向主人表示感谢是礼貌的(行为)。
【美文欣赏】
Dear Peter,
How is it going? I'm glad to introduce some manners when visiting a Chinese family.
We usually shake hands and smile when we meet for the first time. And we usually bring a gift when visiting someone to show our thanks for being invited. At the dinner,there are some table manners. First,as you know,we Chinese use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. It's a good idea to get some practice ahead of time.
Remember:Sticking chopsticks into a bowl of rice is so rude that you should avoid it. Second,when the food is served,you should wait until you're invited to eat. Third,you'd better join the conversation about the big meal and express how much you like it.
I hope these suggestions are helpful and you will have a good time. Email me if you have any other question.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Peter 受邀到一名中国朋友家做客。他不了解去中国家庭做客的礼仪,向你发邮件求助。请你给他写一封回信,告诉他一些基本的礼仪以及你的具体建议。
【审题要领】
【写作框架】
1. 开篇点题——介绍一些中国礼仪→I'm glad to introduce ...
2. 具体列举中国的访客与餐桌礼仪并提纲→(1) We usually shake hands and ...
(2) First,... a good idea to ...
(3) Second,... you should ...
(4) Third,you'd better ...
3. 总结全文,祝愿玩得开心→... you will have a good time.
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句:1. I am going to tell you something about table manners. 我要告诉你一些关于餐桌礼仪的事情。
中间句:1. It's very impolite to keep others waiting. 让别人等是非常不礼貌的。
2. They go out of their way to make me feel at home. 他们想尽办法让我有宾至如归的感觉。
结尾句:1. When in Rome,do as the Romans do. 入乡随俗。2. It is polite to express your thanks to the host when you leave. 在你离开的时候向主人表示感谢是礼貌的(行为)。
【美文欣赏】
Dear Peter,
How is it going? I'm glad to introduce some manners when visiting a Chinese family.
We usually shake hands and smile when we meet for the first time. And we usually bring a gift when visiting someone to show our thanks for being invited. At the dinner,there are some table manners. First,as you know,we Chinese use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. It's a good idea to get some practice ahead of time.
Remember:Sticking chopsticks into a bowl of rice is so rude that you should avoid it. Second,when the food is served,you should wait until you're invited to eat. Third,you'd better join the conversation about the big meal and express how much you like it.
I hope these suggestions are helpful and you will have a good time. Email me if you have any other question.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Peter,
How is it going? I'm glad to introduce some manners when visiting a Chinese family.
We usually shake hands and smile when we meet for the first time. And we usually bring a gift when visiting someone to show our thanks for being invited. At the dinner,there are some table manners. First,as you know,we Chinese use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. It's a good idea to get some practice ahead of time. Remember:Sticking chopsticks into a bowl of rice is so rude that you should avoid it. Second,when the food is served,you should wait until you're invited to eat. Third,you'd better join the conversation about the big meal and express how much you like it.
I hope these suggestions are helpful and you will have a good time. Email me if you have any other question.
Yours,
Li Hua
How is it going? I'm glad to introduce some manners when visiting a Chinese family.
We usually shake hands and smile when we meet for the first time. And we usually bring a gift when visiting someone to show our thanks for being invited. At the dinner,there are some table manners. First,as you know,we Chinese use chopsticks instead of knives and forks. It's a good idea to get some practice ahead of time. Remember:Sticking chopsticks into a bowl of rice is so rude that you should avoid it. Second,when the food is served,you should wait until you're invited to eat. Third,you'd better join the conversation about the big meal and express how much you like it.
I hope these suggestions are helpful and you will have a good time. Email me if you have any other question.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
1. 确定主题为中国家庭做客礼仪,人称用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主。2. 开篇用"I'm glad to introduce some manners when visiting a Chinese family."点题。3. 具体礼仪包括见面握手微笑、带礼物,餐桌礼仪分三点:提前练习用筷子且勿插饭中、等邀请再用餐、参与谈话并表达喜爱。4. 结尾用"I hope these suggestions are helpful and you will have a good time."总结祝愿。
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