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Ⅶ. 书面表达。
假如你是生活在美国国家动物园的熊猫“云川”，请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封信。
写作要求：
1. 信中包含所给信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 书写工整，词数 60 左右。
…
【写作指导】
一、审题
话题：
体裁：
时态：
人称：
二、写作要点和词汇联想
1. 来自
2. 我喜欢的食物
3. 中国的象征
4. 朋友少
5. 我的爱好
三、句型提示
1. 我叫云川。
2. 我来自中国四川。
I
3. 我是中国的一种象征。
I’m
4. 我的爱好是爬树和睡觉。
My hobbies are climbing the
5. 我最喜欢吃的食物是竹子。
My favourite food is
6. 我在美国几乎没有朋友，这让我感到孤单。
I hardly have any
7. 我希望人类停止砍伐森林，人与动物和谐相处。
I wish people can stop
【写作练习】
假如你是生活在美国国家动物园的熊猫“云川”，请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封信。
写作要求：
1. 信中包含所给信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 书写工整，词数 60 左右。
…
【写作指导】
一、审题
话题：
介绍动物
体裁：
说明文
时态：
一般现在时
人称：
第一人称
二、写作要点和词汇联想
1. 来自
come from
2. 我喜欢的食物
My favourite food
3. 中国的象征
a symbol of China
4. 朋友少
few friends
5. 我的爱好
My hobby
三、句型提示
1. 我叫云川。
My name
is Yunchuan.
is Yunchuan.2. 我来自中国四川。
I
come
from
Sichuan，China.3. 我是中国的一种象征。
I’m
a symbol
of
China.
China.4. 我的爱好是爬树和睡觉。
My hobbies are climbing the
mountains
and sleeping.
. / I like to climb the mountains
and sleeping.
.5. 我最喜欢吃的食物是竹子。
My favourite food is
bamboo
.6. 我在美国几乎没有朋友，这让我感到孤单。
I hardly have any
friends
in America which makes me feel lonely
.7. 我希望人类停止砍伐森林，人与动物和谐相处。
I wish people can stop
cutting
down
trees and it’s important for us to make a peaceful world.【写作练习】
Dear human beings,
My name is Yunchuan. I'm two years old. I come from Sichuan, China and I'm a symbol of China, too.
My hobbies are climbing the mountains and sleeping. I like eating bamboo best.
Most people like to watch me and I'm popular around the world. That's why I was sent to America.
However, I hardly have any friends which makes me feel lonely. People are cutting down trees so that there are less home for us.
When we are in the zoo, some people might feed us with their food which will make us ill.
I wish people can stop cutting down trees and it's important for us to make a peaceful world. Remember that protecting animals is protecting yourselves. Lovely, pandas.
答案
【写作指导】
一、介绍动物；说明文；一般现在时；第一人称
二、1. come from 2. My favourite food 3. a symbol of China 4. few friends 5. My hobby
三、句型提示 1. My name/I am 2. come; from 3. a symbol; of 4. mountains/sleeping 5. bamboo 6. friends; lonely 7. cutting down
【写作练习】
Dear human beings,
My name is Yunchuan. I'm two years old. I come from Sichuan, China and I'm a symbol of China, too. My hobbies are climbing the mountains and sleeping. I like eating bamboo best. Most people like to watch me and I'm popular around the world. That's why I was sent to America. However, I hardly have any friends which makes me feel lonely. People are cutting down trees so that there are less home for us. When we are in the zoo, some people might feed us with their food which will make us ill.
I wish people can stop cutting down trees and it's important for us to make a peaceful world. Remember that protecting animals is protecting yourselves.
Lovely,
pandas.
一、介绍动物；说明文；一般现在时；第一人称
二、1. come from 2. My favourite food 3. a symbol of China 4. few friends 5. My hobby
三、句型提示 1. My name/I am 2. come; from 3. a symbol; of 4. mountains/sleeping 5. bamboo 6. friends; lonely 7. cutting down
【写作练习】
Dear human beings,
My name is Yunchuan. I'm two years old. I come from Sichuan, China and I'm a symbol of China, too. My hobbies are climbing the mountains and sleeping. I like eating bamboo best. Most people like to watch me and I'm popular around the world. That's why I was sent to America. However, I hardly have any friends which makes me feel lonely. People are cutting down trees so that there are less home for us. When we are in the zoo, some people might feed us with their food which will make us ill.
I wish people can stop cutting down trees and it's important for us to make a peaceful world. Remember that protecting animals is protecting yourselves.
Lovely,
pandas.
解析
【解析】
首先审题，明确话题为介绍动物，体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称；接着根据提示补充相关词汇和句型，完善写作要点；最后组织语言，添加合适细节，撰写符合要求的书信，注意词数。
【答案】
【写作指导】
一、介绍动物；说明文；一般现在时；第一人称
二、1. come from 2. My favourite food 3. a symbol of China 4. few friends 5. My hobby
三、句型提示 1. My name/I am 2. come; from 3. a symbol; of 4. mountains/sleeping; mountains/sleep 5. bamboo 6. friends; lonely 7. cutting down
【写作练习】
Dear human beings,
My name is Yunchuan. I'm two years old. I come from Sichuan, China and I'm a symbol of China, too. My hobbies are climbing the mountains and sleeping. I like eating bamboo best. Most people like to watch me and I'm popular around the world. That's why I was sent to America. However, I hardly have any friends which makes me feel lonely. People are cutting down trees so that there are less home for us. When we are in the zoo, some people might feed us with their food which will make us ill.
I wish people can stop cutting down trees and it's important for us to make a peaceful world. Remember that protecting animals is protecting yourselves.
Lovely,
pandas.
【知识点】
书信写作；说明文写作；词汇运用
【点评】
本题以熊猫视角写作，考查学生对书信格式、一般现在时的运用，以及结合提示组织语言的能力，可提升学生英语写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先审题，明确话题为介绍动物，体裁为说明文，时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称；接着根据提示补充相关词汇和句型，完善写作要点；最后组织语言，添加合适细节，撰写符合要求的书信，注意词数。
【答案】
【写作指导】
一、介绍动物；说明文；一般现在时；第一人称
二、1. come from 2. My favourite food 3. a symbol of China 4. few friends 5. My hobby
三、句型提示 1. My name/I am 2. come; from 3. a symbol; of 4. mountains/sleeping; mountains/sleep 5. bamboo 6. friends; lonely 7. cutting down
【写作练习】
Dear human beings,
My name is Yunchuan. I'm two years old. I come from Sichuan, China and I'm a symbol of China, too. My hobbies are climbing the mountains and sleeping. I like eating bamboo best. Most people like to watch me and I'm popular around the world. That's why I was sent to America. However, I hardly have any friends which makes me feel lonely. People are cutting down trees so that there are less home for us. When we are in the zoo, some people might feed us with their food which will make us ill.
I wish people can stop cutting down trees and it's important for us to make a peaceful world. Remember that protecting animals is protecting yourselves.
Lovely,
pandas.
【知识点】
书信写作；说明文写作；词汇运用
【点评】
本题以熊猫视角写作，考查学生对书信格式、一般现在时的运用，以及结合提示组织语言的能力，可提升学生英语写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
