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第3步 典例分析
假如你是Helen,你知道你的父母很爱你,但是他们给你立的规矩太多,过于关注你的学习成绩,你感觉他们不理解你。你准备给父母写封信提出自己的看法以及解决方法,词数80左右。
提示:1.父母的规矩:每天打扫房间,晚上不允许和朋友出去玩等；
2.你的看法:太过于严厉,但是也能理解；
3.解决方法:与父母多多交流,希望他们相信自己,允许自己做一些决定。
【审题思路】
1.体裁:应用文。
2.主题:介绍自己的家庭规则,表达自己的看法,并提出解决方法。
3.人称:第一人称。
4.时态:一般现在时。
【写作提纲】
【优秀范文】
Dear Mum and Dad,
I know you love me very much. But there are too many rules in our family. For example,I have to clean up my room every day. I am not allowed to go out with my friends at night. And I'm not even allowed to choose my own clothes. What's more, I have to go to bed by 10:00 every night. And I think you pay too much attention to my exam results.
I know you care about me. However, I think you are too strict with me. Sometimes I really feel upset. I think I should be allowed to make my own decisions. I will try my best to communicate with you.
Love,
Helen
第4步 实战演练
68 英语8年级·上册:WY
假如你是Helen,你知道你的父母很爱你,但是他们给你立的规矩太多,过于关注你的学习成绩,你感觉他们不理解你。你准备给父母写封信提出自己的看法以及解决方法,词数80左右。
提示:1.父母的规矩:每天打扫房间,晚上不允许和朋友出去玩等；
2.你的看法:太过于严厉,但是也能理解；
3.解决方法:与父母多多交流,希望他们相信自己,允许自己做一些决定。
【审题思路】
1.体裁:应用文。
2.主题:介绍自己的家庭规则,表达自己的看法,并提出解决方法。
3.人称:第一人称。
4.时态:一般现在时。
【写作提纲】
【优秀范文】
Dear Mum and Dad,
I know you love me very much. But there are too many rules in our family. For example,I have to clean up my room every day. I am not allowed to go out with my friends at night. And I'm not even allowed to choose my own clothes. What's more, I have to go to bed by 10:00 every night. And I think you pay too much attention to my exam results.
I know you care about me. However, I think you are too strict with me. Sometimes I really feel upset. I think I should be allowed to make my own decisions. I will try my best to communicate with you.
Love,
Helen
第4步 实战演练
68 英语8年级·上册:WY
答案
Dear Mum and Dad,
I know you love me so much. But there are lots of rules at home. I have to clean up my room every day, and I can't go out with friends at night. I know you care about me, but you are too strict with me and pay too much attention to my grades, so I sometimes feel upset. I hope we can communicate more, and you can trust me and allow me to make some of my own decisions.
Love,
Helen
I know you love me so much. But there are lots of rules at home. I have to clean up my room every day, and I can't go out with friends at night. I know you care about me, but you are too strict with me and pay too much attention to my grades, so I sometimes feel upset. I hope we can communicate more, and you can trust me and allow me to make some of my own decisions.
Love,
Helen
解析
【分析】
本题是英语八年级上册的应用文写作题，要求以Helen的身份给父母写一封信。需明确写作要点：涵盖家规（如每天打扫房间、晚上不允许和朋友外出等）、个人看法（理解父母关爱但觉得过于严格，有时感到沮丧）、解决方法（多与父母交流，希望父母信任自己、允许自己做决定）。写作时要遵循书信格式，使用第一人称、一般现在时，语言通顺，覆盖所有要求要点，词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 书信开头：用称呼Dear Mum and Dad，开篇点明知道父母爱自己，引出家里有很多家规；
2. 列举家规：结合提示写出每天打扫房间、晚上不能和朋友外出等具体规则；
3. 表达看法：说明理解父母的关心，但觉得太严格，有时感到沮丧；
4. 提出解决方法：希望多交流，让父母信任自己，允许自己做一些决定；
5. 书信结尾：用Love, Helen署名。
【答案】
Dear Mum and Dad,
I know you love me so much. But there are lots of rules at home. I have to clean up my room every day, and I can't go out with friends at night. I know you care about me, but you are too strict with me and pay too much attention to my grades, so I sometimes feel upset. I hope we can communicate more, and you can trust me and allow me to make some of my own decisions.
