四、书面表达。
假如你明天下午要带你的外国朋友去安徽黄山游玩,请根据提示用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,向他们介绍一下黄山。
提示:1.位于安徽南部,南北长约40千米,东西宽约30千米,是中国最著名的山峰之一;2.有极其美丽的自然景色;3.每年都有大批中外游客来旅游观光。
假如你明天下午要带你的外国朋友去安徽黄山游玩,请根据提示用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,向他们介绍一下黄山。
提示:1.位于安徽南部,南北长约40千米,东西宽约30千米,是中国最著名的山峰之一;2.有极其美丽的自然景色;3.每年都有大批中外游客来旅游观光。
答案
Hello guys, tomorrow afternoon I will take you to visit Mount Huang. Now let me tell you something about it.
Mount Huang lies in the south of Anhui. It is about 40 kilometers long from south to north and 30 kilometers wide from east to west. It is one of the most famous mountains in China. It has quite beautiful natural views. Every year, lots of visitors from China and other countries come here for a trip. I believe we will have great fun there.
Mount Huang lies in the south of Anhui. It is about 40 kilometers long from south to north and 30 kilometers wide from east to west. It is one of the most famous mountains in China. It has quite beautiful natural views. Every year, lots of visitors from China and other countries come here for a trip. I believe we will have great fun there.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇向外国朋友介绍黄山的英语短文,需涵盖提示的三个核心信息,还要结合“明天下午带外国朋友游玩”的语境。解题思路:1. 开头点明要介绍黄山,贴合题目背景;2. 依次翻译提示要点:黄山的地理位置(安徽南部、长宽数据)、在中国的地位、自然景色、游客情况;3. 结尾添加对游玩的期待,控制词数在80左右,语言要简单易懂,确保所有提示信息都覆盖。
【解析】
先以打招呼引入,说明要介绍黄山;接着用方位介词说明黄山位于安徽南部,补充长宽数据,点明其是中国最著名山峰之一;再介绍黄山的自然美景和每年的中外游客;最后表达对游玩的期待,串联成流畅的短文,符合初中英语表达习惯。
【答案】
Hello guys, tomorrow afternoon I will take you to visit Mount Huang. Now let me tell you something about it.
Mount Huang lies in the south of Anhui. It is about 40 kilometers long from south to north and 30 kilometers wide from east to west. It is one of the most famous mountains in China. It has quite beautiful natural views. Every year, lots of visitors from China and other countries come here for a trip. I believe we will have great fun there.
【知识点】
英语书面表达(景点介绍)、方位介词用法、形容词最高级
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,内容完整,涵盖了所有提示信息,语言简洁规范,符合向外国友人介绍景点的语境,是一篇符合要求的初中英语书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一篇向外国朋友介绍黄山的英语短文,需涵盖提示的三个核心信息,还要结合“明天下午带外国朋友游玩”的语境。解题思路:1. 开头点明要介绍黄山,贴合题目背景;2. 依次翻译提示要点:黄山的地理位置(安徽南部、长宽数据)、在中国的地位、自然景色、游客情况;3. 结尾添加对游玩的期待,控制词数在80左右,语言要简单易懂,确保所有提示信息都覆盖。
【解析】
先以打招呼引入,说明要介绍黄山;接着用方位介词说明黄山位于安徽南部,补充长宽数据,点明其是中国最著名山峰之一;再介绍黄山的自然美景和每年的中外游客;最后表达对游玩的期待,串联成流畅的短文,符合初中英语表达习惯。
【答案】
Hello guys, tomorrow afternoon I will take you to visit Mount Huang. Now let me tell you something about it.
Mount Huang lies in the south of Anhui. It is about 40 kilometers long from south to north and 30 kilometers wide from east to west. It is one of the most famous mountains in China. It has quite beautiful natural views. Every year, lots of visitors from China and other countries come here for a trip. I believe we will have great fun there.
【知识点】
英语书面表达(景点介绍)、方位介词用法、形容词最高级
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,结构清晰,内容完整,涵盖了所有提示信息,语言简洁规范,符合向外国友人介绍景点的语境,是一篇符合要求的初中英语书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
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