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四、书面表达。
假如你是李华，你校英文报准备举办以“我爱健康，快乐为本”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇题为“How to Live a Sunny Life”的短文投稿。
写作要求:1. 文中须包含以上思维导图中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；3. 词数80左右。
How to Live a Sunny Life
假如你是李华，你校英文报准备举办以“我爱健康，快乐为本”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇题为“How to Live a Sunny Life”的短文投稿。
写作要求:1. 文中须包含以上思维导图中的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；3. 词数80左右。
How to Live a Sunny Life
答案
How to Live a Sunny Life
It's important for us to live a healthy and happy life. Here is my advice.
First, we need to keep physically healthy. We should eat more fresh healthy food instead of junk food. We can exercise every day, such as running or playing ball games, and make sure we have enough sleep.
Second, mental health is also key. We should be kind to people around us. We can take up hobbies like reading to relax, and talk to our friends when we feel down.
If we follow these ideas, we can live a sunny life easily.
It's important for us to live a healthy and happy life. Here is my advice.
First, we need to keep physically healthy. We should eat more fresh healthy food instead of junk food. We can exercise every day, such as running or playing ball games, and make sure we have enough sleep.
Second, mental health is also key. We should be kind to people around us. We can take up hobbies like reading to relax, and talk to our friends when we feel down.
If we follow these ideas, we can live a sunny life easily.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以“How to Live a Sunny Life”为题，结合思维导图信息完成短文。解题思路：1. 明确文章结构：开头引出主题，中间分身体健康、心理健康两部分阐述建议，结尾总结；2. 需包含思维导图中所有要点（吃健康食物、锻炼、善待他人、培养爱好），并适当补充合理内容（如足够睡眠、情绪低落时和朋友交流）；3. 注意词数80左右，避免真实信息，语言通顺。
【解析】1. 开头：点明过健康快乐生活的重要性，引出自己的建议；2. 身体健康部分：说明要吃健康食物代替垃圾食品，每天锻炼（如跑步、打球），保证充足睡眠；3. 心理健康部分：指出要善待周围的人，培养爱好（如阅读），情绪低落时和朋友交流；4. 结尾：总结遵循这些建议就能过上阳光生活。
【答案】How to Live a Sunny Life
It's important for us to live a healthy and happy life. Here is my advice.
First, we need to keep physically healthy. We should eat more fresh healthy food instead of junk food. We can exercise every day, such as running or playing ball games, and make sure we have enough sleep.
Second, mental health is also key. We should be kind to people around us. We can take up hobbies like reading to relax, and talk to our friends when we feel down.
If we follow these ideas, we can live a sunny life easily.
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康主题写作、信息整合写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语书面表达能力，要求学生准确整合给定信息，合理拓展，语言通顺，符合词数要求，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头：点明过健康快乐生活的重要性，引出自己的建议；2. 身体健康部分：说明要吃健康食物代替垃圾食品，每天锻炼（如跑步、打球），保证充足睡眠；3. 心理健康部分：指出要善待周围的人，培养爱好（如阅读），情绪低落时和朋友交流；4. 结尾：总结遵循这些建议就能过上阳光生活。
【答案】How to Live a Sunny Life
It's important for us to live a healthy and happy life. Here is my advice.
First, we need to keep physically healthy. We should eat more fresh healthy food instead of junk food. We can exercise every day, such as running or playing ball games, and make sure we have enough sleep.
Second, mental health is also key. We should be kind to people around us. We can take up hobbies like reading to relax, and talk to our friends when we feel down.
If we follow these ideas, we can live a sunny life easily.
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康主题写作、信息整合写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语书面表达能力，要求学生准确整合给定信息，合理拓展，语言通顺，符合词数要求，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
