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善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以“Work Together，Enjoy Teamwork”为主题的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可从下表中选择一项或自行确定。
|Teamwork Activities|
|----|
|·take part in a ball match·prepare for a party·clean the classroom·make a poster(海报)|·make a survey(调查)·join in a relay race(接力赛)·do social practice(社会实践)·...|
【注意】1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
2.词数：90 - 110。
参考词汇(仅供选择使用)：
teamwork(团队合作) work with(与……合作)
team spirit(团队精神) make an effort to(努力去……)
善于合作是一种重要能力。近期你校英语社团将举办以“Work Together，Enjoy Teamwork”为主题的征文活动。请写一篇英语短文，介绍你与他人合作的一次活动经历并谈谈你的感受。活动内容可从下表中选择一项或自行确定。
|Teamwork Activities|
|----|
|·take part in a ball match·prepare for a party·clean the classroom·make a poster(海报)|·make a survey(调查)·join in a relay race(接力赛)·do social practice(社会实践)·...|
【注意】1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
2.词数：90 - 110。
参考词汇(仅供选择使用)：
teamwork(团队合作) work with(与……合作)
team spirit(团队精神) make an effort to(努力去……)
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life.
I remember that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance.
After that, I realized this was a team sport. I should work together with other teammates.
All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children's social skills, but also develop their communication skills.
答案
One possible version
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life.
I remember that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance. After that, I realized this was a team sport. I should work together with other teammates.
All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children's social skills, but also develop their communication skills.
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life.
I remember that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance. After that, I realized this was a team sport. I should work together with other teammates.
All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children's social skills, but also develop their communication skills.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：主题为"Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork"，需要介绍一次自身和他人合作的经历，再抒发对应感悟，词数要求90-110，不能出现真实人名校名。我们可以按三步构思：第一步开篇点题，直接引出团队合作的重要性，说明它是实用性很强的能力；第二步从表格给出的活动里选熟悉的校园场景，比如球类比赛，把事件的起因、经过、认知转折写清楚，体现出从忽视协作到明白配合意义的变化；第三步结尾升华，谈本次经历的收获，点明团队合作的价值，过程中合理使用题目给出的参考词汇，控制总词数在要求区间内即可。
【解析】
本篇作文可以按照三段式结构完成：
1. 首段：开门见山点明核心观点，说明团队合作对青少年和成年人都十分重要，它不只是校园场景下需要的技能，更是生活全领域都必备的能力，快速切入主题。
2. 主体叙事段：选用参加足球比赛的经历，用一般过去时叙事：一开始自己想要独自完成进球得分，结果队伍输掉了比赛，之后幡然醒悟这是团队项目，必须和队友协作配合，把事件的起伏写清楚，自然引出对协作的理解。
3. 结尾段：总结感悟，点明团队合作既可以提升社交能力，也能锻炼沟通能力，呼应开篇的主题，完成全文升华。
写作过程中注意规避所有真实个人信息，核对总词数符合90-110的要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life.
I remember that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance. After that, I realized this was a team sport. I should work together with other teammates.
All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children's social skills, but also develop their communication skills.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作
主题作文谋篇布局
时态规范运用
【点评】
这篇范文完全贴合写作主题要求，选取的校园足球比赛经历贴近学生日常，叙事有起伏变化，逻辑流畅自然，合理体现了从个人主义到理解团队协作的认知转变，结尾的感悟升华不生硬，用到了题目给出的相关参考词汇，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实信息，是一篇符合评分标准的优秀参考例文。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心要求：主题为"Work Together, Enjoy Teamwork"，需要介绍一次自身和他人合作的经历，再抒发对应感悟，词数要求90-110，不能出现真实人名校名。我们可以按三步构思：第一步开篇点题，直接引出团队合作的重要性，说明它是实用性很强的能力；第二步从表格给出的活动里选熟悉的校园场景，比如球类比赛，把事件的起因、经过、认知转折写清楚，体现出从忽视协作到明白配合意义的变化；第三步结尾升华，谈本次经历的收获，点明团队合作的价值，过程中合理使用题目给出的参考词汇，控制总词数在要求区间内即可。
【解析】
本篇作文可以按照三段式结构完成：
1. 首段：开门见山点明核心观点，说明团队合作对青少年和成年人都十分重要，它不只是校园场景下需要的技能，更是生活全领域都必备的能力，快速切入主题。
2. 主体叙事段：选用参加足球比赛的经历，用一般过去时叙事：一开始自己想要独自完成进球得分，结果队伍输掉了比赛，之后幡然醒悟这是团队项目，必须和队友协作配合，把事件的起伏写清楚，自然引出对协作的理解。
3. 结尾段：总结感悟，点明团队合作既可以提升社交能力，也能锻炼沟通能力，呼应开篇的主题，完成全文升华。
写作过程中注意规避所有真实个人信息，核对总词数符合90-110的要求即可。
【答案】
One possible version
Teamwork is important for both teenagers and adults. The ability to work together with others as part of a team is not simply a skill needed at school. In fact, it is also an important skill used in all areas of life.
I remember that I took part in a football match last month. At first, I thought I could score goals by myself. At last, we failed this game because of arrogance. After that, I realized this was a team sport. I should work together with other teammates.
All in all, teamwork can not only strengthen children's social skills, but also develop their communication skills.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作
主题作文谋篇布局
时态规范运用
【点评】
这篇范文完全贴合写作主题要求，选取的校园足球比赛经历贴近学生日常，叙事有起伏变化，逻辑流畅自然，合理体现了从个人主义到理解团队协作的认知转变，结尾的感悟升华不生硬，用到了题目给出的相关参考词汇，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实信息，是一篇符合评分标准的优秀参考例文。
【难度系数】
0.6