Love,
Helen
【知识点】
英语书信写作；家庭话题表达；一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活，考查学生应用文写作的基本能力，要求学生准确表达观点、组织信息，符合八年级学生的英语水平，是一道基础的写作练习题。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题是英语八年级上册的应用文写作题，要求以Helen的身份给父母写一封信。需明确写作要点：涵盖家规（如每天打扫房间、晚上不允许和朋友外出等）、个人看法（理解父母关爱但觉得过于严格，有时感到沮丧）、解决方法（多与父母交流，希望父母信任自己、允许自己做决定）。写作时要遵循书信格式，使用第一人称、一般现在时，语言通顺，覆盖所有要求要点，词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 书信开头：用称呼Dear Mum and Dad，开篇点明知道父母爱自己，引出家里有很多家规；
2. 列举家规：结合提示写出每天打扫房间、晚上不能和朋友外出等具体规则；
3. 表达看法：说明理解父母的关心，但觉得太严格，有时感到沮丧；
4. 提出解决方法：希望多交流，让父母信任自己，允许自己做一些决定；
5. 书信结尾：用Love, Helen署名。
【答案】
Dear Mum and Dad,
I know you love me so much. But there are lots of rules at home. I have to clean up my room every day, and I can't go out with friends at night. I know you care about me, but you are too strict with me and pay too much attention to my grades, so I sometimes feel upset. I hope we can communicate more, and you can trust me and allow me to make some of my own decisions.
Love,
Helen
【知识点】
英语书信写作；家庭话题表达；一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活，考查学生应用文写作的基本能力，要求学生准确表达观点、组织信息，符合八年级学生的英语水平，是一道基础的写作练习题。
【难度系数】
0.3
[新考法·鱼骨图提示]为了引导中学生思考规则在学习生活中起到的积极作用,提高中学生的自我管理能力,英文网站To Be Adults以“Rules help me a lot”为主题向中学生展开征文活动。请你以“Rule Follower”为网络昵称投稿,谈论对你帮助很大的规则。
注意:1.须全面反映图文信息；
2.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Editor,
As an eighth-grade student,
Yours,
Rule Follower
注意:1.须全面反映图文信息；
2.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Editor,
As an eighth-grade student,
I understand the importance of following the rules in school. For example, taking notes helps me have a better understanding of the lessons, as I can go over them later. Additionally, listening carefully in class helps me study more easily and better. Moreover, doing morning exercises keeps me healthy and fit. These rules have greatly helped me in my studies. By following these rules, we can improve our self-management skills and achieve our dreams. All in all, I encourage my classmates to follow them as well.
Yours,
Rule Follower
答案
I understand the importance of following the rules in school. For example, taking notes helps me have a better understanding of the lessons, as I can go over them later. Additionally, listening carefully in class helps me study more easily and better. Moreover, doing morning exercises keeps me healthy and fit.
These rules have greatly helped me in my studies. By following these rules, we can improve our self-management skills and achieve our dreams. All in all, I encourage my classmates to follow them as well.
These rules have greatly helped me in my studies. By following these rules, we can improve our self-management skills and achieve our dreams. All in all, I encourage my classmates to follow them as well.
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为“Rules help me a lot”，需结合鱼骨图的三个核心提示（记笔记提升理解、课堂认真学习助力高效学习、锻炼保持健康），补充开头结尾间的内容，全面反映图文信息，满足词数要求，用具体事例说明规则的积极作用，最后总结并鼓励同学遵守规则。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，点明遵守学校规则的重要性；2. 对应鱼骨图的三个要点，分别举例：记笔记帮助更好理解课程、上课认真听讲让学习更轻松高效、做早操保持健康；3. 总结规则对自身的帮助，提及提升自我管理能力，最后鼓励同学遵守规则，符合征文要求。
【答案】
I understand the importance of following the rules in school. For example, taking notes helps me have a better understanding of the lessons, as I can go over them later. Additionally, listening carefully in class helps me study more easily and better. Moreover, doing morning exercises keeps me healthy and fit.
These rules have greatly helped me in my studies. By following these rules, we can improve our self-management skills and achieve our dreams. All in all, I encourage my classmates to follow them as well.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、看图写作
【点评】
本题结合鱼骨图的图文信息考查英语写作，既考查学生提取图文信息的能力，又引导学生认识规则的积极作用，符合中学生的学习生活实际，是一道注重能力培养的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作主题为“Rules help me a lot”，需结合鱼骨图的三个核心提示（记笔记提升理解、课堂认真学习助力高效学习、锻炼保持健康），补充开头结尾间的内容，全面反映图文信息，满足词数要求，用具体事例说明规则的积极作用，最后总结并鼓励同学遵守规则。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，点明遵守学校规则的重要性；2. 对应鱼骨图的三个要点，分别举例：记笔记帮助更好理解课程、上课认真听讲让学习更轻松高效、做早操保持健康；3. 总结规则对自身的帮助，提及提升自我管理能力，最后鼓励同学遵守规则，符合征文要求。
【答案】
I understand the importance of following the rules in school. For example, taking notes helps me have a better understanding of the lessons, as I can go over them later. Additionally, listening carefully in class helps me study more easily and better. Moreover, doing morning exercises keeps me healthy and fit.
These rules have greatly helped me in my studies. By following these rules, we can improve our self-management skills and achieve our dreams. All in all, I encourage my classmates to follow them as well.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、看图写作
【点评】
本题结合鱼骨图的图文信息考查英语写作，既考查学生提取图文信息的能力，又引导学生认识规则的积极作用，符合中学生的学习生活实际，是一道注重能力培养的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.6
