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假如你是李华，你校英文报正在征稿，主题为“My Music Story”，请你根据提示写一篇短文分享你的音乐故事。
提示：
1. What kind of music do you like best? Why?
2. What musical instrument can you play? How did you learn it?
3. What role does music play in your daily life?
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实信息(校名、姓名、地名等)；
4. 词数80左右。
My Music Story
假如你是李华，你校英文报正在征稿，主题为“My Music Story”，请你根据提示写一篇短文分享你的音乐故事。
提示：
1. What kind of music do you like best? Why?
2. What musical instrument can you play? How did you learn it?
3. What role does music play in your daily life?
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实信息(校名、姓名、地名等)；
4. 词数80左右。
My Music Story
答案
My Music Story
Of all music types, I love soft music best, because its gentle melodies always make me feel peaceful after busy schoolwork.
I can play the piano. When I was 7, my mother took me to a piano training class, and I became interested in it right away. With my music teacher's help, I have kept practicing it for 5 years.
Music is a very important part of my life. It cheers me up when I feel upset, and brings me lots of warm and happy moments.
Of all music types, I love soft music best, because its gentle melodies always make me feel peaceful after busy schoolwork.
I can play the piano. When I was 7, my mother took me to a piano training class, and I became interested in it right away. With my music teacher's help, I have kept practicing it for 5 years.
Music is a very important part of my life. It cheers me up when I feel upset, and brings me lots of warm and happy moments.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题应用文写作，要求围绕“My Music Story”主题，覆盖三个提示要点：喜欢的音乐类型及原因、会的乐器与学习经历、音乐在生活中的作用。解题思路为：先确定核心内容，紧扣提示点组织素材，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，控制词数在80左右，且不出现真实信息，最终形成符合要求的短文。
【解析】
首先点明最喜欢的音乐类型及原因：Of all music types, I love soft music best, because its gentle melodies always make me feel peaceful after busy schoolwork. 接着介绍会的乐器及学习经历：I can play the piano. When I was 7, my mother took me to a piano training class, and I became interested in it right away. With my music teacher's help, I have kept practicing it for 5 years. 最后阐述音乐的作用：Music is a very important part of my life. It cheers me up when I feel upset, and brings me lots of warm and happy moments. 全程紧扣要求，覆盖所有提示，语句连贯，符合词数规范。
【答案】
My Music Story
Of all music types, I love soft music best, because its gentle melodies always make me feel peaceful after busy schoolwork.
I can play the piano. When I was 7, my mother took me to a piano training class, and I became interested in it right away. With my music teacher's help, I have kept practicing it for 5 years.
Music is a very important part of my life. It cheers me up when I feel upset, and brings me lots of warm and happy moments.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、应用文写作、要点表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，语言流畅自然，逻辑清晰，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文，能为学生提供清晰的写作思路。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题应用文写作，要求围绕“My Music Story”主题，覆盖三个提示要点：喜欢的音乐类型及原因、会的乐器与学习经历、音乐在生活中的作用。解题思路为：先确定核心内容，紧扣提示点组织素材，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，控制词数在80左右，且不出现真实信息，最终形成符合要求的短文。
【解析】
首先点明最喜欢的音乐类型及原因：Of all music types, I love soft music best, because its gentle melodies always make me feel peaceful after busy schoolwork. 接着介绍会的乐器及学习经历：I can play the piano. When I was 7, my mother took me to a piano training class, and I became interested in it right away. With my music teacher's help, I have kept practicing it for 5 years. 最后阐述音乐的作用：Music is a very important part of my life. It cheers me up when I feel upset, and brings me lots of warm and happy moments. 全程紧扣要求，覆盖所有提示，语句连贯，符合词数规范。
【答案】
My Music Story
Of all music types, I love soft music best, because its gentle melodies always make me feel peaceful after busy schoolwork.
I can play the piano. When I was 7, my mother took me to a piano training class, and I became interested in it right away. With my music teacher's help, I have kept practicing it for 5 years.
Music is a very important part of my life. It cheers me up when I feel upset, and brings me lots of warm and happy moments.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、应用文写作、要点表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，语言流畅自然，逻辑清晰，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文，能为学生提供清晰的写作思路。
【难度系数】
0.5
