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八、书面表达(满分 25 分)
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Mark 给你发了一封求助邮件。请你阅读邮件内容并进行回复。
要求：
1. 词数 90 左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 包括至少三条建议，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mark，
I'm glad to hear from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Mark 给你发了一封求助邮件。请你阅读邮件内容并进行回复。
要求：
1. 词数 90 左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 包括至少三条建议，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mark，
I'm glad to hear from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Mark,
I'm glad to hear from you. And it's my pleasure to give you some suggestions on Chinese table manners.
First, don't start eating until the host gives a sign. In Chinese culture, the host or the eldest person at the table lifts their chopsticks first after the dishes are served. Since the use of chopsticks is a must when eating Chinese food, there are some basic manners you should know. You're not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food. And it's impolite to play or point at people with them. Besides, you'd better choose dishes that are close to you.
I hope you can enjoy the dinner and have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mark,
I'm glad to hear from you. And it's my pleasure to give you some suggestions on Chinese table manners.
First, don't start eating until the host gives a sign. In Chinese culture, the host or the eldest person at the table lifts their chopsticks first after the dishes are served. Since the use of chopsticks is a must when eating Chinese food, there are some basic manners you should know. You're not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food. And it's impolite to play or point at people with them. Besides, you'd better choose dishes that are close to you.
I hope you can enjoy the dinner and have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份回复英国朋友Mark的求助邮件，核心是围绕中国餐桌礼仪给出至少三条合理建议，需符合邮件格式、词数要求及行文连贯。解题思路：1. 承接邮件开头，先表达乐意提供帮助；2. 选取3条常见实用的中国餐桌礼仪（如等主人先动筷、筷子使用禁忌、夹菜注意事项）；3. 组织语言保持礼貌自然，控制词数，避免出现真实个人信息。
【解析】首先，开头衔接已给内容，说明乐意提供餐桌礼仪建议；接着分点阐述三条核心建议：① 用餐前需等主人或长辈先动筷，这是中国餐桌的基本礼仪；② 筷子不能插在食物中，也不能用筷子指向他人，属于筷子使用的禁忌；③ 夹取自己附近的菜品，不要随意翻动远处的菜肴；最后表达祝福，完成邮件收尾。写作时需注意语句通顺，符合邮件的礼貌语气，词数控制在90左右。
【答案】
Dear Mark,
I'm glad to hear from you. And it's my pleasure to give you some suggestions on Chinese table manners.
First, don't start eating until the host gives a sign. In Chinese culture, the host or the eldest person at the table lifts their chopsticks first after the dishes are served. Since the use of chopsticks is a must when eating Chinese food, there are some basic manners you should know. You're not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food. And it's impolite to play or point at people with them. Besides, you'd better choose dishes that are close to you.
I hope you can enjoy the dinner and have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、书信写作、跨文化交际
【点评】本题结合跨文化知识考查英语书面表达能力，既要求学生运用所学语言描述文化习俗，又培养学生的文化意识，写作时需保证内容完整、语句连贯、符合格式要求，是对语言运用能力的综合考查。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先，开头衔接已给内容，说明乐意提供餐桌礼仪建议；接着分点阐述三条核心建议：① 用餐前需等主人或长辈先动筷，这是中国餐桌的基本礼仪；② 筷子不能插在食物中，也不能用筷子指向他人，属于筷子使用的禁忌；③ 夹取自己附近的菜品，不要随意翻动远处的菜肴；最后表达祝福，完成邮件收尾。写作时需注意语句通顺，符合邮件的礼貌语气，词数控制在90左右。
【答案】
Dear Mark,
I'm glad to hear from you. And it's my pleasure to give you some suggestions on Chinese table manners.
First, don't start eating until the host gives a sign. In Chinese culture, the host or the eldest person at the table lifts their chopsticks first after the dishes are served. Since the use of chopsticks is a must when eating Chinese food, there are some basic manners you should know. You're not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food. And it's impolite to play or point at people with them. Besides, you'd better choose dishes that are close to you.
I hope you can enjoy the dinner and have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书面表达、书信写作、跨文化交际
【点评】本题结合跨文化知识考查英语书面表达能力，既要求学生运用所学语言描述文化习俗，又培养学生的文化意识，写作时需保证内容完整、语句连贯、符合格式要求，是对语言运用能力的综合考查。
【难度系数】0.6
