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随着中国经济飞速发展,秀美乡村、名胜古迹引起了你的美国笔友 Peter 的极大关注,他计划今年暑假来中国,进乡村观名胜,并到中国朋友家做客,但他对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少,于是向你寻求帮助。假如你是滕飞,请你根据下面思维导图用英语给 Peter 写一封 80—100 词的电子邮件,向他介绍中国的习俗。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to hear that you're coming to China this summer vacation. I hope to see you soon. Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
Welcome to China. I hope you'll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
随着中国经济飞速发展,秀美乡村、名胜古迹引起了你的美国笔友 Peter 的极大关注,他计划今年暑假来中国,进乡村观名胜,并到中国朋友家做客,但他对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少,于是向你寻求帮助。假如你是滕飞,请你根据下面思维导图用英语给 Peter 写一封 80—100 词的电子邮件,向他介绍中国的习俗。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to hear that you're coming to China this summer vacation. I hope to see you soon. Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
Welcome to China. I hope you'll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
答案
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to hear that you're coming to China this summer vacation. I hope to see you soon.
Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
First, when meeting people in China, we usually shake hands and smile. It's polite to greet others warmly and talk about general topics like the weather or hobbies. Next, for table manners, remember to use chopsticks correctly. Never stick them into your bowl—it is not polite. Also, avoid pointing at people with chopsticks. Wait until elderly people start eating before you begin. Finally, if you visit a Chinese home, take a small gift like fruit or tea to show respect. And remember, always knock at the door before entering.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
Welcome to China. I hope you'll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to hear that you're coming to China this summer vacation. I hope to see you soon.
Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
First, when meeting people in China, we usually shake hands and smile. It's polite to greet others warmly and talk about general topics like the weather or hobbies. Next, for table manners, remember to use chopsticks correctly. Never stick them into your bowl—it is not polite. Also, avoid pointing at people with chopsticks. Wait until elderly people start eating before you begin. Finally, if you visit a Chinese home, take a small gift like fruit or tea to show respect. And remember, always knock at the door before entering.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
Welcome to China. I hope you'll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
解析
【分析】
本题要求以滕飞的身份给美国笔友Peter写80-100词的电子邮件，介绍中国习俗，需结合思维导图的三个核心模块（问候礼仪、餐桌礼仪、做客规则），开头结尾已给出，要符合英语邮件的礼貌语气，涵盖思维导图所有要点，语言通顺自然。解题思路：先梳理思维导图各模块对应的内容，将其转化为符合英语表达的句子，补充少量合理细节让内容完整，控制词数在要求范围内，确保逻辑清晰、符合邮件表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开头，分三个方面介绍中国习俗：
问候礼仪：对应思维导图的“shake hands; talk about”，写“First, when meeting people, we usually shake hands and greet warmly, and it’s polite to talk about general topics like weather or hobbies.”
餐桌礼仪：对应“use chopsticks; point at”，补充合理细节（如正确用筷的提醒），写“Next, for table manners, use chopsticks properly—never point at others with them, and wait for elders to start eating.”
做客规则：对应“take a small gift; knock at”，写“Finally, when visiting a Chinese home, take a small gift like fruit, and remember to knock at the door before entering.”
2. 补充一句礼貌过渡语，衔接已给结尾，确保内容完整、词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to hear that you're coming to China this summer vacation. I hope to see you soon.
Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
First, when meeting people in China, we usually shake hands and smile. It's polite to greet others warmly and talk about general topics like the weather or hobbies. Next, for table manners, remember to use chopsticks correctly. Never stick them into your bowl—it is not polite. Also, avoid pointing at people with chopsticks. Wait until elderly people start eating before you begin. Finally, if you visit a Chinese home, take a small gift like fruit or tea to show respect. And remember, always knock at the door before entering.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
Welcome to China. I hope you'll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
【知识点】
英语书面表达、中国习俗英语介绍、邮件写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，结合思维导图所有要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，语言通顺自然，符合英语邮件的表达习惯，词数达标，能准确向笔友介绍中国相关习俗。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以滕飞的身份给美国笔友Peter写80-100词的电子邮件，介绍中国习俗，需结合思维导图的三个核心模块（问候礼仪、餐桌礼仪、做客规则），开头结尾已给出，要符合英语邮件的礼貌语气，涵盖思维导图所有要点，语言通顺自然。解题思路：先梳理思维导图各模块对应的内容，将其转化为符合英语表达的句子，补充少量合理细节让内容完整，控制词数在要求范围内，确保逻辑清晰、符合邮件表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开头，分三个方面介绍中国习俗：
问候礼仪：对应思维导图的“shake hands; talk about”，写“First, when meeting people, we usually shake hands and greet warmly, and it’s polite to talk about general topics like weather or hobbies.”
餐桌礼仪：对应“use chopsticks; point at”，补充合理细节（如正确用筷的提醒），写“Next, for table manners, use chopsticks properly—never point at others with them, and wait for elders to start eating.”
做客规则：对应“take a small gift; knock at”，写“Finally, when visiting a Chinese home, take a small gift like fruit, and remember to knock at the door before entering.”
2. 补充一句礼貌过渡语，衔接已给结尾，确保内容完整、词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm very happy to hear that you're coming to China this summer vacation. I hope to see you soon.
Now let me tell you something about customs and manners in our country.
First, when meeting people in China, we usually shake hands and smile. It's polite to greet others warmly and talk about general topics like the weather or hobbies. Next, for table manners, remember to use chopsticks correctly. Never stick them into your bowl—it is not polite. Also, avoid pointing at people with chopsticks. Wait until elderly people start eating before you begin. Finally, if you visit a Chinese home, take a small gift like fruit or tea to show respect. And remember, always knock at the door before entering.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask!
Welcome to China. I hope you'll have a wonderful time in our country.
Yours,
Teng Fei
【知识点】
英语书面表达、中国习俗英语介绍、邮件写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，结合思维导图所有要点，内容完整，逻辑清晰，语言通顺自然，符合英语邮件的表达习惯，词数达标，能准确向笔友介绍中国相关习俗。
【难度系数】
0.5
