写作提优
单元写作要求
本单元以“慈善组织”为话题,围绕这一主题探讨全球慈善机构的工作及其对人们生活的积极影响。在写作层面,要求学生叙述一个受助者的真实故事,通过其生活变化来展现某一慈善组织的工作与价值。
写作方法策略
如何写有关“慈善组织”的文章
写这类文章时,首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇简要介绍受助者的背景信息,说明其过去的生活状况及面临的困难;主体部分要具体说明慈善组织援助的方式和过程,并描述受助者目前的生活变化;结尾表达受助者的感激之情,并展望其未来的愿望或计划。

话题写作积累
1. 取得巨大进步
2. 眼睛保健
3. 除……以外(还)
4. 分发传单
5. 儿童权益的捍卫者
6. 错失机会
7. 希望工程成立于 1989 年,它旨在帮助贫困地区的儿童。
8. 多亏了“微笑行动”,许多先天唇裂患儿得以接受手术治疗并康复。
9. 没有人是一座孤岛。
单元写作要求
本单元以“慈善组织”为话题,围绕这一主题探讨全球慈善机构的工作及其对人们生活的积极影响。在写作层面,要求学生叙述一个受助者的真实故事,通过其生活变化来展现某一慈善组织的工作与价值。
写作方法策略
如何写有关“慈善组织”的文章
写这类文章时,首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇简要介绍受助者的背景信息,说明其过去的生活状况及面临的困难;主体部分要具体说明慈善组织援助的方式和过程,并描述受助者目前的生活变化;结尾表达受助者的感激之情,并展望其未来的愿望或计划。
话题写作积累
1. 取得巨大进步
make great progress
2. 眼睛保健
eye care
3. 除……以外(还)
in addition
4. 分发传单
hand out leaflets
5. 儿童权益的捍卫者
a champion of children's rights
6. 错失机会
miss out on
7. 希望工程成立于 1989 年,它旨在帮助贫困地区的儿童。
Project Hope was established/founded/set up in 1989 with the aim of helping children in poor areas.
8. 多亏了“微笑行动”,许多先天唇裂患儿得以接受手术治疗并康复。
Thanks to Operation Smile, lots of children born with lip problems are operated on and cured.
9. 没有人是一座孤岛。
No man is an island.
答案
写作提优
话题写作积累
1. make great progress
2. eye care
3. in addition
4. hand out leaflets
5. a champion of children's rights
6. miss out on
7. Project Hope was established/founded/set up in 1989 with the aim of helping children in poor areas.
8. Thanks to Operation Smile, lots of children born with lip problems are operated on and cured.
9. No man is an island.
话题写作积累
1. make great progress
2. eye care
3. in addition
4. hand out leaflets
5. a champion of children's rights
6. miss out on
7. Project Hope was established/founded/set up in 1989 with the aim of helping children in poor areas.
8. Thanks to Operation Smile, lots of children born with lip problems are operated on and cured.
9. No man is an island.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作积累题,需根据中文提示匹配对应的英语短语或句子。解题时,先明确每个中文表达的含义,回忆英语中对应的固定搭配、常用句型及语法规则,注意短语的正确形式、句子的时态和语态,确保表达准确。
【解析】1. “取得巨大进步”对应固定短语make great progress;2. “眼睛保健”是名词短语eye care;3. “除……以外(还)”常用in addition;4. “分发传单”是hand out leaflets(hand out表示“分发”,leaflet用复数);5. “儿童权益的捍卫者”是a champion of children's rights;6. “错失机会”是miss out on;7. 句子主语Project Hope是单数,“成立”用一般过去时的被动语态was established,“旨在”用with the aim of,故译为Project Hope was established/founded/set up in 1989 with the aim of helping children in poor areas;8. “多亏了”是Thanks to,“先天唇裂患儿”是children born with lip problems,“接受手术治疗并康复”用被动语态are operated on and cured,故译为Thanks to Operation Smile, lots of children born with lip problems are operated on and cured;9. 谚语“没有人是一座孤岛”对应No man is an island。
【答案】1. make great progress
2. eye care
3. in addition
4. hand out leaflets
5. a champion of children's rights
6. miss out on
7. Project Hope was established/founded/set up in 1989 with the aim of helping children in poor areas.
8. Thanks to Operation Smile, lots of children born with lip problems are operated on and cured.
9. No man is an island.
【知识点】英语短语积累、英语句子写作、固定搭配
【点评】本题围绕“慈善组织”话题积累相关英语表达,帮助学生夯实写作基础,需注重平时对常用短语、句型及谚语的积累,确保表达准确规范,是提升英语写作能力的基础练习。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. “取得巨大进步”对应固定短语make great progress;2. “眼睛保健”是名词短语eye care;3. “除……以外(还)”常用in addition;4. “分发传单”是hand out leaflets(hand out表示“分发”,leaflet用复数);5. “儿童权益的捍卫者”是a champion of children's rights;6. “错失机会”是miss out on;7. 句子主语Project Hope是单数,“成立”用一般过去时的被动语态was established,“旨在”用with the aim of,故译为Project Hope was established/founded/set up in 1989 with the aim of helping children in poor areas;8. “多亏了”是Thanks to,“先天唇裂患儿”是children born with lip problems,“接受手术治疗并康复”用被动语态are operated on and cured,故译为Thanks to Operation Smile, lots of children born with lip problems are operated on and cured;9. 谚语“没有人是一座孤岛”对应No man is an island。
【答案】1. make great progress
2. eye care
3. in addition
4. hand out leaflets
5. a champion of children's rights
6. miss out on
7. Project Hope was established/founded/set up in 1989 with the aim of helping children in poor areas.
8. Thanks to Operation Smile, lots of children born with lip problems are operated on and cured.
9. No man is an island.
【知识点】英语短语积累、英语句子写作、固定搭配
【点评】本题围绕“慈善组织”话题积累相关英语表达,帮助学生夯实写作基础,需注重平时对常用短语、句型及谚语的积累,确保表达准确规范,是提升英语写作能力的基础练习。
【难度系数】0.3
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