四、书面表达
假设你是东湖路中学七年级(5)班的学生Wendy,你看到了《时代英语报》发布的一则俱乐部招新启事。请根据启事的内容与要求,用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入其中一个俱乐部。

注意事项:1. 电子邮件须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数不少于70词,电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

假设你是东湖路中学七年级(5)班的学生Wendy,你看到了《时代英语报》发布的一则俱乐部招新启事。请根据启事的内容与要求,用英语写一封电子邮件申请加入其中一个俱乐部。
注意事项:1. 电子邮件须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数不少于70词,电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
答案
One possible version:
Dear teachers,
I want to join the Basketball Club. I enjoy playing basketball. I'm always full of energy. I like making friends with others. I can help them with their problems. I can make my friends feel happy when they are sad. I'm also good at playing the piano. I am friendly to my classmates. I hope to make more friends in the Basketball Club and do sports together. I hope to keep fit by playing basketball.
I will be happy if I can join the club.
Best wishes,
Wendy
(70 words)
Dear teachers,
I want to join the Basketball Club. I enjoy playing basketball. I'm always full of energy. I like making friends with others. I can help them with their problems. I can make my friends feel happy when they are sad. I'm also good at playing the piano. I am friendly to my classmates. I hope to make more friends in the Basketball Club and do sports together. I hope to keep fit by playing basketball.
I will be happy if I can join the club.
Best wishes,
Wendy
(70 words)
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达中的申请信写作题,要求以东湖路中学七年级(5)班学生Wendy的身份,向《时代英语报》的俱乐部招新方写邮件申请加入某一俱乐部。解题思路:1. 明确身份与写作目的(申请加入俱乐部);2. 确定申请的俱乐部;3. 梳理写作要点:说明自身对该俱乐部项目的喜爱、自身优势、加入后的期望;4. 遵循邮件格式,使用合适礼貌用语,确保语句通顺、词数达标。
【解析】根据题目要求,以Wendy的身份撰写申请邮件,需包含申请加入的俱乐部、自身相关优势、加入后的期望等内容,同时遵循邮件格式,语句通顺,词数不少于70词。具体写作时,先点明申请加入篮球俱乐部,再说明自身对篮球的喜爱、精力充沛、擅长交友等优势,提及自身的其他特长,最后表达加入后的期望并礼貌收尾。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear teachers,
I want to join the Basketball Club. I enjoy playing basketball. I'm always full of energy. I like making friends with others. I can help them with their problems. I can make my friends feel happy when they are sad. I'm also good at playing the piano. I am friendly to my classmates. I hope to make more friends in the Basketball Club and do sports together. I hope to keep fit by playing basketball.
I will be happy if I can join the club.
Best wishes,
Wendy
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语书信格式、英语表达个人意愿
【点评】该申请信符合题目要求,明确申请加入篮球俱乐部,涵盖自身优势与加入期望,语句通顺自然,词数达标,符合七年级学生的英语写作水平,是一篇合格的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】根据题目要求,以Wendy的身份撰写申请邮件,需包含申请加入的俱乐部、自身相关优势、加入后的期望等内容,同时遵循邮件格式,语句通顺,词数不少于70词。具体写作时,先点明申请加入篮球俱乐部,再说明自身对篮球的喜爱、精力充沛、擅长交友等优势,提及自身的其他特长,最后表达加入后的期望并礼貌收尾。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear teachers,
I want to join the Basketball Club. I enjoy playing basketball. I'm always full of energy. I like making friends with others. I can help them with their problems. I can make my friends feel happy when they are sad. I'm also good at playing the piano. I am friendly to my classmates. I hope to make more friends in the Basketball Club and do sports together. I hope to keep fit by playing basketball.
I will be happy if I can join the club.
Best wishes,
Wendy
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语书信格式、英语表达个人意愿
【点评】该申请信符合题目要求,明确申请加入篮球俱乐部,涵盖自身优势与加入期望,语句通顺自然,词数达标,符合七年级学生的英语写作水平,是一篇合格的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.7
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