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Ⅶ. 书面表达。
假设你是阳光中学八年级的学生李华，你的美国笔友 Mary 给你发来以下邮件，请认真阅读并用英文给 Mary 回一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going?
I heard you went on a school trip last month. How was it? What did you see or learn?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
All the best.
Mary
写作要求：
1. 要求语意连贯，内容完整，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；
3. 词数 60 左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】
一、审题
时态：
人称：
二、思路点拨：
My school trip was... → We went to... → I saw/tried/experienced... → I learned... → (Feelings and thoughts.)
【写作练习】
Dear Mary,
Thanks for your email. Everything is fine. You want to know about my school trip. Let me tell you about it.
I really enjoy my school life. Hope you have a colorful school life, too.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
假设你是阳光中学八年级的学生李华，你的美国笔友 Mary 给你发来以下邮件，请认真阅读并用英文给 Mary 回一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going?
I heard you went on a school trip last month. How was it? What did you see or learn?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
All the best.
Mary
写作要求：
1. 要求语意连贯，内容完整，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；
3. 词数 60 左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
【写作指导】
一、审题
时态：
一般过去时
人称：
第一人称
二、思路点拨：
My school trip was... → We went to... → I saw/tried/experienced... → I learned... → (Feelings and thoughts.)
【写作练习】
Dear Mary,
Thanks for your email. Everything is fine. You want to know about my school trip. Let me tell you about it.
My school trip was really exciting. I went to a Science Museum with my classmates. I saw big machines and colourful lights. I saw a robot that can walk and answer my questions! I learned something about space and rocket. I tried some simple science experiments and experienced the fun of science.
From this experience, I learned that science makes our life easier. I also knew that our country is making great progress in science! I must study hard to play a role in making the world better!
I really enjoy my school life. Hope you have a colorful school life, too.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
【写作指导】
一、一般过去时；
第一人称
【写作练习】
Dear Mary,
Thanks for your email. Everything is fine. You want to know about my school trip. Let me tell you about it.
My school trip was really exciting. I went to a Science Museum with my classmates. I saw big machines and colourful lights. I saw a robot that can walk and answer my questions! I learned something about space and rocket. I tried some simple science experiments and experienced the fun of science.
From this experience, I learned that science makes our life easier. I also knew that our country is making great progress in science! I must study hard to play a role in making the world better!
I really enjoy my school life. Hope you have a colorful school life, too.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
一、一般过去时；
第一人称
【写作练习】
Dear Mary,
Thanks for your email. Everything is fine. You want to know about my school trip. Let me tell you about it.
My school trip was really exciting. I went to a Science Museum with my classmates. I saw big machines and colourful lights. I saw a robot that can walk and answer my questions! I learned something about space and rocket. I tried some simple science experiments and experienced the fun of science.
From this experience, I learned that science makes our life easier. I also knew that our country is making great progress in science! I must study hard to play a role in making the world better!
I really enjoy my school life. Hope you have a colorful school life, too.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【解析】
本题要求给美国笔友Mary写回信，介绍上个月的学校旅行。需采用一般过去时，以第一人称视角，按照“旅行感受-旅行地点-所见所做-收获感悟”的思路写作，语意连贯，内容完整，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Mary,
Thanks for your email. Everything is fine. You want to know about my school trip. Let me tell you about it.
My school trip was really exciting. I went to a Science Museum with my classmates. I saw big machines and colourful lights. I saw a robot that can walk and answer my questions! I learned something about space and rocket. I tried some simple science experiments and experienced the fun of science.
From this experience, I learned that science makes our life easier. I also knew that our country is making great progress in science! I must study hard to play a role in making the world better!
I really enjoy my school life. Hope you have a colorful school life, too.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般过去时运用、校园话题写作
【点评】
本题贴合学生校园生活，考查学生运用英语描述经历、表达个人观点的能力，能有效锻炼学生的英语语言组织与写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求给美国笔友Mary写回信，介绍上个月的学校旅行。需采用一般过去时，以第一人称视角，按照“旅行感受-旅行地点-所见所做-收获感悟”的思路写作，语意连贯，内容完整，词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear Mary,
Thanks for your email. Everything is fine. You want to know about my school trip. Let me tell you about it.
My school trip was really exciting. I went to a Science Museum with my classmates. I saw big machines and colourful lights. I saw a robot that can walk and answer my questions! I learned something about space and rocket. I tried some simple science experiments and experienced the fun of science.
From this experience, I learned that science makes our life easier. I also knew that our country is making great progress in science! I must study hard to play a role in making the world better!
I really enjoy my school life. Hope you have a colorful school life, too.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般过去时运用、校园话题写作
【点评】
本题贴合学生校园生活，考查学生运用英语描述经历、表达个人观点的能力，能有效锻炼学生的英语语言组织与写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
